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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hi friends,here i am writing a story.It is based on RKAB,most of the characters will b present here but we will finish this story with our creativity.i am starting.The one who will reply after me will write the next part and we will continue this story one after another.

Here i am starting-

once there lived a girl named Rani in a village of india with her brother munna and mother.Rani was a nice,simple,intelligent and helpful girl.she was always the first girl of her class.Rani was always found helping her mother and other women in the village in there work.her life was full of happiness.but things changed when her mother died.as Rani and Munna didnt have any relatives 2 support them,they had 2 go 2 d city 2 live with their uncle and aunt.................................................

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Posted: 17 years ago
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but her aunt was greedy, short temper............lady and she hate the sight of these children.............she was very unhappy with her husband when he brought them ........to their house...........her husband had soft corner for these kids........but helpless in front of his wife...........but after lots of persuation...........that greedy aunt .agreed to let rani and munna stay with them.............but her motive was .......to make them servant so that could save her money..........

PS: hi ............it's verynice and creative post........i have tried my best but you keep continueing ..............

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Posted: 17 years ago
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And they decide to send Rani to the city with Choti rani to become a servant telling her mother that she is going to city for studying and also told lie to CR that she is illiterate......And it did happened as they wanted and poor Rani ends up becoming a servant of the Mahal.......
PLEASE CONTINUE THE STORY😃. if u dont mind there is a mistake in the post of the topic starter, Rani's mother is not dead but her father is dead😕
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hmmmm nikki this is just a story n not RKAB story.. Lemmme continue from u..
Rani reaches the mahal as a servant and is all sad. But due to her Uncle n Aunt's threat she had to stay there.. She was given the floor cleaning work in the palace. Since morning till night she would work hard.. One day while cleaning the floor near a podium she saw a rat..She was afraid and tried to run towards the podium.. Suddenly a photo frame fell into her lap.. And this photo was that of the eldest prince of the royal family... She was mesmerised by his look and decided to keep this photo with her..
Guys this look great.. continue..
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Posted: 17 years ago
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PS : monu tune photo frame le hi li akhir main...chalo no probs.......
in night she went to her room.....and than she took out that photo that she had hide under her pillow...........she could nto lift her eyes from yudi's photo........the moment she saw photo "oose kuchh kuchh hone laga"😉
she cleaned that photo with her duppata.............
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Posted: 17 years ago
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beena that was the mini frame..But Yudi to Yudi hai.. Suddenly in the night she had a knock on her door.. She got scared and hid the frame..After opening the door, she saw the headservant Bhanu lookin angrily at her.. She got afraid..'did bhanumati see the frame with me'.. Before she could say anything she was ordered to help in shifting some gift's to the eldest prince room..She agreed
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Posted: 17 years ago
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she was aprehansive to go to prince's room......but bhanu was not in mood to listen a single word from rani's mouth........... bhanu: kaam chor jabbhi dekho ,,room main aake aaraam karne lagti hain rani: lekin .bhanumati ji... bhanu: kuchh nahi ab jaaooyaha se.....varnaa aisi saja dungi kijindagi bhar yaad rakhegi

rani who was very tired from whole day work could not even walk..........mostly all gift had been delivered to prince's room leaving only last one........so carrying that rani proceed towards prince's room

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Rani was feeling cold in Prince's mahal..She was not used to air con.. She took her dupatta on her head and was holding it tightly with one hand..She had the gift on her other hand..As she entered the room she was unaware prince has already entered his room and was changing clothes..😉😉😉
aagey tum beena..
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Posted: 17 years ago
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are yaar kya tumbhi prince is changing cloths..........i closed my eyes how would i will write???????😳
OK the moment rani opened the door and saw yudi's back who was almost at the point of taking out his shirt....rani was bewildered..........shook and shiver..........and the same moment yudi also turned to see who is there but rani had her back.towards him........as raniw as too tired and feeling very cold already was trempbling could not keep her balance as was holding heavy parcle..........was about to fell
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Posted: 17 years ago
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😆😆 kapil looks great shirtless.. okie okie back to the story..
Rani could see her future now..The gift will be broken, the noise will bring others there and she would be thrown out of the palace..Thus will end all her dreams to educate her brother munna and both of her n munna will now be at her Aunt's behest...What she could not see was that Yudi came behind her and he was holding her from falling down.. She was sooo afraid that se wont open her eyes and had clenched on the door firmly.. Suddenly she realised..their is a warmth in her grip..She opened only one of her eyes to make sure nothing went wrong. And she saw the Prince.. The prince about whom all the gals in the servant rooms used to talk about.. The Prince whose name was enough for them to drool on.. The same prince holding her..

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