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-Veena-

@-Veena-

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

This is the official thread to give feedback to the RBO CVs.

As we all know that RBO CV's actively participate
on this forum and appreciate and respond to our
feedback.

After talking with PD.. this is what we are going to do.
Have a one stop for all the CV's of RBO. This is to make
it easier for them to know and respond to us.

This thread will be where you can put your feedback
ONLY IN POINTS for the Day.

Make the points short and simple.. Don't make lists or essays.
CV's come on the forum with limited time.. make it easy
for them.No discussions only points.. and no quoting and commenting.. if you like a post 'Like" it.

Please keep in mind.. be respectful.. no bashing.. and no harsh
words. CV's are being approachable to us.. lets use this wisely.

EG of a post, Please date it:

11/30...Dear CVs,

Thanks for being here and listening to our views. We really appreciate that.

What I personally want to be addressed is -

1. Repetition of dialogues : Every character whether new or old ; everyone from Sunil, Akshay, Khanak, Shaan, to even Rahul and Sam keep repeating the same dialogues over and over again.

2. Lack of gravity in dialogues : Instead of shallow dialogues like, " jyada kaam karne se tabiyat kharaab ho jayegi" and discussion about Shaan's food.....We would appreciate if characters spoke something
more meaningful.
before last few days, RBO dialogues were actually awesome and we used to recall them multiple times.

3. Editing - many scenes look disjointed and appear of different time and days.

4. Lack of depth in tracks - Picking up a track or a scene and leaving it there itself without sufficient dialogues to explain why a particular character is behaving like that.

For Detailed talks to the CV's
Please use the Creative thread by May..
Message To The Creatives.....

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-Veena-

@-Veena-

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

One point I would like to make personally is..
lets give the CV's feed back and let them do what is needed.
Lets give the CV's liberty to make THEIR show..
else it is all a mess.. i know with experience. Trust me..
don't turn out the way we want! :)

Also in our writes..
Lets talk about the positives also.. not only what we didn't like.. how about that?

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Aditi S

@aditee

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

Here is what I meant to say on last nite's India episode:

1. The scenes, the dialogs and the settings all seem disjointed. There is NO underlying drama anymore

2. The Rahul Khanna introduction has been pulled out far too long, for me as a viewer its totally hard to understand WHY he became what he is. His love saga with Sam completely over rode today's air time when it should be the other way around.

3. Since consummation, the strength of chemistry between Shaan and khanak is significantly waning. I fear if the focus stays on Sam-Rahul and Shaan for too long, we wont have any Shaan-Khanak left in the show

4. Dont quite understand why the parents called off their divorce. "It will upset Shaan" just does not cut it!

5. Khanak's presence is hard to find, all she does all day long is worry about Shaan's food or ponder over how much she loves him. She finds him at the pub but is NOT annoyed that he is not at work? Why? She tears up instead and gets all emotional?😕 Shouldnt he be at the office during the day? He seems to be getting more irresponsible and unconcerned about his own life.

6.If it was so easy for Shaan to pick up the guitar and start to sing, why did he explode with anger each time Khanak mentioned a song or a guitar?

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destinylove

@destinylove

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -Veena-

One point I would like to make personally is..
lets give the CV's feed back and let them do what is needed.
Lets give the CV's liberty to make THEIR show..
else it is all a mess.. i know with experience. Trust me..
don't turn out the way we want! :)

dear veena

i would have to agree with u fully we can suggest in such a way that creatives are not forced into things..

each one wanting one thing is not going to help at all and going to land no where

creativity needs liberty definitely..we can suggest but defintely not over do it.

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Sejal

@-Leah-

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

Phew Veenz thanks for this...😆

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tvrasika

@tvrasika

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

Good idea Veena:)

Friends, please, do not write your comments in response to other posts. Your view is your view. You do not have to say someone is wrong or justify why you feel you are right. You have a right to say what you want to say. But pls be respectful. If we start fighting amongst ourselves, the CVs won't take us seriously. They will only laugh at us. So please, I request you all, write what you want briefly, in bullet points, by episode if possible. Much easier for CVs to check if you say 'Nov 30 episode' than make a general point.

To CVs:
My views are similar to Manita's (RBO fan).

1. Nov 30 episode- dialogues very simple and obvious, not RBO style. Khanak seriously cud not have believed that Shaan would fall ill by looking at files. Thats not the Khanak we know.

2. Shaan-Duck scenes can only happen during day time? can Shaan not go to office, and then hang out at Duck's place in the evening? Thats what most people do, right? Then Khanak can get angry at him for not coming home on time. Shaan missing work like this makes the Aug presentation scenes meaningless now.

3. Sam's presentation- could have been more strong. Love is the inspiration for her becoming a wedding planner? RBO CVs are more clever than this!

4. Rahul clapping his hands, standing in dark, not RBO style. Rahul shld have been in the room when Sam was presenting. Would she have become nervous? Would she have sneezed a lot? Would she have walked out? We would have got a good scene there if he had been in the room.

5. Why did Sunil tell Akshay that Shaan is becoming irresponsible? did he find out Shaan was not at work? when? Sunil is n his T-shirt. which means its night time and he is at home. But Khnak is still on her way to Duck's place and its day time.

CVs, I second Shriya and Veena. Creativity needs space and freedom. We do not mean to influence your vision of the story.

Good luck!

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Daebak

@Daebak

Trailblazer

+ 7

Posted: 14 years ago

Issues -

1.At present....the new pair has failed to appeal to me at all...Absolutely unimpressive characterization....flat dialogue delivery and not upto the mark acting....Bad voice modulation.....(My Point of View).

Most of us are changing channels on their scenes and tuning back only for SHANAK.....If this keeps happening then eventually people might start watching other shows only and stop tuning to RBO at all....!!! Till how long can you remain watching 2 scenes in a show and guess the story...there is a limit..😕

2.Also I didnt like the fact that the "Satrangi track" was shared...It spoilt the essence of the tracks of both the pairs....U cudve had a separate segments for both pairs if you wanted....!

3.Shaan has really gone weird.....His lucky charms keep changing as per convenience....He can share problems with the entire world except Khanak but still he keeps saying that only khanak matters to him in the whole world....The point fails to hit home..

4. Since the last 2 days there is absolutely zilch footage being given to SHANAK.......Plz note that we started watching the show for them....We get that you are trying to establish new characters but this technique of minimalizing SHANAK scenes is having an adverse effect....quite a few members have already left the show....and others like me are on the brink of shifting to Youtube and watching only SHANAK....Coz we have the option of fast forwarding other scenes when watching on YT....!!

5.Plzz stop with Khanak's obsession for food.....Every shot of hers is either in the kitchen or at the dining table....Even on the phone and in the room she is talking or worrying about food......As it is she is only getting 1-2 scenes and usme bhi food fixation is ruining everything...

P.S - Just venting out frustrations and opinions.....dont take anything otherwise !!

Positives -

Adore Duck...Jas Karan is really good and has gelled well into the cast of RBO very smoothly....just like Rushad.....This is how we want actors to be......We dont want them to stand out like a sore thumb....We want to feel that they are a part of our RBO....!!

Plzz give us Khanak-Duck-Shaan scenes.....We are sure they'll b gr8....Coz Jas seems to have an impeccable comic timing and Yashu-Karan are fabulous with comedy....Expecting lots of fireworks in scenes involving these 3....So plzz give us lots of such scenes...!! Finally one Bha for Khanak whom we approve of !! 😆

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souma

@Souma.N

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

Hi....

I think the main reason why people started watching RBO was cause of its uniqueness and the adorable moments between Shaan and Khanak..
Showing the groW*H of the relationship from hatred to love...their fine tuning into the marriage.....but all of a sudden...things seem to be disjoint from what was earlier said or done...

1. I think one of the most beautiful part shown was Shaan s attempt to change himself so that he could win over Khanak...his attempt to become responsible....and Khanak was trying so hard to make him that....
She dint come to his aid when he was washing dishes because she wanted him to mature and grow into a complete and perfect man.....
All this seems to have vanished into oblivion now.....Shaan seems to have forgotten his role and Khanak is only concerned about his eating habits...I want that bold and tough Khanak back...and want him to play a pivotal role in his role and not be reduced to a cook

2. Shaan is being portrayed as very insensitive towards his wife...very very insensitive...He does not care about her feelings...bites her head off when she asks him to play but agrees readily when Duck does the same...He constantly lies to her when there is no reason for doing so.....
This kind of characterisation will gradually reduce the impact of their chemistry....Love is much more than mere romance and out of the blue flirting...

3. I would also like to point out that most scenes seem disjoint and appear like fillers...I dont think 1 extra episode in the week should impact the quality to such an extent.

4. About the new entrants...Jas is great..but the other two lack voice modulation and fail to leave an impression...atleast on me...They acting fails to impact and I feel that the new characters are being stuffed down my throat.
If they are new...I dont think the best idea would be to show them with the leads ( I hope Shaan and Khanak are still the leads) in every frame...it seems forceful....I think more than us..they need time and a better approach would be to slowly increase their importance...gradually..allow them to blend

5. This is most important...I think most people started swatching RBo for the leads...and the taste would remain only if it is left that way....

I would have loved them to go back to Dhulwadi...show some insecurities...some efforts to understand each other and some simple love moments...not necessarily romance.....
All this was necessary to clear..cause at the end of the day,,it was supposed to be about Khanak and her strength ...her struggle...and her journey with Shaan...
Extending the story to Shaan s past is fine...but not too much please....Shanak need to have the same screen time as before....and the new entrants can blend in and support them like Khusboo Akki or Hetal Mangala

Please show more of Khanak s importance in Shaan s life...and allow her to play a more important role..instead of just being a kitchen queen

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destinylove

@destinylove

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

1, yes the uniquesness and originality is the main reason fro peopel to admire RBO..

reg nov 30 episode

1.That interview affair was not properly reasoned...like the CEO hiding some where and interviewing..

Girls of modern days cant be taken for rides like that

....Rahul clapping hands and appearing was more 1970s/80s filmi sort and did not go well especiaaly after his gr8 show in the introduction in martial arts.

2.Shan only a couple of days ago said he wont hurt his wife again.

.but yesterday he is again telling lies especailly after knowing his wife would not like that What sort of deep love is this?

3.Sunil-akshay at home discussing shaan not coming to office

...Wont they telephone home call khanak or shaans mobile to know why he did not turn up.if they were that much concerned about his attitude

.they are shown discussing casually at night..

4.khanak does nothing except carrying tea pots cooking. arranging almairahs.,etc.,

.She need to do some thing else may be show her as a painter who paintsin free time..that would be gr8

Just becase she is from villagfe she need not be talking of kitchen and food all the time..

positive:

I am loving Jas karan

Please explore his funny acts with khanak as both would hit of well as a humour pair(bro-sis) gujarathi.

please dont dramatise his role as one sided lover

that is it for yesterday.

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saaaz

@saaaz

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#10

Dear PD... FOR 30th November

1. We want to give RS (Rahul Sam) a chance, but we could have honestly done without the BG music and the repetitive dialogues from Rahul. The whole sensing each other in the corridor, he watching her from another room and then entering and clapping... I am sorry was a blast from the past...the delivery, the grammar of this 'confrontation' or 'first meeting after long' between Sam and Rahul was definetely not upto the mark- it was very soapy and not the RBO realistic and crisp style we are used to and love...

2. I for one thought Sam's character needs harder dialogues, (or for that matter some dialogues) for a woman who has just burnt the guy's photo after a lusty dream - so much angst and her response in the meeting room was a sneeze (while I must say that was a little cute) but if she had recovered from her shock of seeing him quickly and given a hard hitting dialogue just before Rahul left the room, I would have 'felt' for Sam.

3. Finally Shanak- yaar give us some sign that Khanak is going to be involved MAJORLY in this storyline...even if it means Khanak bumping into Rahul and Rahul developing a soft corner for the gaav ki ladki in this bad city full of bad people who have wronged him- this way you can bring the soft side of the angry Rahul...OR Khanak helping Sam in her wedding planning biz because woh toh kalaakar hai na....😉

4. I know everyone here is waiting for Khanak and Duck to meet---hurry it up already----you have already laid a good foundation for it...

WE LOVE RBO