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saaaz

@saaaz

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#31

1st Dec 2010

1. Kya baat mani hamari....manna padega...kudos to the hard dialogues for Khanak - so for that CVs take a bow!! but yaar, don;t mind the new house you shot in was thoda distracting...so for that you have to sit down. I assume this was a last minute thing and we shall have our RBO home back.

2. You guys need to do a little bit more for RS to grow on Shanak fans..believe me they are growing on us.....

3. Agle episode tak...loving RBO...

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Simi

@simikr

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#32

1) It was nice to see some intensity between Shanak back again and there is substance and depth in their conversation..very nice!!

2) I agree with Yasharanrocks that the new charactors are being developed too fast!! and that may be too much too soon!! They hv just been introduced and we as the audience need time to get to know them better. So plz don't be in a hurry..like a good book develop their characters gradually so that we get to love them too just like we love Shanak..

Thanks!!

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souma

@Souma.N

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#33

I would like to request the RBO creatives to show Khanak getting along with Shaan s friends....

I would also love to see Rahul developing a soft corner for Khanak and in turn making Shaan jealous and possessive about her

We have seen months of an insecure Khanak during Natasha 's time...it would be nice if it was Shaan s turn now

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prithvi_veer

@prithvi_veer

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#34

i liked the new twist in the show.hats off to u cvs.

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Krishna

@kubare

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#35

Hello CV's

There are only few points.

1. The dialogues still need to be improved ...sometimes...they seem ..too repeatative..and most of he time...miss substance.

Eg. Shaan telling Sam...that he loves Khanak because she s good daughter, wife, friend??? He had more conviction and emotions when he was proposing to her and told her how much she means to him and why... and got engaged to Natasha by mistake..the same dialogues were needed here too..the dialogue between Sam and him were like he was praising his Daughter-in-law or something.

And same goes for Rasam (Rahul & Sam) dialgues...to much repeatition...need to eb more crips..though the dialogues by Pri aka Sam were good an improvement.

Good dialogues...make the story and characters interesting...and the dialogue writers should keep the previous story or dialogues in mind too...as we did have Shaan make Khanak his lucky charm once and then we have him make Sam his lucky charm etc...

2. Again in Monday and Tuesdays epi ...I thought that the BGS (back ground score/music ) was loud that it over rode some of the dilogues being said.

Eg.Shaan being caught by Khanak singing...him thinking something to himself...and even in between Rasam scenes.

3. Loved the improvement made and the coming track looks promising...hope to be entertained by you as you have entertained and kept us glued to this show with some great dialogues, screenplay, direction, etc...that we still remember them.... Hope full justice is done with the new characters too and their story and that it gels perfectly into the story of Shanak..and RBO.

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Pooja

@yasharan.love

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#36

hello-

1. i love the current track it seems interesting but the editing. dialogs and costumes needs improvement!

I dnt want to be offensice but their is too much shiny materails being used for the clothes... I didnt like wat priyanka is bein wearing at all! since day one, she is great but the dresses kinda pull her down... and plz mre solid colours on yashu! and if u r using new sets, mke it a diff room in whci they r meeting like yestrday shaan- khanak fight was in a set frm JPSYA it was their bedroom, when we knw it is nt their bedroom! and then we r back to their old bedroom today! It shld hve been seens as another room- another part of the house or something.

2. I would love to see Khanak as more than a good wife/daughter-ln-law/sister in-law etc! I wld LOVE for Khanak to find passion in something too... it wld be nice to see shaan as the supportive husband standing by his wife and helping her fulfill some dream of hers rather than the usual shaan in trouble Khanak to rescue stuff... she can be a writer, like shaan figures that she writes compositions/ poems in hindi (since she is literate enough to do that much), or a painter, dancer anything! just get her out of the kitchen!😆

3. PLZ re-start madhvi-sunil track, I loved seeing these two facing marital problems... It was realistic, many stay together for kids sake until they hit the wall.... I would love to see their marital problems being addressed and Shaan acting mature and trying to maturely handle the situation, help his parents re-kindle their romance or something..........

thanks again,

pooja

Edited by p.fashion.d - 14 years ago

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destinylove

@destinylove

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#37

i love this track fully

1.loved khanak shaan talks.

.loved the way in which khanak told shaan that he has to understand his reponsibilites 2

.loved the way in which she politely asked him if she can suggest something and also that she would not get angry

3.Loves khanaks(yashu) and shaaans(kt)s acting fully

4.loved sunil/khanak scenes and theaffectionfather-in-law shows on DIL

5liked sam/duck's scenes...

I loved this episode there is nothing to dislike in this..episode..j

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tanvismile

@tanvismile

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#38

i m likeing new entries .thanks fr bringing fabulous actress priyanka bassi .

i m excited fr the storyline now.want to see sam duck scenes more .

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wel1111

@wel1111

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

#39

i still don't understand why you show khanak in same dress for 2-3 days while shaan changes 2-3 tshirts per epi.......

please change yashu's wardrobe and also make her wear hair clip or change the style.....she looks cute n younger in those clips.....

you have got the best actors cvs.....

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poojabi

@poojabi

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

#40

1)first i want to thank the whole rbo team for bringing priyanka bassi to the show.she is a fabulous actress and a true beuty.i am just watching the show only becoz of her.so can u people pls give her some hard hitting lines which will suit her character.her entry was so promising bt now i am feeling that she is not getting the scope to show her talent.the dialoges are not at all good.

2)give priyanka more intense scenes.she knows how to express through her eyes .that is her speciality.use it in the scenes.that will do all the work.no dialoge is really needed then.

3)and the last request pls do not change her dressing from western to indo western.she looks fav in western.the off shoulder salwar she was wearing in yesterday episode is not at all impressive.specially the colour.

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