for RBO and especially shanak fans!!!

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey everyone!!! I'm one of the fan of RBO.I used to write os of veesha in jpsya forum.I have an idea of an os abt shanak.I want to ask u that if i write an os abt them in which they will confess love.It will be ok with u.If so plzzz do reply then i will post that os in this threat.
Sorry for taking ur precious time😭(b/c i was very confused😕),
With lots of love😃,
Fatima
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Yeah sure,i'm a JPSYA fan too i saw ur story avour Veesha,it was good!
It will be great if u'll write one for Shanak too!!!😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
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i'd be interested in reading! can't wait to read it! 😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
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you should defo write it. i would love to read it. 😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hi Fatima,

plz do write....... i know u will create wonders in whatever u write.........my well wishes are always with u..😛😛😛😛

love
tanvi
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Posted: 15 years ago
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yea..evn i think u shud write an os 4 shanak...well..i hv read ur os in jpysa..awesome!👏
plz go ahead😊😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Note:Sorry for late and longggg update.Thanxxx for ur wonderful comments.I hope u guys like it.This is my first shanak one -shot.So sorry if it is not good.If u like it or not in both conditions plzzz do comments.

ONE SHOT

TUMSE HI

Staring at the full moon from his room window,A boy about 23 years thinking something which is very important to him.His mother has entered in his room.

Mom:shaan beta,tum ready ho gaye??Oh...... my son u r looking very handsome.

Shantanu(Smiling):Mom tell me something new.

Mom:Beta tumhi abhi khanak ko bhi pick karna hai.

Shantanu:Mom aap tu aise kha rahe hain jaise woh kisse dosaray city main rahte hai.Sath hi tu ghar hai iss ka.

At that time,Shantanu's father also enters in his room.

Dad:Shaan beta,Aaj ke farewell party ka baad tum zara business per bhi concentrate karna because i want u to settle in England as a business man after three months.

Mom:Hum tu chate hain ka within these three months tum shadi bhi kar lo.

Shantanu:Ok mom and dad mujhe late ho raha.I have to go.

Dad/mom:Have a good time.

Mom:Think about the marriage too.

Shantanu(thinking):I have to confess my love to her TODAY at any cost.

Shantanu stops his car infront of Khanak's house.He has given her missed call on her mobile.Suddenly the main gate of khanak's home opens.Shaan can't believe his eyes.

Shantanu(Thinking):Is she khanak???I can't believe it,she is looking gorgeous in this red dress.Atleast that will help me confess my love to her.

Khanak(Thinking):Why is he staring like this at me???Am i looking alright???But he is looking very hot in his red shirt and black coat.Khanak hello miss STOP STARING AT HIM..

Shantanu opens car's door for her.She sits in the car.On the way to farewell party neither one of them utters any word.There is complete silence in the car.When they reach at the party.The party has already started.In the party,one of the host announces.

Host:Ok now we are playing a game,In this game.We will off the lights.The person at which the spot light will stop,will sing a song for one special person.So please switch off the lights.

The spot light has stopped on non other than SHANTANU.He comes at the stage.

Shantanu: I will dedicate this song to my best friend Khanak.(The whole crowd applaud and khanak blushes and shaan comes to her)

Na Hai Yeh Pana, Na Khona Hi Hai

Tera Na Hona Jane, Kyun Hona Hi Hai

Tum Se Hi Din Hota Hai, Surmaiye Shaam Aati, Tumse Hi, Tumse Hi

Har Ghadi Saans Aati Hai, Zindagi Kehlati Hai, Tumse Hi, Tumse Hi

Na Hai Yeh Pana, Na Khona Hi Hai

Tera Na Hona Jane, Kyun Hona Hi Hai

Shaan looks at her eyes

Aankhon Mein Ankhein Teri, Bahoon Mein Baahein Teri

Mera Na Mujhmein Kuch Raha, Hua Kya

He holds her from the waist

Baaton Mein Baatein Teri, Raatein Saugatein Teri

Kyun Tera Sab Yeh Ho Gaya, Hua Kya

Main Kahin Bhi Jata Hoon, Tumse Hi Mil Jata Hoon, Tumse Hi, Tumse Hi

Shoor Mein Khamoshi Hai, Thodi Si Behoshi Hai, Tum Se Hi, Tum Se Hi

Aadha Sa Wada Kabhi, Aadhe Se Jayada Kabhi

Jee Chaahe Kar Lu Is Tarah Wafa Ka

Chhode Na Chhoote Kabhi, Tode Na Tute Kabhi

Jo Dhaga Tumse Jud Gaya Wafa Ka

Main Tera Sarmaya Hoon, Jo Main Ban Paya Hoon, Tumse Hi, Tumse Hi

Raaste Mil Jaate Hai, Manzile Mil Jaati Hai, Tumse Hi, Tumse Hi

Shantanu(Bends on his knees):I love u khanak.Main tum se bohat pyar karta hoon.Main tumhi khona nahi chata khanak kyuki tum mere liye bohat important ho.Tu kya tum mujh se pyar karte ho.Agar karte ho tu kya tum mujh se shadi karo ge??

Khanak(Tears in her eyes): Pehle nahi bol sakte thi kya??Ofcourse i love u idiot.Aur main tum jaisay duffer se shadi karnay ka liye tayar hoon afterall tumhi aak intelligent ladki ke zarurat hai jo tumhi line per rakhe.

Khanak wears the ring.They both hug eachother tightly

(The whole crowd applaud)

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Posted: 15 years ago
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HI FATIMA........UR ONE SHOT IS AWESOME.....PLZ COME UP WITH MORE FFS.......I AM REALLY LOOKING FORWARD TO THE UPCOMING TRACK........WHERE SHANAK WILL GET MARRIED TO EACH OTHER
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Posted: 15 years ago
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@Tanvi:Thanxxx for commenting.I m thinking abt writing an ff.Just need a concept.I will try to write an ff soon.I m also waiting for shanak marriage.
fatima

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