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Originally posted by: CuteMonsta

Hmm I see.. omg you are Arpita.. I remember you lol..😆 yup the ending was probably rushed.. or maybe too much was compressed into the epilogue..😉

Originally posted by: --Mirage--

yes..it was what happened to AsYa in years..not detailed..

Originally posted by: anopama

Very sad but beautiful update

hmm yup a sad one.. sorry about that.. thanks you..

Asya r trying to move forward but their memories and sadness just brings them back

yup exactly..

Glad they have each other and they r trying to be happy

yup that is what which makes them unique..

Cont soon

next update is already up!😉

Originally posted by: Nik03

Hey buddy...

helooo!!
Sorry for being late...!!

hmm its ok no prob
Update was wonderful dear..!!

thank you so much
Very emotional n thouching...!!

yup indeed it was .. sorry about that.
Asya are trying to move on from their past n start afresh but its normal that their painful memories come back afterall it was their child... 😕

yup true.. but they are trying their best.
I loved the Cementry scene the most..!!

hmm thanks.
Very well written buddy...!! 👏

thank you again..😳
Exited for the next one... 😊

next part is already up!!😆
Loads of Love n 🤗

same to you!!😊
Nik

Originally posted by: --Mirage--

An amazing part...!!

Loved Zoya's bonding with children and the understanding between AsYa..

Finally their prayers got answered..!!

But are going to end this here?

I don't know about your issues but what I can say that you are a wonderful writer big bro..

Keep Writing

Take care..

Will try to join your website soon..😳