Sareeta ke poems!! UPDATED (Page 4,5) - Page 2

Originally posted by: tvrasika

Thanks Nitya.

nope..it's still not showing.

okay..here, just post the link for the siggy in here



^^ that's the code..just delete the http://myWeb.com/smiley.gif and paste the link for your siggy.😃

Once upon a time in Mumbai
Pretty gal , thi
Handsome ladka tha
You ask me what's new haan?
Read on, Read on ...

Pyar mein the lattoo
Natz aur uska shaan
Time set kiya perfect
Dono ne to say ,
I do, I do, I do...

Bore hui , Angel,
Sochne lagi...
"Pheeki hai love story"
"Kya karoon..."
Cupid ko challenge kiya
"Show me something new"

Cupid tehra natkhat
Idea soojhi, deadly
Aur pahungaya Dhulwadi
milane khanak se
Shaantanu...
to start a story oh so new...

Par tragedy hogi beech mein
Who knew ...?!!
Cupid ko koso mat
Poor fella was only trying to
Please his angel...
Showing her magical, love story
Oh so new!!!

Natzy waited , dreaming of
saying I do and cuchie coo
Is beech ho gayi lagan
Khanak ki with Shaantanu!
You still wondering why?
Oh Cmawwn , coz the Angel
was bored, That's Why!
That's how all love stories
begin...

And so did this one,
Once upon a time in Mumbai!

Maddy - I dozed off last night at desk and woke up this morning to stare at my screen reading the line "Sareeta ke Poems" - some surprise that!

Thanks a ton! It's very sweet of you! I just penned them for fun... and am so glad everyone enjoyed it!!!

I do get whacky at times... will post more when I can!!

Waise, subah subah ek aur update kiya hai!

Thanks everyone, for enjoying the lines!!!

Sareeta

ahh! this is so awesome!! 😲 this one is my fav.

ohh btw..sareeta, since your online now..I have a question to ask, do you mind if I add these in the ShaNak AT?? I think it would be the perfect place to put!! 😃

They're just great Sareeta ...i really don't know how you come out with all this... "Done ne to say i do i do i do" haha loved that linee

Sure Nitya. But I dont know what AT means!

It's so sweet of you guys to do this... I just wrote them for fun! :)

^^ Aaah okie! I'd should visit that thread too now! LOL...