-Shanak SS- Banwra Mann Final Pg 16

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Sneha Patro

@snehapatro

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#11

lovely start Saaz.......shanak are soooooo cuteeeeee...u know i love that sofa hehe dharam aur harilal study mai leke gaye.....sofa kab room mai bapas ayega saaz......😆
waiting for ur next update..........😃

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iluvmanar

@iluvmanar

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#12

oh finally u started again...thanks yaar...awesum it is.....and waiting 4 the next....

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Daebak

@Daebak

Trailblazer

+ 7

Posted: 14 years ago

#13

Wahhhh !! I soo loved it...

U are filling in the episode gap of RBO....From when Shaan saw Sunny and to the meeting at the restaurant...

Uske Beech ka part you are writing...And its LOVELY !!

*Muahzzz* to you for that !!!

Continue soon !!

Luv,

Vandu

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-SYS-

@-SYS-

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#14

You do love to make us go betaab with the wait after dangling something so yummy in front of us, no?

Loved the tight hug and spooning together! I WANT TO SEE THIS WITH SHANAK!!! Ohhh couldn't you send them an anonymous mail and be like: 'Iss ko apne dramay ka part banao or TRPs ko barhao!'

Sofa talk---> So cute, so natural, so SHANAK! I love that sofa too=D

P.S: I'm still waiting for the epilogue!

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Pooja

@yasharan.love

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#15

It was LOVELY!!!!!!!!!! do continue soon.... and PLZ PM me!!!!

love,

Pooja

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priya

@priya_cool_123

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#16

saaz... loved it.....i loved the sofa part.... it did play a very big role in golden rbo....ha ha....

waitng 4 the next part.... pls add some shanakisms yaar.. i m missing it

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SHANAKFAN

@SHANAKFAN

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#17

good work saaz really loved it...👍🏼

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deepali

@-Deepali-

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#18

Nice update saaz and very well written🤗
I love your Shanak wala SS can't wait pl. update next part soon.😃
Thanks for pm dear😆

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saaaz

@saaaz

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#19

@adventure gurl: Thanks so much

@sampar: yaar, when an FF writer such as you writes me a comment, it does make me super happy

@Aditee: Piramise'bus??!!! Khush??!!😃

@Angel: Thanks

@Bones: Hey you, been awhile..🤗

@Souma: Thanks! about CVs..I don't know re'their compulsions are beyond my understanding anymore

@Imane: Umm'are you reserving your opinion? Or you have reservations about the SS??..edited--- THANK YOU for getting the sofa connection....thank you😃

@Rooj: Thanks dear, I am trying very hard to achieve that combo..let me see'

@Mani: Yes, I know the part was short..I was not very sure how to go from serious to fun and how it would be taken'

@Sneha: HAILA'.you came'😛😃

@Naveen: a big hug..🤗

@Vandoo: I am happy you are happy, as for the rest who knows, mera SS bhi damp squib ban sakta hai!

@SYS: A part of me has decided this is the only way I can deal with my frustration with regard to what has happened in the show'epilogue shall happen over the weekend😊

@Pooja: Thanks, sure..shall PM

@Priya cool: You are too cool!

@Shanakfan: Thanks so much

@Deepa: Thanks re'😛😊

@Deepali: Thanks and my pleasure!'

@all those who pressed like: ME like

@everyone: YES, the sofa is another character in my SS 'just like the letters were in my previous one'now kaash RBO CVs understood what these inanimate objects meant to us'.

Edited by saaaz - 14 years ago

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Krishna

@kubare

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#20

Saaz darling....

God loved it...loved it loved it....loved loved loved the way he hold her spooned up to her...and just like Yumna I hope the CV's show us a Shanak scene just like that....sigh.....

Loved how you have shown both of them dealing wiht their fears individually and trying to put a brave face for one another as they both donot want to trouble the other with what they saw or are going through.

What a beginning and way to end...loved the whole Couch nok jhok in the middle...so Shanak nah...sigh...the couch leaves the room at last....I was all for burning it when it made its grand entry....😆😆😆 as I remember I so wante them to share the same bed....evwen though they were just friends....so we coudl get close tight and uncomfortable situations...but then fel in love with the couch too...😆😆😆

Not nice dear...to get us all hooked and just ending it.....😆😆

So woman post the next part soon!!!!!😡😆😆😆😆