*::.~FF Dostana~.::* OLD CHAP PUT UP AGAIN - Page 61

Originally posted by: -Nitya-

hey hey! that's a very harsh punishment!😆
and I knew it! your such a mean person..using Kavi for your character so people won't be able to hate him! 😆 You have no idea how much I want to hate him..but I can't! darn Kavi and his niceness!😡 He actually kills my biasness..if it was any other person, I would've hated him immediately but now I actually feel for him because I know Khanak will end up with Shaan and he's going to be heartbroken! and none of this is his fault really.

so umm..is there any chance of Aditya and Kiara? or was she just brought in for Shaan?

oh btw..did you get my PM about Kavi's birthday? I can't remember if I sent it to you or not!

Nityaaaaaaa.......watz this about Kavi and u r not telling me *hmmphhh* Btw.........KISMAT (yrf show) starts on 14th feb........Kavi ka cameo ussi me hai i think....I guess they changed the name from Bhagya to Kismat😆😆😆😆😆 I sooo cant wait.......And m wondering why he went for a meeting at YRF I hope sum new show with him in lead...since he clarified that the meeting wasnt for R.Com 2 but he said he'd reveal the info soon........Cant wait😳😳😳

Originally posted by: rooj-i

OMG Pooja!

I love you for this!

this was def. worth while! poor Shaan...he had his heart set out for Khanak and Khanak, instead of going back for Shaan, she went for Aditya...

Poor Shaan...he left from there I bet.

So I'm guessing that Shaan will try to avoid Khanak and Aditya a lot and that will put Khanak in the position where she will become worried and hence soon she will start realizing things...

so could it be that Khanak is reacting on hearing from Shaan about his little venture in London?

anyways I can't wait to see what happens next...

Update soon!

Rooj

PS: you should read my SS freedom hearts, it will give you a clear picture of what I was talking about earlier to you. 😉 it's not exactly in details but it's close enough. lol

Originally posted by: rbo_d_best

One word for the Update : Amazing ... Loved the effect of Tashu/Rohan/Shaan & Party convos ... Actually made me visualise everyone's state of mind !!!!!

Shaan is so attracted to her ... Khanak & Aditya kissing .. This is getting seriously interesting...

Gurl ... Update next part ASAP .....

Originally posted by: tofeeees

😍😍😍😍😍i don't think words are enough to express what i felt after reading this part pooja! 😍 you're the most amazing writer i have EVER come across! and GOsh i loved how you put the whole part as a narration from Shaan to Tashu and Rohan! :) i basically loved EVERYTHING! i think i'm still sighing! i love you yashar....errmmm i mean Shanak😉❤️

Originally posted by: togepe30

@Bold Part - Eggjacktlyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy !!! I wudve killed Aditya by now maybe if he was sumone else...But Kavi....No way anyone is touching him...except me😉😆😆😆

And nahi re.....No Kiara......then Kiara ko badal de.....No jennifer....I cant imagine kavi n jennifer.....weird...make it shruti/ragz😆😆😆

Soon ppl of this forum are gonna wonder why suddenly Rag-Kavi are the parallel leads on soo many FF's on the forum....I bullied Manita into getting them on her FF too........I am gonna b in big trouble..

Nityaaaaaaa.......watz this about Kavi and u r not telling me *hmmphhh* Btw.........KISMAT (yrf show) starts on 14th feb........Kavi ka cameo ussi me hai i think....I guess they changed the name from Bhagya to Kismat😆😆😆😆😆 I sooo cant wait.......And m wondering why he went for a meeting at YRF I hope sum new show with him in lead...since he clarified that the meeting wasnt for R.Com 2 but he said he'd reveal the info soon........Cant wait😳😳😳

Originally posted by: yasharan.love

thank you rooj!!! and sorry, i was going to put the salsa type dance part in this one, but it wasnt coming out ell, so instead I had shaan telling hr how great she is.....

and i will def. read ur SS..........😃

Originally posted by: -shamima-

Ooh really loved this update the concep of shaan telling the story and poor him all drunk and presumably broken hearted and awe how he came to tashu and started ranting to kill hello was so cute because what she said turned out to be true and awe that was so sweet what shaan said to khanak and wow they way aditiya confessed and khanak accepted I do wonder how shaan felt in that very moment and as we can see he is drunk anyways great update and can't wait to read more 😊

Originally posted by: rafia 24

😭pooja- did i tell u dostana was my fav ff of urs.x- Thanks😃

yay tashu and rohan were in this part for some reason i missed them,-I missed writing them too!! they are fun- and i loved her devdas 3 joke 🤣🤣🤣 dev d the film ws part 2 🤣🤣🤣. i sooooo knew it was shaan and when he said it came true i actually squealed and and clentched my fist and a victory way soooo happy that he's finally admitted that he loves khanak.

then love how u did a fb- as an explanation for when he realised he loved her.

loevd this line of khanak's

'Well that bit was clear the minute you looked at me. You had the expression of a boy who finally got his lollypop.'🤣🤣🤣. this is usually a typical shaan response- i LOVE khanaks character in this and shaans response - no lollipop i fine dark chocolate 🤣🤣🤣.🤣🤣🤣.🤣🤣🤣.what a response

wow nani kochar - that was a pleasant surprise i love her flamboyant, rangeela character. i respected khanak more for wanting to make it on her own without connections and proud of shaan for admiring and respecting that. and loved grandma for saying khanak should be with the man who defends her- u go nani 🤣🤣

aww the part where shaan said he loved her mothers novels and cried at the end of the last one but will deny it if ever got out was such a typical man response loved it. (oyeah i love the way u keep switching the scenes from the flat and the ball)

aww shaan was staring at khanak like tashu i too want to kiss shaan (as i always do🤣🤣🤣🤣) for his reply to khanak feeling weak/foolish.

sorry quoting a whole paragraph becos i have no words love loved itShantanu stepped closer to her, and took her hand in his, he looked deep into her eyes, 'Khanak you are a beautiful, charming woman. Not just that, but you are also sweet, kind and an excellent human being. Everything about you- your smile, the way your eyes light up like bulbs, when you see something or someone you love, to the weird and horrifying way your hair is all over the place when you wake up and crave coffee like an addict, to even your annoying, tom and jerry Pj's- everything about you is...' his thumb made circles o her hand, as he took a second for looking for the right word, he then leaned in, just an inch, and whispered, 'perfect... And any guy in world will be extremely lucky to have your eyes light up when you see him, to know that you love him, with all your heart and soul, to have you in his life. And anyone who misses that opportunity is very unlucky or just demented. So the real question you should be asking is not, can anyone love-love me, because anyone can love you. No the, the real question is- can anyone not love 'love you? And the answer to that is- hell no!😃😃😍😍

haha shaan's response- even I smile like a fool when I read it😃

'I can't say the feeling is mutual, didn't hear much about you to be curious to the extent of death.'

so trying to be the tough guy and show that adi has no effect on him when he does lol

omggggg pooja i cant believe khanak and adi kissed even though we all know shanak will get together this part felt like a dagger through my heart so bechara shaan😭😭 and to hear that khanak thinks she might love adi too😭😭 hai shaan ko shor ka jhatka hai zooro se laga.

cant wait for the next update pls plssss update soon xxxx

Originally posted by: -Saira-

Ahhhh! Fun! 😃

This is making me anxious with tears...totally ready for it! This soo much more interesting than what is happening in the actual show right now.