Master poet Valmiki

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Posted: 17 years ago
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On reading Valmiki Ramayan completely and with proper attention, we come to appreciate what a master poet Valmiki was. I cannot do justice to his genius completely but let me mention some of important points: -

Valimiki speaks many profound things in just a few words. In the first verse Valmiki calls Narad as thoughtful mediator, studious sage in scriptures, knower of truth and untruth, excellent thinker, and sublime and expert enunciator. Narad is glorified because Valmiki later asks some questions to Narad. Those readers who are not well aware of who Narad is may wonder, "So what if somebody called Narad said this? What is the guarantee of the accuracy of his statement?" By glorifying Narad, the Ramayan clearly shows why Narad's word carries weightage. It is also worth being noted that Valmiki does not write paragraphs after paragraphs describing about Narad. Rather, in just a few words, he makes it very clear as to why he asked the questions to Narad. Usually when people speak few words, then it is often not clear as to what they are trying to say. They need to explain a lot to clarify their point. However, Valmiki makes his point clear in just a few words.

In some verses starting from the second verse, Valmiki lists some qualities and asks Narad as to who has these qualities. These verses make the purpose of Ramayan very clear. We see that the purpose is to show as to how a good human being should behave because the qualities listed in Valmiki's questions to Narad are all good. Often people write stories and the moral of the story is not clear because of which the story is interpreted in different (often contradictory) manners by different critics. But Valmiki does not leave any chance for misinerpretation. Some writers write in the beginning itself what the purpose of their writing is. Making purpose explicit in the beginning can be considered a good essay writing skill but not a good story writing skill. A good story should be such that the story itself should make the purpose clear. This is what Valmiki does because the question-answer session between Valmiki and Narad is a part of the story.

I will write more later.

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Thanks avinaash for this post

Valmiki is adikavi(first poet) of this world. I love the way he wrote the story of Ram, portrayed the characters.
To understand Ram fully one must read Valmiki Ramayana.
It is the best version of Ramayan. Lord Brahma predicted that Valmiki Ramayan will last till the end of this world.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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thanks avinash 4 this post.
and yes purvi valmiki is the first poet of the world and his first verse which is also the first verse is-


maa nishhaada pratiSThaamtva | magamaH shaashvatiiH samaaH |
yat krau~Ncha mithunaat eka | mavadhiiH kaama mohitam ||

this verse is uttered by him as a shap to a hunter when hi killed a swan couple. and it automatically came in sages mouth as a sap to hunter. latter sage realized that This verse he uttered is in four-quarters, each quarter with equally posited eight syllables. so it became the first verse of poetry
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Posted: 17 years ago
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thx avinash for this topic valmiki was brilliant he write ramayana so beaytifuly that after many yug it look like a fres story
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Thanks akhl - we've been missing your posts.
Valmiki's Ramayan is the best - its rooted in realism and we appreciate the nobleness of Ram's human characteristics. His Ramayan is probably the most historically accurate. No miracles , no chamatkars , no no fantasy - yet the characters shine.

Valmiki Ramayan has -
no Ahalya turning into a stone
no Parashuram appearing instantly at Janak's court as Sita garlands Ram
no Lakshman rekha
No Shabri giving Ram her eaten ber
No rocks floating on water
No maya-Sita confusion


It doesnt need any of these - its characters are great because of their great actions and great wisdom
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: shruti_gauri1

thx avinash for this topic valmiki was brilliant he write ramayana so beaytifuly that after many yug it look like a fres story

exactly😳

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Posted: 17 years ago
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I agree wid u aalochak
Valmiki's Ramayana is the most brilliant gem of literature.This version is very realistic there r less miracles in it. When I read this book I feel Ram standing before me.

Valmiki had all the qualities of a good poet. A good poet or writer must have a very soft heart so that he can feel the pain of others.The first verse uttered by him shows how soft his heart was.
maa nishhaada pratiSThaamtva | magamaH shaashvatiiH samaaH |
yat krau~Ncha mithunaat eka | mavadhiiH kaama mohitam ||

He had most beautifully described the unlimited eternal love, respect n understanding between Ram-Sita. He has beautifully written their emotions. Ram-Sita had happily accepted all pains for each other. Ramayana tell us what is dharma, duty n true selfless love

Ramayana is a story of Ram n Sita. The word "Rama" in Ramayana means both Ram n Sita. "Ramaa" is the other epithet of Sita. Valmiki has given equal importance to Sita. Sita is described by Valmiki as 'self-same Ram'.Valmiki has portrayed Sita as a very strong lady,n a great scholar, greatest husband devotee.

Valmiki Ramayan contains all "rasas". I love way Valmiki described Ram's virtues, his respect for women, his bravery n war-skills. I love the way portrayed the pain of Ram, Sita n other characters.

He has brilliantly portrayed the bond between Ram n Laxman. Ram-laxman acted as friend, philosopher n guide of each other. Though laxman used to describe himself as servant of Ram, for Ram Laxman was his life, his best friend. He use to address Laxman with great respect. Sometimes Laxman acted like a elder brother. Ram never use to eat anything without Laxman.


Edited by coolpurvi - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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thanks for all the info.

i beleive both in the autheticity of VALMIKI RAMAYAN as well as RAMCHARIT MANAS .

both VALMIKI & TULSIDAS met LORD RAMA, HANUMAN & LAKSHMAN themselves ,so whatever VALMIKI & TULSIDAS WROTE abt RAMA & SITA was authentic.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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yes..i would also like to say tht there was also something called the 'sita principle' just like the 'rama principle'. The sita principle is all about the virtues and wisdom which women should posess..it is about ideal womanhood. 😊
Edited by camella - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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thnx for this post and to all those who gave valualbe inputs

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