MY POEMS - Page 2

Originally posted by: Karin3

Bhaiya, wonderful poem👏 I could understand mostly.

Keep posting more and more.

georgeous poem on hanumanji bhaiyaa!!

Originally posted by: jai sri ram

georgeous poem on hanumanji bhaiyaa!!

i have triedto sing it with the tune

'hum katha sunate'songed by lav kush

& it's sounds very very well .....

i mean so very gr8 lyrics 👏👏👏

if i could, i will have posted what i am singing with ur superb dhamaal lyrics

pls when u will have free time can u make a poem on ramji & ramayana in hindi then a brief translation in english please ??

thanks in advance

this is a poem on indrajeet. this is for mallika di na d chatterdi.till now i have written poems on gurmi-debi,ram ,sita,hanuman,lakshman etc.This is the first time i am writing poem on any 'RAKSHASA'.I AM NOT SURE HOW THE POEM WILL BE. I WILL TRY MY BEST BUT PLS MALLIKA DI AND CHATTERDI FORGIVE ME IF ANY MISTAKE

Ravan sut INDRAJEET

suno ye kahani,suno ye kahani

Rakshas jiska nayak hain,bakhaye unka jibani

suno ye kahani,adbhut ye kahani.

lankeshwar hain RAVAN Indrajeet unka jaye

bharya mandodari se is suputra ko uo paye

usi Indrajeet ka jiban gatha ko hum bakhaye

khalnayak ho kar bhi maryada nayak ka paye

meghnad jiska nad hein megh sa prajanda

par ahankari pita ka putra bhi he uddanda

par bal me uo bahut bhi bhari,asurguru se shi shiksha dhari

garjan megh sa jiska meghnad nam paye

ravan ke is sut ne shiv ka kathor tap kar jaye

ghor parishram,ghor tap ka sufal paye uo bhari

prakat unke huye samne swaya shree suldhari

bar paye shivji se,paye shakti sare mahan

bijayrath bhi kare pradan ashutosh bhagwan

bal paye ho ahang se mad ravan ka ye sut

adharma ko apnaye uo bhi ho dharma se bichyut.

pita ke marg par uo bhi chale,pita agga ko hi uo jo pale

anyayi ho uo bhi,ho uo papachari

atyachar kare uo sabme bhari

par bhi hum gatha unka sunaye

jo putra pita ahang ka bali ban jaye

birta me uo sreshtha hain,liya indra ko bhi jeet

meghnad se ravan sut ban gaye INDRAJEET.

patni ke rup me sulochana nagkanya ko paye

sang nag debi ke ashish nag pash le jaye

mahabalshali uo,kare gyan bhi dharan

par ahangkar bane nash ka karan

jo bhul RAVAN ne ki uo bhul Indrajeet kar jaye

RAM rup me Narayan ko na pehechan paye

par swayam bhagwan se bhi yuddha kiye asadharan

mrityu tak kare ran par parajay ko na kiya baran.

nagpaash se swayam bhagwan ko bhi dharti pe giraye

bhupatit ho ram lakhan sare dharti chintit ho jaye

garur ne nagpash ko hataye,apr indrajeet ka bal na ghat jaye

shakti aise lakhan pe chalaye,shesh avtaar murchit ho jaye

bijli jaise aye shakti

bare ghatak ban gaye ye shakti

lakhan ko jisne di giraya

meghnad ka ho aise shakti

jis shakti se kape dharti sare

aur sheshavatari dharti pe gire

aise shakti ho jinke pas bhayankar

Indrajeet ho uo pralayankar.

dekh lakhna ko murchit ,byakul raghubar pran

bin lakhan na RAM bhi jiye,keharahe SHREE BHAGWAN

Hanumant ne sanjibani layi,soumitra ke pran bachayi

phir byarth indrajeet ho jaye,par har uo na sweekare

aisa man ka bal tha ,tha aisa shourya mahan

birta me uo sreshthe the,kahe swayam RAM BHAGWAN

nikumbhila yagna karne jaye

par kal se bach na paye

sang banar lakhan uha jaye

yagna kar dhyasta unka aaye

phir bhi shakti ka murat Indrajeet ne na kiya har sweekar

yagna dhwasta uhe par abhi bhe shakti tha unka apar

brahmastra,narayanastra aur pashupat sab lakhan par jo chalayi

par sab ban kare lakhan parikrama tunir me unka laut hi aayi

khul gaya antar nayan jan gaye INDRAJEET

ye to swayam bhagwan he,kaise paye inse jeet.

Ranbumi se pita sameep aye

Pita ko samjhane ka cheshta kar jaye

Ki RAM he swayam NARAYAN

lelo he pita unka hi sharan

MATA SITA ko lautao

RAM charan me ashray pao

RAM he jag kripanidhan ,he sharangata swami

He NARAYAN uhi,he uo antarwami

Par murakh RAVAN na jane

Ranchor kahe indrajeet ko di tane

Purusharth par jab ho aghat

Kaise chup rahe paye meghnad

Chale ran ko jan mrityu he nischit

Abichal rehekar na ho chintit

Pita agga ko sir dhare dene ko balidan

Chale ek beer putra dene apna pran.

Lakhan ban se mare jaye,par khyati koi na mita jo paye

Ek beer uo sada kehelaye,jisne mrityu sweekar kar jaye

Unka beerta ka karte he gungan

Swayam raghav Narayan ne di une beer ka man

Aapne bastra se shareer ko dhakkar

Samman unko de RAM raghubar

Jo durlav sthan rishi muni bhi na paye

Ram sparsh se meghnad pa jaye

Jiban me jisne kiya kebal abichal sangram

Mrityu par unko ashish de swayam SHREE RAM.

Hum usi beer ka gatha tumhe sunaye

Pita agga ko jo balidan pran kar jaye

Paap ka diya sang to phal uska uo paye

Par un jaisa beer aagakari putra ka gun hum gaye

Jo har sukh dukh me pita ka saath nibhaye

Pita agga ko jo balidan aapna pran kar jaye

Hum Ravan sut us Indrajeet gatha gaye

Rakshash ho kar bhi param samman uo paye.

Originally posted by: jai sri ram

very nice bhaiyaa ! & thanx that u accepted

wow saby

Originally posted by: chatterbox

wow saby

i got tears in my eyes

it was such a sweet poem

ya so what if i like indrajeet so much

but u have described him so well

malks i know u wont understand this

i wud try to translate for u later

wonderful work saby

can u copy paste this in praful fan club

mayb wud ask malks to put it on first pg then what say

good job too good job saby

loved it

if real indrajeet was alive he wud have hugged u for sure 😆

Originally posted by: jingjing

verrrrrrry verrrrrrrrrrry verrrrrrrrrrrrrry nice poem again Sabydeep bhaiya.....U really Rock😛😛😛