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SJ6...

@SJ6...

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#621

loved it sooo much..
lobed shaan and his babys part they are sooo cute
cant waiy for a next update..
p.s. only have time to write this, abit busy right know..
xxx

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monika_aa

@monika_aa

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#622

Splendid !!! Tht court room drama ws hillarious !! Khanak knows hm so well !! N she gv hm 1 chance to proove n he managed aftr sm mistecks... Awww khanak finds shan wid ahaan on terrece ...sweet scene... N she cleand n cooked fr hm...awww sweet wife n mother of hz child...loved shanak... Update lil soon ds time plzzz...

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IF_rida

@IF_rida

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#623

fantastic update
shaan and ahaan's moments were super cute
the shanak moments even the whole court scene was fun to read
chandigarh ka court delhi main... lolz
poor ansh and anya their plan always backfire ... but somehow i think it was pure bliss for shaan
he had his baby no their baby... no doubt shaantanu khandelwal's son he was excited in watching a ramp show
hmm so even megha knows abt the trio so now it will awesome foursome
poor nihal... becharya ka kya haal bana diya hoga
lukin fwd update jaldi jaldi.

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May

@The_May_Rose

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#624

🤗 Thanks for the update Shilli...I can't read it tonight😳...But looking forward to this treat tomorrow...Especially after reading some of the comments 😃...

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poo_j

@poo_j

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#625

Unres done in page 87..😊

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Mounika

@ktym

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#626

lovely update...

lol shaan and ahaan together...night out scene was super hilarious!!!

hahah bichara shaan uski jhoot toh pakad gayi...court scene was awesome...

ROFL he doesnt know how to handle the babies...facing hard time in handling his own son...😆

keep updating,...

cant wait for the next update...

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Heer

@heer_85

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#627

awesome update👏, this was hilarious

loved it shilli 👏 u penned down awesomely 😊

omgeee!!!!!!!!! Anay is burning cursing shaan he doesn't know what is going around poor him

shaan is too much, he arranges a fake court and the judge was too funny Alampana omgeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i was laughing like hell this part was hilarious 😆 the dialogues were splendid, shaan defending his wife but

khanak is very smart she knows its fake and agree shaan charges and let Aahan to be with his dad

shaan was trapped in his own plan and now Aan will stay with him 🤣 too good Shilli loved it to the core 😊

Ansh and shaan small action was awesome all plans of Ansh failed and when he come he speaks proudly he is very funny😆

Aan make his dad rush to one room to another i so loved seen shaan like dat n he finally thought how khanak manage all and his little naught kid poor baby is hungry n shaan doesn't know

shaan asked Ashka how to make babies milk and ceralac 😛 and she was laughing at his state 😆

shaan's lappy on the floor and he can't do any thing 😆 Aan watching fashion show awesome most baby like cartoon but Aan is different akhir shaan ka beta joh hai 🤣

sleep took over shaan and naught Aan reach terrace Thank God Khanak was keeping eye on them and he called shaan to inform

bechara shaan pareshaan hogaya 🤣

awwweee!!!!!!!!!!!!! papa and baby terrace peh hi sogai how cute i can imagine shaan curdle with a baby Aan shooo cute !!😊

khanak came at shaan's house check all over and no sign of her two babies ekk bara baby shaan aur naughty Aan heheheh😆

both sleeping peacefully how cute

shaan woke and saw khanak omgeee!!!!!!!!! he wanted coffee and khanak 😆 she said i m not ur cook Poor guy raat koh baby neh pareshan kiya aur subha biwi neh coffee bhi nahi di

khanak kept all in its place clean and neat house

not bad khanak u are so fast

kitchen mein bhi saab ready wow!!!!!!!!!

shaan had a bike race with stranger Meghna tried to stop him but Aanya n Ansh cheering him

thy reached home and saw the same biker and thought he might came to harm Khanak and Aan, khanak n Aan was on terrace and shaan started to fight with the biker, khanak removed the mark and its was Nikhil

if i m not wrong megha's bro right

i thought the right when i read its Nikhil

too good now shaan will be more Jealous n i so wanted to see J shaan awesome Shilli but u end it aabh next update please jaldi dena

can't wait to read more

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snigdhanagar

@snigdhanagar

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#628

fabulous update after reading dis i coudnt control myself fm commenting lolz...

oh goddd all dat was fake...n delhi mein Chandigarh high court🤣 so shaan got custody of aan fr 1 day...😆

u knw since begning i was craving fr father son moment n her it was tooo gud...aan is vryy naughty jst lke his dad😆 hw was watching fashion shw...n in midle of nite he wnt to terrace😲 shaan shuold hav been mre careful...n he broke his dad's laptop ek din mein itna losss😆😆

bt seriously loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!

ooh god ye nihhal kha se aa gya???????????

nxt update soonnn

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ONAego

@ONAego

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#629

Lovely part 😊
Lolzz shantanu really a 'burthal' 😆
Aww so cute n also hilarious was papa&beta's part loved it❤️
U penned each n everything very beautifully shilli⭐️🤗
Waiting 4 next part... thora jaldi update kiya karo! 😊

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May

@The_May_Rose

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#630

OMG!...I love it...Well worth the wait Shilli and totally entertaining!!!👏⭐️...Kya likha hai!😃...Aside from the scenario, I just love how you just catch us with the subtle moments too👍🏼...

From the start, Anay's deadpan humour is just so refreshing😃...Enjoyed his rant in the car and Megha's remark was spot on!...I could just imagine the scene😊...

🤣 The court scene!!!...To think, I was worried Shan would really take her to court...The actors fumbling their lines was awesome...Beeni has to read this!...They actually stole the scene from ShaNak😲😆...

Oh and aiye-hiye, Mrs Khandelwal showing Mr Khandelwal that two can play this game 😉...BTW It reminded me of, one of my favourite ShaNak moments from the show😳...

Bechara Ansh😆...When will any of his plans ever work?...But I suppose, ShaNak are getting closer, even with all the mishaps😊...

Shaan taking care of Ahaan for the night, was just the perfect recipe, for some great moments!...Loved how you showed Khanak enjoying the spectical 😆...It is always touching to see the depth of their love😭😳😊...The way she spoke about Shaan indirectly❤️...Thank goodness she was watching though and saw Ahaan on the terrace😲...Oh and I liked how you showed the father son bonding...As long as Mummy doesn't find out! 😆...The morning scene just filled my heart...I can just imagine my ShaNak with their little one ❤️...Bless them!...

Great to see Megha with 'Mission ShaNak'...And with Nihaal in the picture, I can't wait to see who Shaan will be more posessive about...Khanak or Ahaan?😃...Can't wait to watch...I mean read more😳...

I just want to add one thing, which strikes me about your writing suddenly...You have really done a wonderful job with all the characters and situations Shilli...The way the characters can live modern lives, but can also be comfortable with their traditional roles too 😊...

Please don't take too long with the next update😃...But no pressure...

Edited by The_May_Rose - 12 years ago