AsYa (KaBhi) OS (Collab) || TU HI TU ||

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Hoor

@HooriAsadMalik

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Posted: 7 years ago

#21

Thanks for the pm..

I totally loved it😳

And yeah would love to see u both collab again.😃

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maha15

@maha15

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Posted: 7 years ago

#22

Luvd it...it was amazing...waiting for next one..AsYa..😳

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@Sp8699

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Posted: 7 years ago

#23

Loved the OS... do write more...

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Pixiepixel11

@Pixiepixel11

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Posted: 7 years ago

#24

Wow that was superb loved it so much.

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Linsie

@Linsie

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Posted: 7 years ago

#25

👏 wow...
what lovely OS...
beautiful fun teasing
smiling and little romantic

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Neha

@Asyalover

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Posted: 7 years ago

#26

so cute and romantic

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Mayur Chan

@MayurChan

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Posted: 7 years ago

#27

Hellooo Di...

Hellooo Sue Ji...

I hope you both are doing good...jahan bhi busy hoo..😆

Pehle toh apologies for being super late in commenting on this story...but haa deir aaye dururst aaye...suna hai soch maan bhi le...

I really liked this part Di...

Sue meko iss Asad mein Kabir ke kuch characteristics dikhe...hai which is good...

Meko sirf ek baat ajeeb lagi don't mind me telling...Hindi zyada use karni chaiyeh thi aap dono ko toh dialogues mein aur mazaa ata...english mein bhi better thay...

But...

What i really loved about this OS was the choice of song , and ASYA's proposal and the words for expressing their love , especially Zoya ke...kudos to both of you for that...

Bahut khoob...

Keep doing well and write more such happy stories...aacha lagta hai...mei toh soch hee raha tha itni deir tak imagination hai kahin maar ne de aap dono ko since Sue has a fascination for sad things😆

DON'T MIND PLZZ...

Continue writing more DI...and Sue Ji aap bhi yahan aaya kijiye .😊