*::.~FF Dostana~.::* OLD CHAP PUT UP AGAIN - Page 50

Loved the update Pooja....Well written as usual👏👏.....Don't like the idea of ShaNak with other people and hope the burthals realise their true feelings soon, atleast to themselves😊.....

Haha awe just loved it and shaan confused about his feelings so decides to get help from his dad by using the excuse of a file lol that was so funny and cute and shaans dad knew he was speaking about a girl and haha aditya sure is a chamer never give up lol I think is his moto and hmm shaan not getting excited by Kaira as he usually would have but khanak invades his mind and ooh aditya was going to get a kiss but shaan came back and loved the little reunion it was so sweet anyways great update and can't wait to read further on 😊

Ps I am so sorry didn't know about you grandma passing away but I give her my hearty respect

Originally posted by: togepe30

Lovely ! Glad Shaan is back...

Felt veryyyy bad for Aditya....Poor guy.....He dropped her all the way....she is almost kinda leading him on ......I wonder if he stayed to see this...Atleast then he wont harbour too many hopes..

LOL....I am gonna feel miserable for Aditya when SHANAK get together....LOL.....Maybe afterall Kavi shudnt have been chosen for this role....Then I cudve even hated Aditya....LOL....Anyways...U cant have it all....M enjoying the Adi-Khanak romance.....she is being ruthless with him....She cudve been gracious enough to have lunch with him...That was mean...Poor sweetheart !!

CONTINUE SOON !!

Luv,

Vandu

Originally posted by: rafia 24

arey pooja you need to stop writing so good yaar i cant resist reading ur updates even tho I should have bben revising but no matter it was well worth the time, it was awesome. dont worry i dont hate kiara or aditya how can u blame them for like shaan/ khanak when they're both so HOT! HAHAHAAAA u used shaan line on adiya

kooan pyaase ke paas nahi, payaasa kooane ke paas jata hai, I have got lunch and come to you.'

would have preferred shan to have said that but koi gal nahin dont give him any more of shaans catchphrases/ lines.

loved shaans convo with dad it remininded me of the letter episode.

Thank you for not letting the kiss go ahead i know khanak could have but thank you god for dharam lol

and quoting Trust me it's gonna be mind blowing'ly fantastic in the coming updates

now im excited to read the upcoming updates, especially the black and white ball and maybe incl a background song xxxx

thanks rain! and I didnt notice how shaan the line was😆 .... I guess both the guys are similar😆

Originally posted by: sampar

superb 👏👏👏.........i m not liking khanak and Aditya's closeness ....but no worries shaan is back

i was holding my breath when aditya was about to kiss her.......but thank god for sending shaan on time ....phew......

and loved the last scene ....heheh...shanak are back with a bang ....love them together.....

eagerly waiting for next update.....

cheers

shai

thanks shai!!😃😃

Originally posted by: The_May_Rose

Loved the update Pooja....Well written as usual👏👏.....Don't like the idea of ShaNak with other people and hope the burthals realise their true feelings soon, atleast to themselves😊.....

Take care and as ever, waiting for the next part😃.....

thanks a ton may😃😃

Originally posted by: -shamima-

Haha awe just loved it and shaan confused about his feelings so decides to get help from his dad by using the excuse of a file lol that was so funny and cute and shaans dad knew he was speaking about a girl and haha aditya sure is a chamer never give up lol I think is his moto and hmm shaan not getting excited by Kaira as he usually would have but khanak invades his mind and ooh aditya was going to get a kiss but shaan came back and loved the little reunion it was so sweet anyways great update and can't wait to read further on 😊

Ps I am so sorry didn't know about you grandma passing away but I give her my hearty respect

thanks shamima!!!!😃😃😃

OMG pooja!

Originally posted by: rooj-i

OMG pooja!

I loved , loved, loved it! I'm guessing that this was not the way you had Shaan realizing his love for Khanak but I think he has already done that. But either way I loved it how you have put his thoughts there. He was def., def. going crazy over Khanak. Love his talk with Sunil. it was too good...like dad like son. lol

I loved it how he kept comparing everything with Khanak and i'm glad that he came back before Khanak and Adi happened.

So from the looks of it we are about to read Shaan's realization, which he did over there right? and then we will see Khanak's realization. why do i get the feeling that that girl still hasn't really realized it. rather she is hiding her true feelings, buried inside.

Loved his entry, highly amusing..

did I tell you that this is my fav. FF of yours!?

do continue soon!

Thanks Rooj!!!

Originally posted by: p.fashion.d

Thanks Rooj!!!

was reading ur FF before slepping, loved the way the two didnt realise who it was when they talkked to eachother(am reading pervious chap's I had missed)

and Thanks again!!

Lots of Love,

P