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sabrina

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Posted: 15 years ago

#21

oh god. they both are amazing :) i kinda want the first one to happen :P ive been waiting for that 10 rupee note scene to come along soon. i think they all forgot about it LOL. but clearly we sure havent :)

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Ayesha

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Posted: 15 years ago

#22

nice i like the second scene.

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-Amrita2010

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Posted: 15 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: shanakforever
amrita the scenes r maha maha fantastic dear...i so want them 2 happen n happen so damn romantically i wouldnt mind being in the icu frever after watching sumthing happen like this.............man ur anawesome writer pls pls pls go b the cv of rbo🤣...........loved it sooo much❤️❤️

Thanku, Karishma (hope I got your name right)🤗

You don't mind being in ICU?😲 are you sure?

Sorry, I forgot, Dr.Armaan will be there with you😆😆😍

If I join the cv's then my brain would definetly be washed by them....so slowly moving ahead people😆😆😆

@Anshu, confused?😆😆😆 omg, we all are expecting the grand entry of the ten rupee note, and hoping to see Shanak in the room again, together😊

@Yuvi, I love your siggies😊 so cutie, my favourite two couples😳😳😳..thanx alot huh

@taman, thanku dear

@ALL, hey dears, I just wrote the topic, choose your favourite for fun, we can always expect something better, right? thanx alot for liking the two scenes😊

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Krishna

@kubare

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Posted: 15 years ago

#24

Awww...Amrita both are such lovely scenes...my fav..the first one followed by the moonlite night...am omitting the lawyer....😆😆😆 Beautifully written both....👏

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-Amrita2010

@-Amrita2010

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Posted: 15 years ago

#25

Thank you Krishna 🤗

I did it purposely, I knew that you all will think about something****😍☺️

So, chalo, my work is done, you all are dreaming, wanting that the puja, 10 rupee note followed by the bedroom scene😆😆😆

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-Amrita2010

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Posted: 15 years ago

#26

Thank you alot Miss flimy aka Ranjini, for motivating me

Time is running out

Khanak wondered what the hell was going around. The dust has begun to form circles sinking Shantanu's feelings. She spinned herself and rubbed her eyes to clear her vision.This shouldn't be happening. Why isn't he ready to believe her? Why isn't he damn to care? He found her when she lost her way and she isn't going back anymore. People say that she isn't worth him. She made a mistake by breaking down his heart into pieces and she is going to gather all those pieces to make it a whole again. For her, and for them. This one last chance she should never
loose at any cost. She wipped off her tears and made herself clear and loud enough to hear'Shantanu, I will find you'

With her strong determination, she went to the room where he helped her to learn English. The flash backs of those sweet times came into her mind. One moment he will be so serious and strict like Hitler and and in the other moment he will be so caring and loving.To her surprise she found him lying on the couch with one of his arms resting on his forehead.

She said softly 'Shantanu? Here?'He was still angry with her. He hasn't spoken a single word to her directly. As she walked towards her, he shut his eyes tighter to hide his sadness.'I'm sorry' escaped from her mouth as he jumped up from the couch. He cut her words and said 'Khanak, I know you came here to see how I'm suffereing from everything. Believe me,you can go ahead with your life. Don't worry about me, I will do everything good for Natasha and of course I won't miss you'. His words were just right for him.

She tried to utter a word but her tongue didn't help her. He hasn't done any wrong. He did everything for her. Only for her. His family could not bear their happiness. His last words make her heart to cry. She was burning from the desire to be with him forever. She ran to him and lifted his chin with her hands 'listen to me Shantanu, It's been so long that I'm trying to say I'm so sorry. I have to say thank you for helping me to learn English.You
have done so many things for which I must thank you. I wish I could bring those days back. The times you were so sweet and serious at the same time. I was such a fool I misunderstood you. I could have said this way before. I too like you'

Khanak likes him? He couldn't believe what he saw and heared. Without giving her a chance he took her into his arms.He was shocked as she hugged him back, but thinking it might be another dream he pushed her away and went off. She wasn't in a state to give up. She followed him as he went into the bedroom. She stopped near him. He said, 'Khanak! please leave me alone'. She said in a firm tone. 'No! We need to talk'. He cut her words off 'there is nothing to talk, just leave me alone and please go away'.

With grief, she moved towards the door, while her dhupatta got tucked with the chair. He put his arm out to set it free with her. But before he could reach, she pulled it free, torn apart like her heart. His anger washed away with seeing her torn dhupatta, which he needed to stitch together for her. He should stop her before it's too late.How could he leave her to go like this? He caught her dhupatta and pulled her toward him. She felt the tightening at her neck and slowly moved back until she couldn't take a further step.

Edited by amrita2010 - 15 years ago

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destinylove

@destinylove

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Posted: 15 years ago

#27

hey amrita

nice scene .Just summarise it and may be make it a bit romantic(just idea) post in starone website so that many would be able to enjoy.

MY BEST WISHES FOR UR ANNIVERSARY.

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-Amrita2010

@-Amrita2010

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Posted: 15 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: sshriyaa84
hey amrita

nice scene .Just summarise it and may be make it a bit romantic(just idea) post in starone website so that many would be able to enjoy.

MY BEST WISHES FOR UR ANNIVERSARY.

Hey thanx sweetie 😊 I'm in no mood to do so, but will do later at night, now I'm lil bit busy, but just grabbed sometime to write the scene before RBO starts tonight😊

Thanx alot for the wishes🤗

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Dhrashtee

@dhrashtee

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#29

thanks for the scene....loved it...hopefully we will see something like this in RBO soon........

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shanakforever

@shanakforever

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Posted: 15 years ago

#30

amrita beautiful scene dear..i so want sumthing lke this in the episode....actually i toh want every1s ideas in all tth episodes cause they r awesome...loved the scene

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