AsYa OS: Moving On. (NEW)* (Completed)*

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Priyanka

@Imqueenofmylife

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Posted: 7 years ago

#101

Nice update dear

Loved it..

Very well written

Thanks for pm

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Linsie

@Linsie

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+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#102

that was beautiful story...

sweet..and great..

enjoyed all the way...

missing asya story...

right more

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Linsie

@Linsie

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Posted: 7 years ago

#103

thanks for the pm..

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sweet_tehs

@sweet_tehs

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#104

It ended just how it should have,,

It was very nice.

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Taahir

@taahir004

Achiever

+ 10

Posted: 7 years ago

#105

This OS indeed was Phenomenal

just every single sentence was absolutely beautiful and real

I loved it

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Asshi...

@Asshi...

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#106

So finally you updated it!

You took your time but I forgive you as I got big waly update.

I was confused on the dream part but then I realize its dream and I liked it. The best part.

Asad dialogues are best of all. He is such awesome person in your story. I liked his character.

Through dream I liked Manik character too.😉

It was fantastic.

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Ankita

@AisiDeewangi

Inactive

Posted: 7 years ago

#107

Nice update...thanks for the pm

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Leone

@Silver_Shiver

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#108

Originally posted by: Quboolhaizoya
Yeppp I am first

I am left with no words to tell about the update
You made me speechless, but I will try my best to tell how awesome the update was

It was fantabulous update
Loved every bit of the story
AsYa were cute as always
Maahi and Meeru too were adorable
Zoya releasing her love for Asad was written well
Hate Tanveer as always
AsYa romantic scenes were fantastic