Poem~ Main Hoon Khanak....

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Here's my last poem here until I get some more inspiraton...Its dedicated to Khanak and Yashu.. coz she was the reason I've been watching the show!! As usual its a mishmash of English and Hindi..excuse me for that's the way I think😆

I Am Khanak..❤️

I am from Dhulwadi..

Khanak hai mera naam

Playful and carefree

Masti hai mera kaam

Adored by everybody

sabse karoon preet

In Suraj I found

Mere man ka meet

Then I came across

Someone to cause alarm

threaten my happiness...but

He did not lack charm
It was a freak accident

No one was to blame

I became a widow

Sunshine turned to rain

I was inconsolable

I wished to take my life

But he saved me, and

I became his wife

What then followed

I never did expect

New place, new faces

A life full of regret

My pati loved another

I ruined all her chances

I didn't mean to, we were

Victims of circumstances

Things couldn't be worse

It was a tough test

I failed miserably

Though I tried my best

Then the darkness faded

Sorrows seemed at an end

I had almost given up

My husband became my friend

I wished them to reunite

To learn to belong

I had made up my mind

To right a terrible wrong

Then I began to see

A change in his stare

I liked how it made me feel

Like spring in the air

Life started to make sense

I could feel hope again

Chance for a new romance

A release from the pain

I have her to thank

Incredible was her game

She brought us together

Angel( Tashu) is her name

Now as we start anew

Bound together by love

Hope for bright tomorrows

And trust in God above

~~~~~~~~~
Thanks guys...welcome brickbats😆
I was thinking of posting some in the Sher-o Shayri section...will pm if you wish😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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omgggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggg it is maha maha mah emptionally cute yaar
i love d that husband became my frnd line was like superbly touching

simi i love uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu meri jaan u r just toooooo good wid this


omgg fr a sec i becasme all rona dhona types
loved it sweety superb
hatts off to u as always
the star n shine of the forum is uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thankuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu Karish!!! I knew you'd be the first!!:D
Yaa..kind of like that line too😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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superb superbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbb sweatheart from where do u get these lines from gosh u r such a talented perso kudos girl
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Lovely !!!!!

It was sooo good...How long did it take you to write this....This was a stroke of excellence yaar...!
U have awesomely summed up RBo's journey till now...
U should PM this to Yashu/Yashji and Swapnaji !!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thanx Jyothi...Khanak's the inspiration!!:))
@ Vandu..thanx yaar..will try!!:D
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome work Simi... every stanza is such a nice summary of every event.. loved it..😛
and as Vandu said do send this to Yashu as she is already a fan of your poems and of course this poem deserves this attention....😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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i loved it ..this is very nice.....simi ua re really too good...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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simi!!! wow yaar! i know we keep telling you again and again how good you are with poetry but seriously, this is excellent👏 i myself am an avid reader. why don't you try your hand at writing professionally?


p.s.

you have to post this poem on swapna ji, yash ji or yashu's FB. i am telling you, do it like now!

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sorry simi i cant pl fm nw i cant 4give me for dis (continued in nxt post....................

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