AsYa(KaBhi)SS 'Ice-Cream Makes Everything Better' Last Parts, Pg 24

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Leone

@Silver_Shiver

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Posted: 8 years ago

#31

What an icecreamic update!!!

It was so beautiful.

Zoya always acts as an antidote for Asad.

N our Asad is Asad always being a cleanliness freak.

Zoya and her passion for ICECREAM.

Seriously I am also feeling like having an icecream.

Zoya's past is again painful.

Asad's bestie betrayed her.

Good for him.

How can he even think about anyone else other than Zoya.

Update soon.

PM if possible.

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fatima30

@fatima30

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Posted: 8 years ago

#32

Such a nice TS...looking forward to reading on

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Jasmeet(Jass)

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Posted: 8 years ago

#33

Edited by -jerry- - 8 years ago

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Basanti 🦄

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Posted: 8 years ago

#34

This was ekdum khidkitod piece yaaarr!!!

Didu I think it should be

'An ice cream a day keeps the tension away'

Ekdum ESE 😃

It was awesome!

I loved it

I won't go analysing and describing because I think each bit was a magic itself

I thought I need to get a cone too but I think this writing itself is a healer for everyone, it can really compensate ice creams u see

For the scene where she catches train with ice cream I have a warning

'These stunts are performed under Tweetie's supervision kindly do not perform such acts or you may end up spoiling someone's coat' 😉

I loved each of the scenes whether it was her escaped or the conversation or the language or the flashbacks!

It was awesome!

And I am so in love with it

I just love ur writings Didu, it reminds me how to be happy in the smallest and pettiest things!

Sooo beautiful

I think I will always be roaming on this thread if I won't have an ice cream with me!

Loved it sooo much.

I don't feel like I am reading a particular typical writing or something it feels someone is narrating an incidence and I am smiling the whole way!!!

Beautiful!

I am glad u didn't plan to leave or something

Because I and Surbhi Di would have pulled you back kyuki agar ye 'Comeback' hai to Bhai dhamake k lie I am waiting!

Thank you so much for writing this. Thank you so much for again and again reminding that life is beyond beautiful just we need to find it!.

Love you!. 🤗

Waiting for more!!

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shweta_yadav

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Posted: 8 years ago

#35

Deepti yr update nxt prt soon

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-Prinky-

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Posted: 8 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: shweta_yadav
Deepti yr update nxt prt soon

Me too want to update next part Shweta...but even though it's Sunday today I m in office with a loads of work..😭
will update tomorrow morning hopefully

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shweta_yadav

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Posted: 8 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: -Prinky-

Me too want to update next part Shweta...but even though it's Sunday today I m in office with a loads of work..😭
will update tomorrow morning hopefully

Sunday ko office 😕 stupid company wale 😡

NP prblm.dear update tommorow

PS.. Finally I met someone who is doing job here like me ..Other wise toh sare students he hai 😆

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Mayur Chan

@MayurChan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#38

Hello Di...😊

Hope you are doing good...😳

I seriously wish ki aap apni saari stories waapas se likhna shuru karein aur isse pehle Sue yaa Tehs complain karey unko complete kardein aur phir aise hee nayi stories likhti jaayein...

You don't know but your stories are always a TREAT to read...in every way they way you write and also how you add food itmes too it...it makes us crave for that thing more 😆

I really liked this part...

ASYA ko DDLJ wala scene bhi likh dala aapne...very good...👏

You know in a way it is always very good and kind of satisfying to have a heart to heart chat with a trustable stranger...matlab it is..

Liked reading this part...

Do Continue soonish...😊

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sweet_tehs

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Posted: 8 years ago

#39

Finally ice cream is here.

It is a cute story

And welcome back.

Waiting for the next part now.

N come on get to work.

Complete your pending stories.

I want haqeeqat

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sweet_tehs

@sweet_tehs

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Posted: 8 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: MayurChan
Hello Di...😊

Hope you are doing good...😳

I seriously wish ki aap apni saari stories waapas se likhna shuru karein aur isse pehle Sue yaa Tehs complain karey unko complete kardein aur phir aise hee nayi stories likhti jaayein...

You don't know but your stories are always a TREAT to read...in every way they way you write and also how you add food itmes too it...it makes us crave for that thing more 😆

I really liked this part...

ASYA ko DDLJ wala scene bhi likh dala aapne...very good...👏

You know in a way it is always very good and kind of satisfying to have a heart to heart chat with a trustable stranger...matlab it is..

Liked reading this part...

Do Continue soonish...😊