hey dear swati here i am so much excited to post first...... i think on the same lines as in veenas O.S. 1.first khanak would enter kitchen to make something for shaan as he said he was hungry..shaan peeche peeeche..mission khanak..to be accomplished...
2.he would start doing a live demo start sending feelers bechara how long can he wait for SR..he has to do something na...so starting with a demo..
3.He would start by catchinghold of her hand and kissing and seeing her shyness would take it as green signal.
.however khanak would say "this is kitchen" and may even say
"baaki sab kuch raat ko" and shy away from him.
4.this one dialouge is good enough to drive away shaan crazy..he is eagerly awaiting for the night to break..
5khanak decorates the room(after all she asa done for so many friends why not for her own)in th msot romantic manner...
6.shaan enters and is totally in for sweet surprise..the moment he has been longing and more than him we have been longing for has finaly arrived...
finds khanak in red odhani worn over waiting to be removed..
(sorry i dont think carrying part will occur..)
khanak not looking eye to eye but looking down ..shaan is so happy lifts her veil and makes her look into his eys...but she shys away...shaan understands...
7.typical filmi style removal of ghoonghat..and all progression from hand to neck to lips to.....an finally slwoly ending up in bed..may be a very good song in th BG..or some high romantic BG score or instrument music of title song..donno wht they would do...
lights switched off ..(that is wht they show in tv)shaan may be shown removing vest or tee shirt while khank blushes...(cant guarantee shaan being shirtles ) and the intervening of hands for sure...
and thenext morning we see a shirtless shaan waking up with all bed in full disturbed condition...not finding khanak next and blsuhing again...
shaan blushing a lot and khanak too blushing a lot in kitchen...both blushing to infinity when they see each other..and recalling what had happened...ofcourse in their minds.. and the cellphone of shaan rings...
this is my contribution.....
Edited by sshriyaa84 - 15 years ago