ShaNak new love story updated part 52 on page 99 - Page 48

Thanks for the pm shiksha
well written last 2 parts !!
it was a super cute part...reminded me of the sequence played in the show and the way you have described is too cute !!
continue soon !!

awesome update, glad they are together now, can't wait for their wedding!

@ loveshanak- thanks a lot rupali bt dey hd 2 go back or else hw wud hve d story proceeded further

@ angel_9- thank you angel

@ RB81- thanks ramani & dnt worry der wnt b any more f crying scenes for anyone in my fiction

@ _sweetshona- thanks a lot

@ sshriyaa84- thanka a lot shriya n i hd written dis update keeping in mind d chori kiya sequence only

@ AzaraA- thanks a lot zara n yeah it s totally nt an easy job 2 write a ff i agree

@ purvi08- thanks purvi

@ k.krithika- thanks a lot krithika

@ manita- thanks a lot manita n i had written dis update remembering d song sequence only so i m glad dt i made all f u also cherish it 1ce again thru my update

@ adventure_gurl- thank you & dnt worry der wedding vl also happen

ok ppl d next part vl hpefully b up tomorrow so catch up wth it & thanks 2 all those who pressed lyk also

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ok guys as promised i bring d next update for all f u so pls enjoy it

Part 41

They reached home hand in hand & rang the bell of the house. Sunil opened the door & as soon as he opened the door he immediately hugged both of them before letting them come in.

Shaan & khanak were initially surprised at sunil's reaction but then they realized that he & madhvi were really worried about them.

After sunil broke the hug he said:- beta tum dono theek toh ho na

Shaan:- ji dad hum bilkul theek hai

Khanak:- haan aap humari bilkul chinta mat kijiye………………………………..& after a little pause she said dad & looked down & then she looked at shaan who smiled & nodded her head in assurance & once he assured her even she felt comfortable.

After listening dad from her mouth he felt realy gud & he smiled to her & said :- thank you beta

Khanak looked up & said:- thank you kis liye dad

Now khanak was a little comfortable by calling him dad after shaan's assurance & sunil's smile after she called him dad

Sunil:- thank you isiliye beta ki finally tumne mujhe apne dad jaisa samjha toh sahi aur main tumhe bas itna kehna chahta hoon ki jitna pyaar main shaan aur akshay se karta hoon utna hi pyaar main tumse bhi karta hoon

He kept his hand on khanak's head & said:- aur beta maine toh tumhe tumhare bachpan se hi apni beti ka darja se rakha tha aur aaj main yeh jaankar bahut khush hoon ki tum bhi mujhe apna dad maanti ho aur beta kisi bhi cheez ki zaroorat ho ya tum koi bhi problem ho toh yaad rakhna ki tumhare dad aur mom, while speaking dad & mom he pointed towards himself & madhvi who was standing at the back & watching everything with tears in her eyes, hamesha tumhare saath honge aur beta ab se kabhi bhi apne aap ko akela mat samajhna ok

Khanak smiled & nodded her head in a yes & tears welled up in her eyes. Shaan had never seen his dad being so sensitive towards someone & so tears welled up in his eyes also but he controlled them from coming out from his eyes.

Sunil & madhvi also had tears welled up in their eyes & so sunil decided to stop doing serious conversations & make it funny so he said:- aur beta agar yeh shaan tumhe pareshaan kare na toh sabse pehle mujhe batana theek hai

She looked at shaan & then back at sunil & nodded her head in a yes & said:- ok dad

Shaan also decided to make the atmosphere funny & so he said:- waah ab beti mil gayi toh bete ko bhool gaye………………….then he said in a dramatic way:- yehi pyaar tha aapka mere liye

Sunil:- haan main meri beti se zyaada pyaar karta hoon aur ab apni nautanki bandh kar aur tum dono jaao aur thoda aaram kar lo bahut thak gaye hoge na

Shaan & khanak proceeded towards their rooms but they were stopped by a familiar female voice:- itni bhi kya jaldi hai pehle hum se toh mil lo

Shaan & khanak turned to see khushboo & akshay standing & smiling at them & they came to shaan & khanak & shaan & khanak hugged akshay & khushboo

Shaan:- wow bhaiya bhabhi aap log ki flight kitne baje land kari………………anyways I m so happy 2 c u

Akshay:- abhi kuch der pehle hi land kari humari flight aur hum bhi bahut khush hain tum dono ko dekh kar.

Sunil:- chalo bhai ab baatein baad mein kar lena pehle tum sab jaake aaram kar lo…………………..shaan aur khanak abhi abhi aaye ho thak gaye honge tum log jaayo aaram karo

Akshay:- haan tum dono jaake aaram kar lo aur phir hum log tum dono se thodi der baad baat karte hain

Akshay tried to signal something to shaan & khanak but they were not able to understand what he was saying so they decided to talk to him later

Shaan:- ok bhaiya

Both shaan & khanak went to relax for some time & they slept for some time thinking about each other.

Khanak woke up after sometime & went to the kitchen to get some water & the way to the kitchen was through the door of shaan's room.

She was walking but was suddenly pulled into a room & she was about to scream but she recognized the touch.

Shaan kept one hand on her mouth to stop her from shouting & he pulled her by holding her wrist.

He pulled her inside his room & locked his room & pinned her against the door.

Khanak:- shaan yeh tum kya kar rahe ho………………….agar kisi ne dekh liya toh

Shaan:- khanak aaj Sunday hai aur Sunday ko generally sab log apne rooms mein hote hai toh hume koi nahi dekhega………………………….aur dekh bhi liya toh kya hua……………………..aur waise bhi main tumhe bahut miss kar raha tha

Khanak:- acha aur abhi toh hume 2 ghante bhi nahi hue ek doosre ko na dekhe hue aur tum abhi se hi mujhe miss karne lag gaye

Shaan:- toh tum mujhe miss nahi kar rahi thi kya

Khanak:- main kyun miss karungi tumhe

Shaan went close to her & said:- acha tum mujhe miss nahi kar rahi thi

Khanak nodded her head in a no & shaan came closer to her & said:- toh tumhara mere paas…………………mere kareeb aane ka mann nahi kar raha tha

Khanak did not say anything this time & just looked down & blushed & shaan came closer & they were about to kiss each other but were disturbed by the knock on the door.

Khanak panicked thinking who was on the door & akshay's voice came from outside their room

Akshay:- shaan darwaza khol……………..main aur khushboo hain

Shaan & khanak both panicked & could not think of what to do so shaan just hid khanak behind the door & asked her to leave as soon as he distracts akshay & khushboo.

Shaan:- dekho khanak……………..tum ek kaam karo darwaaze ke peeche chup jaao aur jaise hi bhaiya aur bhabhi andar aaye tum chupke se apne room mein chali jaana ok

Khanak nodded her head in a yes & according to the plan she hid behind the door & shaan opened the door & said:- arre bhaiya bhabhi aayiye na andar

Akshay & khushboo entered & as per the plan khanak escaped from there & shaan felt relieved.

Shaan:- arre bhaiya, bhabhi aap log yahan kaise, he 1^st looked at akshay & den at khushboo.

Akshay:- shaan mujhe aur khushboo ko tumse aur khanak se kuch baat karni hai

Shaan got shocked thinking y wud bhaiya n bhabhi suddenly wanted 2 talk abt him & khanak & thousands f questions ver going on in shaan's mind like why does bhaiya n bhabhi wants 2 talk 2 me n khanak????, do they knw abt us?, what if they dnt approve f it, arre nahi dts nt possible dey vl ibviously approve r relationship & in fact they vl b more dan happy coz dey love khanak

Shaan was in his thoughts & his expression changed wth every question he thought sometimes nervousness & then anxiety & then tension & akshay saw his tensed face & looked at khushboo signaling wth his eyes asking her wt happened 2 shaan bt she also signaled wth her eyes saying a no idea

Akshay turned back 2 shaan & said:- shaan………………….shaan kya hua tu itna ghabra kyun raha hai

Shaan:- huh………………..main ghabra…………………nahi main kahan ghabra raha hoon main toh bas yeh pooch raha tha ki aapko mujhse aur khanak se kya baat karni hai aise achanak

Khushboo:- arre shaan woh actually mom aur dad ki anniversary hain na kal iss liye main aur akshay soch rahe the ki kyun na unh ek surprise party de aur isiliye party ki preparations aur ideas ke liye hum dono tumse aur khanak se baat karne aa rahe the

Shaan felt relieved that akshay & khushboo dint knw abt him & khanak & so he said:- oh acha theek hai toh ek kaam karte hain hum khanak ke hi room mein chalte hain………………….woh wahi hogi

Khushboo:- haan theek hai

They started exiting frm shaan's room & went towards khanak's room when khushboo stopped at shaan's door & said:- ek minute

With khushboo almost saying in a sudden way all 3 of them stopped, both shaan & akshay 1^st looked at khsuhboo & den at each other & then turned back 2 khushboo & shaan said

Shaan:- kya hua bhabhi

Akshay:- haan ab kya hua khushboo kuch problem ho gayi hain kya phir se

Khushboo 1^st looked at shaan when he was speaking then at akshay & spoke:- haan akshay ek problem hai actually problem nahi confusion hai

Shaan:- ab kaisi confusion bhabhi

Khushboo:- shaan jab maine aur akshay ne kaha tha ki humein tumse aur khanak se baat karni hai toh tum itna ghabra kyun gaye the

Shaan:- main main ghabraya tha………………..nahi bhabhi main toh nahi ghabraya

Khushboo:-acha nahi ghabraye chalo theek hai nahi ghabraye hoge

Khushboo was convinced dt hw ws khushboo so easily convinced bt felt relieved dt she ws convinced n he dint hve 2 answer any mre questions

Akshay:- ab khushboo khanak ke room mein chalte hain aur sab kuch discuss kar lete hain isse pehle dad aur mom bahar aa jaaye apne room se

Shaan:- haan bhabhi bhaiya is right

All 3 of them went outside shaan's room & entered khanak's room.

hey Shiksha ..🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

hei shiksha,

Hi shiksha

Hey...!!! Loved the update...

Shanak are always disturbed In serial and here also by sumone or the other...

so now there is sunavi's anniversary coming... Waiting for it...

I think khushboo has a doubt on shanak nw...

Continue soon...

Wow!supr update...bt ye shanak ka kiss hua kyu nahi...akkiboobhina bichmaihi tpkte hai..