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Leone

@Silver_Shiver

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Posted: 7 years ago

#131

Originally posted by: Asshi...
So finally you updated it!
You took your time but I forgive you as I got big waly update.

I was confused on the dream part but then I realize its dream and I liked it. The best part.

Asad dialogues are best of all. He is such awesome person in your story. I liked his character.

Through dream I liked Manik character too.😉

It was fantastic.

Yeah I finally updated it!

Thanks for forgiving me Your Highness!

I am glad you liked it!

He is the best in my story I believe!!😉

Yes Manik is also nice but not more than Asad!

Thanks Asshi!!😊

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Leone

@Silver_Shiver

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Posted: 7 years ago

#132

Originally posted by: CookieBee
Awesome os i love it.

Thanks!

Glad you liked it!😊

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Leone

@Silver_Shiver

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Posted: 7 years ago

#133

Originally posted by: AisiDeewangi
Nice update...thanks for the pm

Thanks!😊

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Leone

@Silver_Shiver

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Posted: 7 years ago

#134

Originally posted by: raspi
Nycc

Thanks!😊

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Leone

@Silver_Shiver

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Posted: 7 years ago

#135

Have replied to all comments in Previous pages! :)

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Leone

@Silver_Shiver

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Posted: 7 years ago

#136

Originally posted by: sweetie_angel
Sweet one

Thanks!!😊

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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

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Posted: 7 years ago

#137

Maina, where were you all this while? 😆 I need more write-ups from you!! 😳

I will start from the start. This has been a good read. For me it was like a journey of a couple from being strangers to lovers, life partners in true sense.

For me the best part was they started their relationship with friendship. But moreover, they had been honest with each other right from the start. That's a beauty of such relations.

Manik? 😆 Okay! I liked how he was brought to make her realize that she had moved on. Her nightmare had great results for Asad though.

It was amazing to see how their families, well, mostly Asad's family and Humaira, were supportive yet never let the opportunity to tease them slip. For me, Ayaan had been hilarious. His sudden entry, disturbing their moment, capturing their special moments in his camera.. all of that had been such a treat to read.

The so-called guests who visited them for lunch, well they were handled with care. 😆 I was in fact glad that Zoya stated that if they insulted her, she would instead handle them as Mrs. Zoya Asad Ahmed Khan. 😳

I loved how jealousy messed with her emotions. Even the nature played their own game while they were high on emotions, soaking them with desire.. but she still was shy the next morning. 😳😆

I can go on and on gushing about how beautifully each part was woven.. but I will stick to this much. I really enjoyed this whole One-Shot, thoroughly! 😊 Hope to read more from you. Do we have more lying there with you? 😉

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aanchal

@Loving_life

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Posted: 7 years ago

#138

hello maina!

okay I read the part 1 of the beautiful Os

and I loved it sooo much

It's such a beautiful story

so hard to express it in words

At first I was confused seeing Zoya so sad with her Nikaah

was like whom did she got married to

broad smile came to my lips as soon as groom introduce himself as Asad Ahmed Khan to Humeira

Asad's reaction seeing everyone crying was hilarious

loved the way how he handle her even after knowing her past that she loved somene else that kind of mentality we need in our society

that bed scene was epic😆😆😆I could imagine AAK's cute face

Awww Asad is such a good person but ultra good in this story

he adopted his best friends daughters

that was sooo nice of him

and loved it the way even Zoya accepted the cutiepies wholeheardly😃

loved to read their relation blooming you wrote it so beautifully

OH MY GOD!!! Asad confessed his feeling Oh My that was sooo beautiful so magical

but I'm kind off worried seeing Zoya's expression

cant wait to read her response

overall it was mindblowing and suberb update

just loved it

keep it up yaar

now I will go and read part 2

bye till then

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Leone

@Silver_Shiver

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Posted: 7 years ago

#139

Originally posted by: -shenz-
Maina, where were you all this while? 😆 I need more write-ups from you!! 😳
I will start from the start. This has been a good read. For me it was like a journey of a couple from being strangers to lovers, life partners in true sense.

I was in my home!!😆 Hahah sure!😉 I am glad to know this!!

For me the best part was they started their relationship with friendship. But moreover, they had been honest with each other right from the start. That's a beauty of such relations.

It is my belief that if you cannot be good friends then you cannot make any relation of yours work!! Honesty and Trust are key to love!😉

Manik? 😆 Okay! I liked how he was brought to make her realize that she had moved on. Her nightmare had great results for Asad though.

I was watching KYY those days!😛 Haha but still night mares are night mares only!!😭😆

It was amazing to see how their families, well, mostly Asad's family and Humaira, were supportive yet never let the opportunity to tease them slip. For me, Ayaan had been hilarious. His sudden entry, disturbing their moment, capturing their special moments in his camera.. all of that had been such a treat to read.

Ayaan has always been a hilarious character!!😆

The so-called guests who visited them for lunch, well they were handled with care. 😆 I was in fact glad that Zoya stated that if they insulted her, she would instead handle them as Mrs. Zoya Asad Ahmed Khan. 😳

I personally loved that dialogue of her!!😉😆

I loved how jealousy messed with her emotions. Even the nature played their own game while they were high on emotions, soaking them with desire.. but she still was shy the next morning. 😳😆

Shyness is her nature so...!😆 Wow nice line @bold.

I can go on and on gushing about how beautifully each part was woven.. but I will stick to this much. I really enjoyed this whole One-Shot, thoroughly! 😊 Hope to read more from you. Do we have more lying there with you? 😉

Haha I am loving your words!! I am glad you liked it Shenz!!
Yup I have few more disasters with me!😆

Thanks for the beautiful review Shenz!!

Glad you liked it!😊

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Leone

@Silver_Shiver

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Posted: 7 years ago

#140

Originally posted by: --Aanchal--
hello maina!

Holla Aanchal!!🤗
Long time no seen!!

okay I read the part 1 of the beautiful Os
and I loved it sooo much
It's such a beautiful story
so hard to express it in words
At first I was confused seeing Zoya so sad with her Nikaah
was like whom did she got married to
broad smile came to my lips as soon as groom introduce himself as Asad Ahmed Khan to Humeira
Asad's reaction seeing everyone crying was hilarious

I am glad!! I was personally waiting for your review!😆😉 Hahah Asad and Zoya are meant to be! How can I make her marry anyone else?😆

loved the way how he handle her even after knowing her past that she loved somene else that kind of mentality we need in our society
that bed scene was epic😆😆😆I could imagine AAK's cute face
Awww Asad is such a good person but ultra good in this story
he adopted his best friends daughters
that was sooo nice of him
and loved it the way even Zoya accepted the cutiepies wholeheardly😃

Yes society needs to accept things!! I was a bit biased towards Asad character in this story so that is why he is ultra good in this!!😛 Zoya is a pure soul you see!😉

loved to read their relation blooming you wrote it so beautifully
OH MY GOD!!! Asad confessed his feeling Oh My that was sooo beautiful so magical
but I'm kind off worried seeing Zoya's expression
cant wait to read her response

Thank you!! Yes he confessed keeping it simple yet magical!😉
Zoya's response!! Read it to know!😆😉

overall it was mindblowing and suberb update
just loved it
keep it up yaar
now I will go and read part 2
bye till then