Shanak - Sunny OS (Part 3) Pg - 9

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Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#71

FINALLY!!!

Nok-jhok! I miss it.This was like water for parched lips=D

Love the fact that Khanak's addressing Shaan in her thoughts too.

And YM totally looks like a teenager when she does that pout.So cute.

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Daebak

@Daebak

Trailblazer

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Posted: 14 years ago

#72

Aww !! More Sooraj memories with the choodis...

Hopefully Shaan wont get angry again and infact he should make her wear them there itself ! LOL !!

Very small part !! Continue soon !!

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May

@The_May_Rose

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Posted: 14 years ago

#73

Lovely Zen👏.....Looking forward to the next part....

@Vandu - Shaan also has memories of himself, Khanak and chooryaan.....

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iluvmanar

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Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#74

Zennn....MMUUAAAHHH...thanks a lot..i needed it this tym...its awesome...

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Urooj

@rooj-i

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#75

Haye Zenn!!!

I loved it!

I can't believe their masti even when they are angry...

I'm glad Shaan is realizing his mistake and slowly taking actions toward fixing it.

As for the gift, i thought it would be the walkman. lol but this is good...i wonder what the next update will be like....

update soon!

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Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#76

@ Rooj

Hehe I thought it was either chooriyan(i swear!) or a wind-chime.

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Krishna

@kubare

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#77

Zen darling...aww...really beautifully written👏👏👏..could so see Shanak..loved that nok jhok, the pout..talking to herself while addressing Shaan.....awww miss those by her to him....and what a gift Chooriyan..I guessed so...as thats is the only gift that connects to her name....Oh and could so imagine Sam and Duck the dialogues were them...😆😆😆

Can't wait for the next part from you soon...😃

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saaaz

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Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: rooj-i
Haye Zenn!!!

I loved it!

I can't believe their masti even when they are angry...

I'm glad Shaan is realizing his mistake and slowly taking actions toward fixing it.

As for the gift, i thought it would be the walkman. lol but this is good...i wonder what the next update will be like....

update soon!

tell tell walkman from my shanakisim no??? tell tell....

Arrey choodiyaan has specialness with Shanak in dhulwaadi

walkman would have been total one sided...Shaan ka connection nahin hai na

LOved choodiyaan

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rafia rashid

@rafia 24

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#79

Zenn a lil late but I just read the 3rd part. It was really good 👍🏼 The reaction really seemed true to that of Shaan and Khanak characters. Shaan feeling guilty and Khanak not giving in until he makes up for it. haha she bit his hand 😆. Plus the nokh jokh was too good, and the chooriyan what a touch👏👏👏

cant wait for the last and final part xxxx