New FF Hum Tum & Love? (PART 13 page 68) - Page 14

Originally posted by: -shamima-

Awe loved the reunion it was so sweet and funny especially the intentions shaan had first to gi up and flirt with her but then he found his sunshine lol and haha karan and khanaks fight was too cute making shaan think his stuck with two mad people and hmm the end bit kinda reaveled that karan used to lobe someone but that someone left him and khanaks leaving him anyways great update and to find out I can't wait to read more -😊

thanks Shami😳

Originally posted by: Ammu_SunshYn

nyc noorya!!....update soon! ;)

thanks😳

Originally posted by: krock

dear it was awsome yaar shan and khanak finally meet the 3 of convo was dam funny yaar karan ka murdear wala dialog was so funny like khanak and karans nok jhok i loved ur story so much that i cant tell u hw happy i am sweety plz jaldi update karna😉

thanks you soo much😛

Originally posted by: shamasallfav

awesome part noorya..!!very well written..n gud work...!!

wanna knw more abt karan..w8ing 4 d next part..do cont. soon...👍🏼👏

n yeahh..thnxx 4 d pm...

thank u soo much😛

Originally posted by: Yasharanrocks

awsme plz cont soon.......n just luv sunshine.............

thanks Varsha😳

Originally posted by: dalilangel24

great update ... update soon;)

thanks😊

Originally posted by: rafia 24

noorya man sooooo glad you updated i hope you are completely better now because dont want to go through another long spell without an update😉 lol so finally the party.

haha khanak still buttering up mads but it does seem genuine, we all know mads looks too young to be akki's and shaans mum but anything goes in serials, hahhaaaa of course shaan liked what he saw even it ws form behind😉 and would recognise her voice. i like the fact his smile grew when he sa her and shaans response ( i dont agree of course u dont u finally found ur dream girl lol) - nice touch.

i like the confident khanak and the hapless shaan remembering everything about khanak right down to the amount of time he hasnt seen her hahaha and this time he believes in fate not khanak- role reversal? lol

aww shaan's got jealous when he thought khanaks was with karan, but seriously man as a spectator khanak and karan must have looked weird especially as in todays day and age it is soooo hard to have a platonic relationship with a guy and be just friends (well in this case karan has fallen for khanak but at least he still acts as her friend).

and the GAY reference lmao, 🤣😆

Shaan: ab bhagvaan ne itni pyaar karne vaali baanaya hai tho pyaar ho hi jaata hai naa haha shaan the player- love this line 😆

OMG karan's flashback so he loved someone else once -- ooo intrigues i bet it was natsha lol

as always loved it eagerly awaiting the next instalment x👍🏼😃

thanks Rafia😳

Originally posted by: Deepali88

Nice written noorya🤗 All dailogue and the scene are Excellent & supparb and touching my heart👏
looking forword for next part soon😆

thanks dear😳

Originally posted by: loveshanak

loved it....amazing part😊

i liked khanak n karan's friendship....they r cute....n bechara shaan kaha phas gaya..lol...

waiting for d next part... update soon..😊

thanks a lot

Originally posted by: adeelakhokar

wowww amazing yaaar noorya awesome FF..
loved it completely......the nok jhok is soooooooo cute...
waiting for the next part.......

thank u😛

i think ur a new reader so welcome😳