FF:Presntn Tinda & Karela-Weird Dastaan:Pt 7D p33

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May

@The_May_Rose

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#121

Great update Rooj👏....Kitna larte hai ye dono😆.....

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Shamima

@-shamima-

Inactive

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Posted: 14 years ago

#122

Haha awe that was so cute how shaan was burning in jealous at his own brother and stopped them lol and haha them arguing again and shaan kissed her shin thinking she was going to respond but our sherni have a slap and a stomp and walked off lol and hmm shaan drinking looking at khanak lol and now he wants to pay back by going with girl in the red lol anyways great update and cant wait to read more 😊

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Sonali

@adventure_gurl

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#123

Rooj loved the update! that was so funny! awesome job! I can't believe I missed this fic before thanks for writing this, we all needed this!😉

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dtu

@sampar

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#124

hahhahah 😆😆 ...superb update.....love shanak.....yaar larte buhat hain dono...😆....haila slap in return to kiss 😆😆....perfect ....cant wait for next part ....

next time update soon

cheers

shai

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saaaz

@saaaz

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#125

HAYE hai...

Karele ne mara tinda ko thappaad......

Ab kab banegi karele tinda walli pappad!!!!!!

😃

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Urooj

@rooj-i

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#126

@ Shriya: Thanks Yaar! 🤗 I am glad you liked it and filmy dialogue is def.🤣 types!

@ Ammu: thanks! 🤗I was thinking that when Shaan got hit and stomped on the foot...poor him but he deserved it!🤣

@ Fariba: Thanks hun!🤗

@ Jessica: Thanks so much!🤗 I try to be good!😳 I haven't reached the awesome part yet (personally that is how I feel) but thanks!

@ Deepa: Thanks hun...i will miss being here...the Yasharan was a bit there😉🤗

@ Salini: Thanks hun🤗...i think i already told you that with uni, it will become hard for me to be here all the time but i'll try to be as active as possible.....ur the only one who has commented on the clothes...and im glad u liked them...and i'll keep that in mind about your request...

@Varsha: thanks hun🤗

@ Deepali: Thanks so much hun🤗...im glad you enjoyed the slap...that was the point...

@Yumna: 🤗thanks dear...you do realize I put Yasharan with those things?🤣 As for Shaan...i was angry at him so I did what he deserved for being an idiot on the show. lol

@ May: Thanks 🤗 well the point is for them to fight...i mean that is the base of their relationship🤣

@Shamima: Thanks 🤗 I'm glad you liked it...well Shaan was pissing me off on the show so I thought he needed a tight slap so he got one here😆 acha hai na?😆 you'll like the next one even better😆

@ Advent: Thanks hun🤗 i'm glad you liked it...i didn't know you didn't read it before...

@Shai: Thanks so much🤗... I'm glad you liked it... i'll try to update soon next time

@Saazy-smaazy: Thanks yaar...your rhyming always bring a smile on my face! Kya Shairi hai! Phati shairi 🤣but it's nice and cute!🤗

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NinjaInPyjamas

@NinjaInPyjamas

Rocker

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Posted: 14 years ago

#127

oooooooh!!

I like the last line...*toothy smile*

When she stomped on his foot, it was so cute!!

And whenever they fight, you make them kiss....lol......do you have any fights with somebody???😉

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Urooj

@rooj-i

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#128

Originally posted by: vatsalya
oooooooh!!

I like the last line...*toothy smile*

When she stomped on his foot, it was so cute!!

And whenever they fight, you make them kiss....lol......do you have any fights with somebody???😉

I knew you would love th last line🤣

Thanks about the update!

I was trying to make the scene cute and funny...it worked then!

hahahahaha no i never have fights with somebody but I dream that the guy would kiss me like that🤣🤣🤣

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sana

@_sana.Magic_

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#129

Its really awesome...you r amazing...hey bhagwan I wish I cud just have 10%of the writing skill which u possess...u r amazing

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rafia rashid

@rafia 24

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#130

hey rooj wow yaar u never fail to surprise me, great update loved the whole jealousy, hahah shaan even wanted to beat his own brother up over it 🤣🤣. and loved it when they were both outside and the realisation from both that both were jealous of the other- thus indicating their mutual attraction for one another, loved especially shaans cocky response. awwww i missed them 2 calling each other tinda and karela, will these 2 never get through a part without getting angry or arguing- but in all honesty i like it this way plus it increases the sexual tension between the two

wow kya thappad khanak shaan ko diya 🤣🤣 and ooohhhh who is this new girl he's going to use to make khanak jealous with.

as always eagerly awaiting the next part- ok off i go to read freedom hearts👍🏼🤗