FF~:Friends Forever:~ All Shanak Update : page 35 - Page 14

Originally posted by: JustJ

U want criticism , ok .............. i dont mind doing it .............

@ Jaya.......waiting for one...........

Kahan chale gaye.....?

Originally posted by: moreremix

absolutely loved it manita👏

i liked the way khanak asked shaan abt his frnd..and .lekin agar aapko lagta hai ki main samajh sakti hoon to mujhe bataiye..loved this line

then the whole khanak gaurav convo was superb👍🏼...cant wait to know gauravs reaction wen he cums to know khanak ka loser pati kaun hai..hehe😆

@ moreremix........ everyone wants to see that......generating curiosity is detrimental actually.......😆😆😆😆..................hope I can justify the facts.........😛

Thanks for devoting time.....

Fantastic!!!👍🏼

Very balanced

Originally posted by: rbo_fan

@ moreremix........ everyone wants to see that......generating curiosity is detrimental actually.......😆..................hope I can justify the facts.........😛

Thanks for devoting time.....

The last line took my breath away!! "phew" You write well!! Everything is so balanced...drama, emotions, love, romance....Great going!

@ Souma and vatsalya...........thanks for the appreciative words.....
and they really mean a lot.

It was really Good manita!

o yaar...it's awesome....pls update soon...

Originally posted by: rbo_fan

and thanks to everybody who chatted on this thread😡.......and kept it's TRP rising....LOL.....😆😆😆

Oh you are welcome....hum aise ehsaan karte rehte hain....And since u liked it soo much....Me and Jaya shall keep it up😆😆😆😆😆😆😆 Itna toh kar hi sakte hain tere liye😆😆😆😆

"For a candle light dinner'" he still didn't want to release her from his hold.

"Woh kya hota hai?" she asked, innocently fluttering her eyes.

He kissed her eyes and said, "Don't do this or I'll take you home instead."

I loved this part......fab part....loved khanak ka indirect convo with Gaurav👏👏👏....Cant wait for gaurav-shaan to meet😳 ...2 handsome men indeed😳😳😳😳😳😳