Ek pal AsYA FF LAST PART

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey guys I'm so sorry for being more then tooo much late for this but to be honest I had written this when I uploaded last chapter and just didn't proof read it so I had to do that. The real reason for delay is after that I didn't came to forum and I forgot that I didn't posted the last part. Well I think the readers of the FF are no longer here 😆 but i found this in my notes so I had to upload it. So the original post has been closed so I am posting it here.


Zoya thinks while looking at the moon that even though it's her nikah today after Few hours but she is so unlucky that she can't even enjoy the anxiety of the bride before her nikah cuz this nikah won't happen. She than ask forgiveness from allah that I have made joke of such a pure ritual of nikah by doing this drama just to make a person realize but that person doesn't care. It was almost 4 o'clock in the morning but she was still awake than she heard azaan and goes to offer her prayers. She prays to never have love in her life again and that she want her first love to be the last one. Aapi sees her praying and crying in the prayer while jiju joins her. Jiju had told aapi everything ,aapi asks jiju that why always this happens with her why can't she get happiness to which jiju replies she will have her happiness but not like this she will have to forget all that. Jiju leaves in tension while aapi wanted to go and hug her tight so that she can make her believe that no matter what they are always with her.

On the other hand Asad is also praying for his love and than dilshad comes in to find him folding prayer mat. Dilshad knocks to get his attention and than he invited her in. They say in silence when he broke it by saying "ammi I ...wo actua... No ...I actual...ammi u know ...that" dilshad couldn't understand or even get what he wants so she asked him whether he want to say something" to which he replied "jee...no..actually yes...see ammi I ...wo ...u know that a bulb is... Nothing without a light... And I... Actua..." He stopped as he didn't wanted wo and actually in his conversation as they make him confuse while he fail tried to express his desire to get back Zoya. Dilshad looked at the bulb in his room and than at him "so u want bulb...(seeing his reaction) or light" he quickly replied "light!!!..." Dilshad looked up at him in confusion "i mean ... I want light to complete... My life." Still it was too far from understanding so dilshad stood up in annoyance and said "uffo Asad when will u learn to say something directly...";"ammi I actu...";"don't u dare say wo and actually I will ... Do something to u or to myself." She leaves from there while Asad stands empty handed.

It was already 2 in the noon and the nikah was on 5 o'clock, while Zoya sat besides the window looking outside. Aapi and jiju were really worried for her when jiju gets a call from dilshad and he cuts the call and went in the room in a not so cool mood of his. Zoya looked at him and his angry look she understood something is wrong."what happened jiju.??"; "it's enough Zoya till when u r going to sit in sorrow, till when r u going to cry, tell me till when." Zoya was shocked to see him like this while he continued "I know what happened was not right, even I supported u but I am not gonna support u anymore if u r going to remain like this, u r making me regret my decision." This alarms Zoya and she inquires "matlab?" He paused and turned around from her and said "u will get married today only...that's it" Zoya was shocked while aapi standing out was shocked too she wants to get in but than stopped. Zoya asked him "what r u saying jiju..";"I am saying true, I know u were not gonna do that before even I suggested u but I want u to get married and that too today."; Zoya had no more tears to fall for this situation as all has been used up already but her eyes spoke on her behalf. "No matter what and how is he, he is ready to accept u and u ... U r rejecting him. U don't love him but he does and I know that he will keep u happy."...Zoya didn't expected this "Jiju do u even know what u r asking me to do...";"what I am asking is only right, I have seen your decision and their results too so I want this to be accepted." Saying this jiju Leaves while Zoya breaks down, aapi stepped forward to console her but jiju held her by her arm and signaled in no.

Ayaan dressed up as groom ,he remembers what happened and is lost in thoughts when rashid comes in to take him as all are ready to leave for the venue. He thoughts of talking to him but than without talking anything he leaves with him to join everybody. There in the hall daadi comes with the tray of sehra and asks him to sit while the rituals for sehra starts. Nikkhat makes him wear sehra and than they leave for the venue.

Zoya sat infront of the mirror and looked at herself, she had locked herself in the room and everybody knocks for her to open. Aapi try to convince her to open up just for once Zoya plz I promise everything will happen according to u but plz open Zoya...Zoya!!! R u listening?" Aapi cried and hearing all this jiju came running. He inquired while aapi tell him that Zoya has locked herself and is not opening, he clears the way for himself to the door and then knocked "Zoya! Zoya! Stop this u know this won't effect me, plz Zoya u have to understand this is for ur own good, u have to forget everything and start a fresh if not by ur wish then by mine, no matter what u do my decision won't change." While aapi ask jiju not to say like this but he turns to leave when they hear door opening voice. Jiju turned around to find her dressed as a bride looking down. She raised her head and the only thing visible on her white skin was red eyes. Aapi was already crying for her as she never saw her in this condition jiju had the same feeling but he didn't show her. Zoya said "if u want me to kill myself than so be it, I will do it only for u coz this is the only thing u ever asked me to do." Jiju kept quite for a moment and then turned around back to go but stopped to say "I know u will" aapi in shock says "anwar!!" While Zoya stand expressionless. A girl came running informed them that groom side has come and qazi sahib is asking for bride. Jiju turned to see Zoya and said "bride is ready too, we are coming", tear dropped from Zoya eyes while he walks away, aapi stands helpless between them.

Everything was set khan family was here and the wait was for only Zoya while jiju was walking and looking up continuously, he stopped to see her coming with the ladies who holds a holy chader upon her, she walked elegantly under the chader although only she knew that this is killing her. She came and stopped infront of jiju who kissed her forehead and made her sit on her place while she sat without a word. Aapi came and stood beside jiju and asked him to rethink as they can still stop all this, she begged not to spoil her life but jiju kept quiet and went to qazi to start nikah. Zoya looked down and didn't for a second looked up. Qazi sahib starts. Zoya only thought one thing that if she would have not fallen in love this had been so easy at least easy from this pain. She thinks that today she doesn't have any complaints from u mr.khan but from me for loving u even u did that to me, I blame myself for having hope after that too, I blame myself for trusting u. U took so long mr.khan so long, and look now I am going far from u so much far that even destiny can't unite us. I hate myself for loving u so much. After so much effort I can't forget u but u did, u did forget me mr.khan. I wish u had never come in my life, I wish." Tears flowed down her eyes. Qazi went to the groom side and says " Janab Asad Ahmed Khan wald Rashid Ahmed khan (Zoya shocked) kya aap ko Zoya Farooqui bint-e Anwar Farooqui se ye nikah 10 lac rupay bera-e haq mehr Qubool Hai?" Zoya was extremely shocked while Asad raised his sehra to reveal himself. She had tears in her eyes while she looked at jiju. Jiju smiled and bend to her ear and whispered "ab thordi acting tu humei bhi aati hai." Zoya smiled and looked back at Asad. While Asad replied "Qubool hai!" Asad smiled at her while the reply was even more surprise to Zoya, qazi sahib again asks"Kya aap ko ye nikah Qubool hai?" While he replies back "Qubool hai" Asad kept on smiling the whole time and for the last time qazi sahib asks "kya aap ko ye nikah Qubool hai?" And he replies the same "Qubool hai" zoya had tears in her eyes while a smile on her lips, than suddenly her minds asks her if he again did something like that and her smile vanished and she looked confused while jiju puts his hand on her shoulder, she turns around "but jiju..." ;"Zoya I know u will take decisions which is right for u and I will never ever doubt your decision but let me tell u he loves u and he won't ever dare to break ur heart never." Zoya was about to say something when Asad says "u have this only complaint from me, today I am here to correct my gravest mistake today I am here to find myself today I am here to take what is mine that is my heart which is with u Zoya. I am really sorry for breaking ur heart but trust me I won't let that happen in the future, I promise.(Zoya smiled) Ms. Zoya Farooqui will u accept me forgetting everything that happened in the past, will u accept me as a stranger, as a friend.?" Asad said all this making her his already. Zoya didn't knew what to do or what to reply but her eyes were always way too talkative. Jiju signaled qazi to continue and he came to Zoya side "Muhterma Zoya Farooqui bint-e Anwar Farooqui Kya aap ko Asad Ahmed khan wald Rashid Ahmed khan se ye nikah 10 lac rupay bera-e haq mehr Qubool hai" Zoya looked at jiju who gave her a look which told her to listen to ur heart and then she looked at Asad whose eyes were saying to have faith in him. She then closed her eyes to hear his heart and than remembered all her moments with Asad, she than finally said "Qubool hai!" Asad smiled and looked at Dilshad. Qazi Asked again and she replied Qubool hai asad looked back at Zoya but she had her eyes closed. For the last time qazi sahib asked and she took sometime and than replied Qubool hai. She then opened her eyes and smiled at Asad while he smiled back and the qazi pronounced them as husband and wife. While all congratulate each other.

This is how they lived together forever said a mid thirty years old man to a 9 year old pretty girl.

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Posted: 8 years ago
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So if anyone wants to have the link for FF so here it is
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/qubool-hai/4368717/1-asya-ff-ek-pal-jo-dil-mein-utar-jata-hai
Edited by NnonaA - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Omg nonu u r here?
How r u?


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow
The final part of ek pal
Beautiful
But I would have like u to go into more details
Like we.read ayaan wear the sehra but how come asad was under it
And who was the man sharing tje story and to who
But happy ending.altogether
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi dear
How are you?
Glad to see you back with last part
Finally they married & live happily
Wanted to know what happened to ayaan & Zoya should know why Asad did that.
Overall it was wonderful story
Thanks

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