FF It's complicated||DISCONTINUED|| IMP NOTE-pg86

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Maddy

@blackdaughter

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#261

I'm SO SORRY!!! I've been so busy that I barely get time to come on IF!! But I'm here to comment for sure today! 😆 Your story is progressing really really well!! 😃

I actually feel so proud because you've improved so much since the beginning of this story and I kinda feel like I've seen you grow as a writer! 😳 Your writing skills have definitely gotten better. I like the progress in Abhi-Natasha and ShaNak's relationship as well.

I might not be the biggest fan of Natasha but their scenes are pretty cute. I'm glad Natasha is starting to notice the importance of Abhi in her life and that Khanak is so comfortable with both but guys feels the difference when Shaan get's to close!! 😉

The story is going at a great pace too. Your details in your writing are good too! 😃 You go into enough debt, but not so much that the readers are bored. So overall, AWESOME job in the last three chapters!!! 😃 Thank you for the PM's sweety. *hug* Hope you update soon.

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dm_hpcrazy

@dm_hpcrazy

Explorer

Posted: 15 years ago

#262

This was soo good, I actually want to see something like this in the show!!

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Dhrashtee

@dhrashtee

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#263

great going...loved the udpate.... abhi is leaving😕....plz try to bring him back😉....love the way shanak are coming close😳............do cont soon.........

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-Unknown-22

@-Unknown-22

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#264

Awesome Awesome...just loved it hope we'd get a scene like that in the show when Shaan teaches Khanak how to dance..it was brill!!

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destinylove

@destinylove

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#265

hey...pooja dear.,

that was awesome.,rocking shanak on the dance floor.loved the part very much.superb

one request just cut down a bit on natasha and include more of shanak( I know this is wrong to ask u but still i can't hold it back ).now that abhi is about to leave i wonder what would happen next.

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Zeba

@FebruaryFlower

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#266

Pooja....that was absolutely perfect!! The character sketches seem so close to Shanak, that I can picture it all happening in my mind as I read it!!!

10 on 10 for this sweets!!

Keep it up!!!!

😃

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Cutiepie121

@cutiepie121

Beginner

Posted: 15 years ago

#267

Hi friends,

i am new here...

Amrita, your writing is too good. keep it up !!. I am eagerly awaiting for your next chapters.

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Pooja

@yasharan.love

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#268

Originally posted by: cutiepie121
Hi friends,
i am new here...

Amrita, your writing is too good. keep it up !!. I am eagerly awaiting for your next chapters.

hey cutie pie... thanks fr liking my writing... but my name is pooja nt amrita...

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sabihaa.

@sabihaa.

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#269

Pooja, Pooja, Pooja.

Your writing is like a drug.
I'm addicted to it.
*sigh*

I just loved the dance.
It's something I think Shaan would do for Khanak.
*sniffles* Now if only someone would love me like that.
Hehe.

What's going on with your other FF btw?
I can't wait for more.

<3.

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Pooja

@yasharan.love

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#270

Originally posted by: -saBii-
Pooja, Pooja, Pooja.

Your writing is like a drug.
I'm addicted to it.
*sigh*

I just loved the dance.
It's something I think Shaan would do for Khanak.
*sniffles* Now if only someone would love me like that.
Hehe.

What's going on with your other FF btw?
I can't wait for more.

<3.

thanks sabii😃

as fr my other FF im developing the plot...I will update it soon though...