FF - PYAAR TOH HONA HI THA - PART 7 pg 10

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Posted: 16 years ago

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karpagam

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Posted: 16 years ago

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great update payal, and thanks for your kind welcome, i m really enjoying my time in this forum, like the small cute fights between nupur and mayank and of course, RR, one of my favourite tv jodi, like the way you develop the chemistry between RR and a great update yaar, thanks 😊

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Devashree

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Nice update kiddo.I like that all your scenes are very natural, they feel very real.⭐️

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swetha10

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Nice updates... luved it... Nupur is so funny.. Ranbir being protective was really nice... Plzz continue soon... N Plzz do PM me when u update........

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Posted: 16 years ago

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hey payal.. Awesome ff.. Very interestin:) do continue soon

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Ashita

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Posted: 16 years ago

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waitin for the next part.:)really very nice one..

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Payal Patel

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Posted: 16 years ago

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PART 7

RANBIR- Angel! [he threw her a breathtaking smiled] how are you?
ANGEL- Popular... like always [she flipped her hair]
Mayank Coughed [he was trying to hide a laugh]
ANGEL- Well anyways. Are you guys going to the dance next week?
NUPUR- What dance?
MAYANK- oh th..
ANGEL- the collage's annual spring dance [she cut Mayank off]
NUPUR- Oh I see.
ANGEL- So Ranbir.. you taking anyone? [she batted her eyelashes]
RANBIR- I don't know yet [he smiled at Rano who smiled back]
ANGEL- oh.. well tell me if you do [she smiled at Ranbir once more] Bye guys [she started to leave] Oh [she turned around] Welcome to the collage girls
Angel walked off.
MAYANK- She was all over you.
RANBIR- I know [he sighed]
MAYANK- Well... she is kinda cute, you could ask her to the dance [he shrugged]
RANBIR- No Way
MAYANK- Why not?
RANBIR- Because! She's not my type.
MAYANK- And what is your type?
RANBIR- Well... I don't know.
RANO- Ranbir it seems as though all the girls in collage are fida over you [she laughed] and you don't know what your type of girl is?
RANBIR- Well.. I'll figure it out eventually I guess. But now we gotta go to class.

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After collage Rano said bye to her sister. She was going to Ranbir's house.
RANBIR- Your gonna love my house!
RANO- Are you sure It's okay for me just to show up? I mean, your parents don't even know I'm coming
RANBIR- Stop worrying, its fine.
RANO- Okay [she still sounded unsure]
RANBIR- Stop worrying. My mom won't mind. She'll think you were sent by god to reform me [he laughed]
RANO- I see [she laughed]

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Ranbir and Rano arrived to Ranbir's house.
RANO- Wow.
Ranbir's house was amazing. As soon as they walked in there was a grand sitting room, behind, on either side there were stairs leading to the second floor.
RANBIR- What? My house.. oh its nothing. [he shrugged]
RANBIR's MOM- Ranbir? Is that you?
A lady came by the door, she was dressed in a very gorgeous sari and she had a wide smile on her face.
RANBIR- Hey Mom!
RANBIR's MOM- Hello, and who is this? [she smiled very warmly]
RANBIR- This is my friend Rano. [Ranbir grinned]
RANO- Hello Aunty [she smiled]
RANBIR's MOM- Hi Beta. Welcome to our home! [she was smiled again] Come in!
Ranbir, Rano and Ranbir's mom went to the sitting area and sat down.
RANBIR's MOM- So Ranbir. how come you haven't told me about this friend before? [she gave Ranbir and teasing look]
RANBIR- Well. She just moved here. Today was her first day at collage
RANBIR's MOM- First day, aur pata bhi liya? [she laughed]
Rano blushed
RANBIR's MOM- Im joking dear [she chuckled]
RANBIR- Ha Ha. Very funny. [he rolled his eyes] Actually Rano's here to explain today's lesson to me.
RANBIR's MOM- L.. L.. Lesson? [she seemed shocked]
RANBIR- Yup [he shrugged his shoulders]
Ranbir's mom felt his forehead.
RANBIR's MOM- Are you coming down with something? A fever maybe?
RANBIR- Mom! Cut it out!

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