Sleet Of Emotional Quivers On RadhaKrishn Eternal Love-CC #3 - Page 36

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: RainFire125


Will wait for your comments.. then I will just add on :) ... if I start writing it will be just a vent out as Radhi correctly said hahaha

Gayatri , eager to read your comments on the episode. Yes, they didn't handle the scene properly. It was a lackluster way of depicting the most romantic scene from Bagavath Puran. They used this scene for justifying the jealousy Badha in Radha!
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Viswasruti

The Conversation between Radha as the waiting maiden and Krishna the Divine lover![ unedited version, with all sorts of mistakes]

"Sakha Krishna, Give us our clothes please, we are ready to give you back whatever you want from us" pleaded Chandra.

Krishna put a demand in front of them and they all agreed except Radha. Then he was ready to give back their clothes but Radha was angry and she didn't accept the offer considered it as a defeat!

They all knew what Krishna will ask in return and with an eager wave of happiness, they accepted that young lad's demand!

Radha was thinking, " Let the shameless maidens adorn their tender arms around his shoulder and waist and let them dance gleefully with him on the bank of River Yamuna. But I am not going to pardon him this time! How dare he want to see the young maidens' beauty with this ploy?" Radha was fuming inside and didn't come out to grab the clothes from his hands.

The Gopis tried to convince Radha to accept his demand, but she refused to do so! They all went back to their homes to let the lovelorn rivals to solve their problem in leisure.

The undercurrents of water are now ticklish to her body which lighted her body and soul inside, the anger was disappeared and the frown on her face was changed as a smirk.

And she tried to conceal the edge of a smile when she got a funny idea in her head, a vain attempt to keep her creeping grin at bay! The intention behind her perking lips wasn't something that could easily be ensured. She surveyed the bathing Ghat with her wide eyes and then started pleading Krishna with a honey tone ..." Krishna, have pity on your Radha, see, the small fish in the water are touching me here and there tickling me with their tender movements, close your eyes once so that I can come out to wear my clothes."

A mischievous smile on Krishna's face," you are so fortunate Radha, the Narayan himself is playing with you under the water in the form of His first incarnation, the fish [ Matsyavataar]!" --- to be continued ...


Definitely finish this story and post it ... will be waiting to read the rest :)
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Posted: 6 years ago
Aww aww, that's so cute! Can't wait for the next part, I'm blushing so hard ATM! :))
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Radhikerani

Yayy! Will read it for sure! Fire away! :D

Radhi, just started writing with a momentary thought. 😊
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Posted: 6 years ago
Hi, Syama 🤗[ want to call you like this ] Syama Sunder our Krishna! Happy to see you Krishna.😊
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Radhikerani

Aww aww, that's so cute! Can't wait for the next part, I'm blushing so hard ATM! :))

Thank you Radhi. Will try to write tomorrow.😊
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Viswasruti

Thank you Radhi. Will try to write tomorrow.😊

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Can't wait for it! :D
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Posted: 6 years ago
Beautiful write up Madhuri. Please continue it soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
Madhuri Ji.. Beautiful write up👏

Now will wait impatiently for you to continue😭

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