#2 AsYaFF ~ The 1st of April [Ch14-36 UndrCons] *Updt 10/1/21FFSection - Page 34

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Posted: 8 years ago
Hello Heelllooo Ankieee Jiii...😃😃

A Big Heellooo from a long forgotten Friend 😆

Hope you are doing good...😳

Sooo i managed to read the last to parts after this update because i didn't even knew that part 19 was also updated...😕

Khair chalo leaving all that aside...

I wanted to applaud you , Congratulate U for writing one of the best chase / action sequences with minute detailing and full of emotional turmoils , i must say one of the best i have ever read or can say imagined till now...👏👍🏼

You know i don't know how much valid my point is but if you try to harm a wound on your body with your nails it will be more dangerous than the actual wound because most of the germs and bacteria are present in our nails only sooo yeah...but yeh toh hero jaise that ki apne hee shareer se goli nikal raha hai...matlab kya HULK hai kya😆{ i just had a vivid recall of that HULK Green tee of KSG ]

If I am not wrong yeh goli shayad woh judge se milte waqt he lagi thi...very brave of him to still go ahead in saving his Life which are Zoya and now Azam too..

And in all this while both Asad and Zoya must be blaming each other for their current condiiton...because Zoya was doing this when they had that whole argument before the flashback about danger which Zoya can bring on Asad and now here in the last part Asad's thoughts were quite indicating that how he blames himself for Zoya and Azam's current ordeal...i don't know what will happen after this because i think this is still not over yet...

Sanjay's visit in the east army camp and he was also having some weird bad feeling while leaving na so i guess that can be the COINCIDENCE...

Sooo yeah thats it...

It was disturbing yes...but quite a good read...

Continue soonish...

Take Care...😊


##And yes how to pronounce or say Lord Drdhahanus ..
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Posted: 8 years ago
A great update..!
You did a fab job for sure..!
I just adore the bond Sanjay-Asad shares...
Asad is shot and he did not allow himself to taken care of but was in a mission to save Zoya and Azam
A great read..!
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome part...😊
well written...😊

thanks for pm...😊

continue soon...😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
close call for asad...

sanjay came to help...

he is very sad and angry...

poor zaya.. she did not know but she cant stay away from the blame
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We want update
We want update
We want update...
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Posted: 8 years ago
This scene 😉 😆
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