Asya SS ~Broken Dreams And Shattered Soul~Part 9 Updated on Page 81 - Page 17

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: ridhi95

Again awesome part😊

Beautifully written😊

Asad bhi zoya k aas-pass hai to kya next update m unki mulaqat hogi😃

Thank you
may be or may not be 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
Sorry sorry sorry...I am late...wasn't around
and here back to back update wow!!!
okay so coming to the update...it was beautifully written...with suspense around...
I wonder what had happened in the past...curious to know
looking at the flashback it's obvious to be insecure for a child...as a child Asad's hatred i can understand...and Zoya being Zoya kept annoying him...
And coming to the Siddhiqui's...not gonna change...what they did with Zoya...?? and now making stories 😡
And girl you stop there...are they going to meet ??
plz update soon...

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: -Prinky-

<font size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Sorry sorry sorry...I am late...wasn't around
and here back to back update wow!!!
okay so coming to the update...it was beautifully written...with suspense around...
I wonder what had happened in the past...curious to know
looking at the flashback it's obvious to be insecure for a child...as a child Asad's hatred i can understand...and Zoya being Zoya kept annoying him...
And coming to the Siddhiqui's...not gonna change...what they did with Zoya...?? and now making stories 😡
And girl you stop there...are they going to meet ??
plz update soon...</font>

Finally you are here Deepti
i was waiting for your comment
now days i am free thats why you are getting back to back updates 😆
yes asad is right on his place
even in real life if a person started to live in your house and get your parents attention more than u it is obvious that you will start to dislike the person and same happened with asad
what Gazia did with zoya will be revealed soon
haha i stopped there intentionally 😆
will update in two or three days
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Always_asya

Thank you
may be or may not be 😉

😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
Love the update
Yes your story is similar to those 2 u mentioned
But wants to see what spin u do to make it different
So gauffur comes to richness maybe he steals it from zoya
So he remarries and have the brat tanveer who had eyes for asad
Aww asad and his memories he has so much regret
Omg he is in front if the hospital
Plz let his legs take him inside it somehow
Get them to meet
Plz
Cont

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: anopama

Love the update

Yes your story is similar to those 2 u mentioned
But wants to see what spin u do to make it different
So gauffur comes to richness maybe he steals it from zoya
So he remarries and have the brat tanveer who had eyes for asad
Aww asad and his memories he has so much regret
Omg he is in front if the hospital
Plz let his legs take him inside it somehow
Get them to meet
Plz
Cont

Thank you Anopama
i know yr but what can i do whenever i pick up any idea it seemed to be familiar with one or another story as i read every asya story so i myself rejects many ideas when they matched with one another and finally my exams gave me so much pressure ,i penned down this idea though i already knew that it matched with two stories
well its distinction from these two stories is already in prologue as zoya in mental asylum and trust me i faced another problem which was again asya ff mental love so u can already guess what happened with me during the update
coming to update again your one guess proves true
yea gaffour is remarried to razia
asad will meet zoya after the flashback of what happened 8years ago revealed
will give update tomorrow or after the day
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Posted: 8 years ago
next part plz 😊
sorry yaar but wait nahi ho raha 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
Part 4
Asad was back from site seeing and typing something on his laptop but his mind got distracted .He did not know why he felt restless from the time he returned from site seeing,why he felt connected to that place as if she was here but it is not possible,it could not be possible.He remembered that wretched day very clearly which took everything from him

Flashback start
It was a normal day in Khan villa yet there are some tension in Rashid's mind.He was upset for some reasons and asad felt it but did not know what was bothering his father.He tried to ask but did not get desireable answer so he did not ask further.Just then an over excited zoya came down and hugged Rashid from behind and kissed on his cheeks happily ,Rashid turned to her and patted her cheek lovingly as if he was afraid to lossing her.
Zoya-dost aap mere saath movie dekhne chaloge na
Rashid -sorry baccha aaj muje kisi zaroori kaam pe jaana hai,hum kal chalein
Zoya-but you promised me
asad became angry on her stubborn behaviour.why cannot you undetstand ,if abbu is saying that he is busy ?shouted asad.zoya pouted unhappily and on seeing her sad face Rashid agreed.zoya beamed happily and both went towards their destination unknown to the tragedy which was awaiting them.It was 6p.m and still zoya and Rashid had not reached home.Dilshad was worried sick while asad was on the verge of blowing his anger on zoya who did not care to take her phone with her while Rashid's phone was switched off which caused him worried because whatever the situation he never switched off his phone.Just then Dilshad's phone rang and after receving call asad's whole world about to crash down.They reached the hospital where a numb zoya was standing against the wall trembling with fear of losing her precious dost who was no less than God for her asad reached to her."What happened to abbu"asks asad."Woh ashu mai aur dost movie dekh ke aa rahe the aur mai..maine dost se kaha ke car mai...mai chalaugi aur..hiccup..aur dost ne mana bhi kiya par ..hiccup...maine zidd ki auur woh maan gaye.. aur jab ..thori der ke baad pata nahi kahan se ek truck aa gaya mujse gaari sambli nahi toh ...do..dost ne muje peeche dhkel kar gaari ko doosri taraf se bachaane ki koshish ki aur gaari truck se takraa gyee"..thapk..as zoya finished her sentence asad slapped her hardly."How dare you to do this,how can you do this with my abbu"HOW!!!ANSWER ME,roared asad angerily,"he loves you so much then how can you! if anything happened to my abbu i will not spare you mark my words".Asad ran towards the doctor who operated on his abbu come out of operation theatre "doctor how's my abbu" doctor looked at the young man who is about 20 or 21 was looking at him expectately "i am sorry we could not save mr khan's life".After hearing doctor's words asad's last hope crashed down completely,his hero,his abbu,his strength left him forever.Dilshad felt the ground slipped beneath her feets.Nazma cried bitterly. Zoya's state was not less painful,she also lost the angel who make her life full of happiness with no worry,who saved her from this cruel world.She break down on the floor crying hardly.
Whole khan mansion which had always been filled with happiness was filled with tears and cries for lossing the strength of the house.Dilshad sat motionlessly while nazma was sitting besides her mother crying badly and asad was gone for Rashid's funeral with other men.Zoya was standing in a corner silently crying considering herself responsible for his dost's death,no one was there to console her.Asad's grandmother alreadey cursed her for his son's death while all people who were present for consoling the family also started to talk bad about zoya.They did not realised what their words doing with the mind of 15 years zoya.Poor soul could not help but started to blame herself for every pain the khan family was bearing at that moment.Dilshad did not react to anything since Rashid's death,she had no idea what was happening in her house to her children,nazma was trying to get some reaction from her mother but of no use.Asad reached home after the funeral and direct went to his room and closed the door.He sat on the floor with no tears in his eyes,he did not shed a tear since the death of his father as if he could not think properly,as if it seemed a nightmare, and in morning his father would be infront of him.He stared into nothing ,the precious memories of his father were only with him that moment.He remembered how his father was always with him whenever he fall down,showed him right path whenever he was wrong.But now there is no one who would make him feel as prince who had no worries as his hero was always there to protect him.He stayed there in the psition like this God kow for how much hours without caring of anthing.If asad was sitting in his room ,zoya was standing guilty outside his room staring at the closed door with tearful eyes,she did not know what to do to make him feel better.She knew what his abbu was for him and her one fooish act snatch his everything not knowing that it was write to be happened whether she went or not.
It has been four days since Rashid left them alone in this world.Dilshad has not come out of shock , her treatment was going on but for zoya these four days were like hell where dadi always taunted her for his son's death whenever she came across her,asad did not said anything yet ,it seemed the silence before the storm which has to come.Zoya did not know what to do exactly,how to face asad,finally after four days she took the strength to enter his room which seemed to be filled with sadness while asad was sitting on couch with his head in his hands.Zoya took steps towards him fearfully,"Ashu" just that name was enough for asad to come out of thoughts for two reasons ,first his abbu used to call him with that name and second the person who is responsible for his miseries or he thoughts so was standing infront of him.He looked at her with pure haterd eyes nothing hidden neither his anger nor his hate."What are you doing here"shouted asad with so much hatered in his voice that it sends chills down zoya's spine who was trying to be be brave."You .. you are the reason behind my abbu's death,You and your stubbornness took my abbu's life."I am sorry ash.."zoya tried but asad shouted before she could complete her sentence "DO NOT DARE TO CALL ME WITH THAT NAME, U LOSS EVERY RIGHT THE DAY YOU KILLED MY FATHER".He shaked her vigoursly while zoya bears it silently though it hurts badly.Asad had no idea what he was saying,he knew only one thing that because of zoya he had lost his abbu and he will not spare her so he said whatever comes into his mind that time"You yourself is an orphan so you make me orphan too,now you are happy with this,kash tum kabhi yaha aati nahi,kash abbu tumhein ghar laate nahi to toh aaj woh zinda hote mere saath hote".
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Edited by Always_asya - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
[B]Flashback continue[/B]
[BR]Zoya stared at him numbly ,he regreted that his abbu brought her to their home.He made her realize that she is an orphan.The truth of her life which she had forgotton long ago was reminded to her again now by her Ashu.She stared at him keenly as if seeking for some soft expression from him but no use and when he said something which she feared the most."Chali kyun nahi jaati tum hamari zindgi se hamesha ke liye so that i never have to see your face in life or you are waiting for another disasterous.I do not want to see your face ever"zoya lost every courage to talk him after hearing his words.She knew there is no use to talk him now ,he already gave his answers that he does not want her to live in his home.She retreated completely from his room and went to her room.She sat there silently crying for her "dost" who is not here to console her like he always did.Asad's words were ringing in her mind continuously ,at that moment she wanted to end her life but could not do that because in saving her life her dost sacrificed his life .She did not know what to do where to go and finally her tired mind was over taken by sleep.[BR]Next day suddenly Gaffoor appeared at khan mansion and declared that he was here to take his daughter back.Asad did not react against his decision because he himself wanted het to leave his house.Zoya also agreed to go with him as she wanted his ashu happy,she wrote a letter for him and kept it on his bedside table and went away from his life forever[BR][BR]
[I]Flashback ends[/I][BR]
A lone tear fell from Asad's eyes with the bitter memory of that day when zoya left forever from his life and he was responsible for it.Just then his phone rang being irritated he was going to cut the call but picked it up reluctently.On phone his assistant parsad fastly informed him that the site for which he has gone in the morning got burned because there was fire all around the place and the mental asylum also caught fire ,after hearing the latter part asad's heart sank with unknown fear,fear to loss someone precious to him.He fetched car keys and run towards the place,when he reached there parsad started to give him details of the site which was ruined but it seemed like asad did not hear anything.Asad started to walk to the opposite direction to the site which was mental hospital,asad's feet took his steps automatically towards hospital as if someone calling him.When he entered in hospital he again felt familiar feeling which was pulling him towards it,as he looked at his surrounding,there was fire in the rooms and nurses and security guards were trying to take the patients out of their room but what got his attention more the room which got fire but no one was able to get into room because the whole room fully under the fire and the nurses were calling a patient with whatever the name came into their minds.Asad looked towards the room and without thinking twice he threw himself into fire to save the person who was in the room,without looking at the person he covered her with his coat and picked her in his arms and brought her out of the room.When he stepped out nurses surrounded the person whom asad saved After that asad walked out of hospital he sat in the car and started to return home when something caught his eyes.A bracelet got stuck in his watch and the bracelet belonged to her...Zoya[BR] ~~~~~~~'~[BR][BR]Done[BR]ignores the mistakes[BR]sorry this time i will not send pms bcs of some emergency in personal life[BR]hope u all understand
Edited by Always_asya - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome update dear..
So Rashid died while trying to save Zoya..
And Asad and his family blamed her for the death...
Now I feel everyone in the Khans has a role in destroying Zoya's life..
She is a broken girl of just 15 years..
I understand Asad lost his father and also his dislike towards Zoya
But his behaviour is not at all acceptable..
Poor girl has been orphaned once again😭
Looking forward for :
what happend to Zoya after she left the khans
How she ended up in mental hospital
What will Asad do to bring back the old Zoya..

Update soon..
Will read it for sure but comments may have to wait..😉
Edited by --Mirage-- - 8 years ago

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