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wow simi.....................................wow is a small word !!!
I have always considered poetry as the best form of expression
and very few strike the right chord........your efforts are commendable....you are too good and too talented buddy.......the appropriate words, summed up the complete story of RBO and there are places where it touched right there....
I loved
--husband became my friend......
-- to right a terrible wrong...
-- a change in stare....
aptly used words to weave a beautiful emotion.....Kudos !!
I have always considered poetry as the best form of expression
and very few strike the right chord........your efforts are commendable....you are too good and too talented buddy.......the appropriate words, summed up the complete story of RBO and there are places where it touched right there....
I loved
--husband became my friend......
-- to right a terrible wrong...
-- a change in stare....
aptly used words to weave a beautiful emotion.....Kudos !!
Mannat Har Khushi Paane Ki
