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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: MH2002

That was soo nice.

Read all parts in one go.
They were superb and cute.
Asad confession was so simple but Zoya's confession was blast.
Plz PLzzz update soon.
Pm me.
😊

Thank you so much dear
I'm glad you liked it 😃
They are the cutest couple 😳
Will update ASAP and will pm u 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: sasir

Loved it..
Superb..
Amazing..
Read all parts in one go...
Glad that finally they confessed...
Hope they will get married soon without any hindrances...
I don't understand y razia behave like that to zoya..
Isn't she her own kin...
N yes who is that old MaN who helped her..
I thought he has some significance in this story...

Thank you so much 😊
I'm glad you liked it
It really means alot 😃
I have not decided anything about their marriage yet let's c how it goes
Razias reason behind her behaviour towards zoya will be reaveled soon
And that old man was just a kind person who helped her out he doesn't have any significance in this story that's why I didn't even thought of any name for that character
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Posted: 8 years ago

Hello everyone I have updated ch6 do read it and let me know your valuable reviews, will be eagerly waiting for it.

This chapter is specially resed for sweetu, arpita, somu, anopama, dillu anuv6,ridhi mania, daljit, Nik, JAZ, natlya, sweet_tehs and all my sweet readers

CHAPTER 6



In airport:

Asad: ok let's go then

Zoya: yeah! Wait a minute

She turned towards the security officer

Zoya: thank you so much, sir, for your help (looking down) and sorry I troubled you a lot for no reason

Seeing her cute way of apology its hard for someone to not to forgive

Security officer: it's ok madam, seriously I'm very happy for you (turning towards Asad said jokingly ) and sir next time try railway station it would be much easier

Asad smiled at him saying "will keep that in mind"

Zoya: I will kill you if you repeat this again!

Asad: ok relax! I'm just joking!

Zoya(to that old man): thanks to you to uncle! Even I troubled you a lot

Man: no beta! It's ok you are just like my daughter! (stroking her head) you both always be happy with each other! Now I can peacefully check in

Security officer: what!

Man(laughing seeing his expression): don't worry officer I have my passport and ticket

Security (sighing in relief): ok please come, sir

Man went inside the gate

Zoya(from the entrance waving at him ): Bye uncle! Have a happy and safe journey

Man waved back at her with a smile from glass door and went inside

Asad: he went and yes he waved back at you

Zoya(happily): he waved back at me! That uncle was really sweet

Asad: even I had waved back at you while going home after our first meeting

Zoya: really? No doubt even you are so sweet, my sweetu

Asad: eww! Don't call me that! I'm not sweet

Zoya giggled at his complaining tone

Asad: btw where is Haider?

Zoya: I don't know! Maybe at your place

Asad: what! Then how did you reached here!

Zoya(casually): I took a taxi

Asad(freaking out): are you crazy! Why did you take a taxi! You didn't even know the routes to airport from my house, what if something had happened

Zoya: just chill, nothing happened!

Asad: what was Haider doing? I had told him to bring you to airport if plan worked, it's all my fault, I shouldn't have made this baseless plan

Zoya: shhh! It's not yours and neither Haider's fault ok! After hearing that news I just rushed from there not giving anyone chance to even react and if you wouldn't have made this plan then I would never have accepted my feelings now don't worry about the things which didn't happen ok

Asad: but at least he could have called me!

With that, he checked his mobile

Asad: 35 missed calls! Damm it was in silent and I was blaming him

Zoya: just call back they might be worried

Asad: yea

Asad dialed Haider's number and informed him everything

Asad: All were actually worried but now everything is normal, come let's go

Zoya nodded and they went from there

Zoya's house:

Well it was night time, Zoya was standing near the window thinking about the days occurring and small smile playing on her lips thinking about Asad

Humeira came inside and saw her lost somewhere she smiled seeing her and went towards her

Humeira (whispering near her ear) : thinking about jiju

Zoya came out of her trance

Zoya: you scared me humi (hiding her blush) I was thinking of something else

Humeira(laughing): common baji its written in your face

Zoya: nothing is written stop teasing me

Zoya: humi listen I told Asad to directly drop me home, you were at his place right? Everybody knows about us in Asad's family?

Humeira: no only Haider and Ayaan knows, they were not telling me also but after you ran from there I was so worried and freaked out at both so not having any options they told me everything

Zoya sighed in relief

Humeira: but even if they will know, what's wrong in it?

Zoya: nothing, I just don't want to rush things

Humeira: ok, but baji I'm very happy for you, He loves you so much

Zoya(with a smile): yeah! Hey, even I love him

Humeira: I can see that, how you cheek changes its color when we are talking about him

Zoya: anything

Just that time Zoya's mobile ranged and the voice came "ASYA CALLING"

Humeira: Asya? Who is that?

Zoya: its Asad actually what if it will announce in front of ammi or abbu so I saved his number like that

Humeira(teasingly): so you kept your future daughters name, how sweet!

Zoya: shut up humi

Humeira: ok..ok you talk to jiju, I'm outside, will alert you if ammi or abbu is coming to our room

Zoya smiled at her and received the the call moving towards the window for fresh air and Humeira went from there

Phone conversation:

Zoya: hello

Asad: thinking about me right

Zoya: wha..t no, I was not thinking about you

Asad: really, actually my hiccups were not stopping, so my ammi says when someone is badly missing you, we get hiccups as an indication ... Anyways if you're not thinking then maybe someone else

Zoya: excuse me! Who else will miss you other than me that to this extent that you are getting hiccups

Asad: so you were indeed missing me

Zoya: vo...vo..you don't change the topic, tell me who else is missing you

Asad: maybe your miss dinchak to roast me in her news channel

Zoya: don't talk about that liar! She had so badly filled my mind against you and you turned out to be so different than what she said

Asad: really? Tell me that difference, please

Zoya(smiling): good night Asad

Asad: spoil sport

Zoya: haww! I'm not a spoilsport!

Asad: when I proposed you, you disposed me and now when I'm trying to get romantic, you want to sleep

Zoya: it doesn't mean I'm a spoilsport ok! I will prove that to you

Asad: ok let's see how you do that! One more thing Zoya I'm really sorry for today

Zoya: sorry? What happened Asad

Asad: Zoya not even in my wild dreams I can think of hurting you, though it was unintentionally I hurt you a lot and I never thought you will just leave like that without giving Haider any chance to explain anything and you have to go through all that because of me, how can I be so idiot!!

Zoya: stop blaming yourself, Asad! I hate Ms dinchak now because she said all that things about you! I don't like anyone saying such nasty things about you and you are also included in that anyone so don't call yourself idiot and all!! Asad, I don't even remember how much I have thanked my Allah Miya for sending you in my life you know I'm sooo happy! All because of you so please don't be sorry

Asad: I can't wait to grow old with you

Zoya: neither me!

Asad: Zoya I need to tell you something very important, something you should know about me

Zoya: what is it, Asad?

Asad: not now, I will pick you up tomorrow from your academy

Zoya: ok, I was above to tell you that, even I want to tell you something

Asad: ok so when should I come?

Zoya: 2:00 pm is ok?

Asad: I will be there by 2

Zoya: ok, see you soon, good night

Asad: good night

With that, he hung up the call but soon she called back Asad accepted it with a playful smile but didn't get a chance to say hello

Zoya: you hung up just like that?

Asad: yeah I think we should sleep now

Zoya: I know nights are made for sleeping! But the good night that's all you want to say?

Asad: what else? Oh yeah I forgot to say that

Zoya smiled hearing him

Asad: Sweet dreams!

Soon her smile faded hearing it

Zoya: then?

Asad: then what? You want me to sing a lullaby for you!

Zoya(totally annoyed): a very bitter dreams to you

With that, she hung up

Zoya(murmured): emotionally challenged man

Asad called her again, Zoya hearing his call

Zoya: now why is he calling! To sing a lullaby

As soon as she received the call

Asad: I LOVE YOU!

Zoya smiled hearing it

Asad: and nights are not only meant for sleeping! Soon you will know the different purpose of nights! Till then Goodnight sweetheart

He hanged up with a sexy smirk and leaving Zoya with a heavy blush

Zoya: he is crazy but exclusively made for me

With that, she went from there with a smile playing on her lips

Next day Afternoon

Asad picked her from the academy and they were in his car

Zoya: Asad where are we going?

Asad: relax teacher we will reach soon and don't worry I know the routes you won't get lost

Zoya: I don't mind getting lost if you are with me

Asad: damm! Don't talk like that, I will end up marrying you today itself then don't blame me

Zoya just giggled at his reply soon Asad parked his car and they came out of the car, Zoya feeling the fresh air hitting her, hearing more birds chirping and waves sound

Zoya(with a huge smile): Beach!

Asad smiled seeing her happy, he gripped her palm

Asad: come

They walked for sometimes hand in hand and then sat down in the sand Asad was fussing about it as he was opting a bench over there but Zoya was too adamant finally giving up on her stubbornness he sat down with her

Asad: I thought it's a perfect place to talk

Zoya: more than perfect! But Asad why can't I hear any people commotion?

Asad: that's because I had booked this entire place for us

Zoya(shocked): really? It would have been too expensive!

Asad: it doesn't matter! You tell me what you wanted to talk

Zoya: you also wanted to talk right?

Asad: I will but ladies first

Zoya(small giggle): ok my gentleman!

Zoya: Asad I want to tell you about my family

Asad: family?

Zoya(taking a deep breath): Asad I'm an adopted daughter of Gaffur Farooqui

Asad was shocked hearing it the way she always keep on saying about her abbu and sister after that it was the last thing he would guess, Asad, tightened the hold on her hand assuring her that he is there

Zoya: I was the only daughter of Anwar Siddique and Zeenat Siddique my mom dad, I was the princess of my house(wiping her tears and smiling a little she said) I just had to point out at things I like and next moment it was mine, mom used to be strict at times but all I had to do is to make puppy eyes in front of her and with a second all her anger used to vanish, my life was perfect and simple. It used to start with my mom's good morning kiss and end with dad's thrilling stories I always wanted it to be like that, Humeira was always my sweetheart she used to visit our place at summer vacations and we all used to enjoy a lot but one day all of sudden my beautiful life was a mess and everything got over

Not able to control anymore she closed her eyes to stop her tears but it didn't work, Asad side hugged her and wiped her tears from his other hand

Asad: Shh, it's ok Zoya! You don't have to hurt yourself so much, we can talk about it later

Zoya: No Asad I'm fine(laying her head on his chest she continued and Asad was stroking her hair also listening to her carefully) One day dad had to leave for a business trip for a week, he had promised me that he will be back before my birthday but his trip got extended and he couldn't make it on my birthday and when he came back after two days I was very angry with him, I said I won't talk to him until he buy me an icecream and he readily agreed to it, mom was not convinced with the idea as it was already midnight but we both convinced her

Zoya slightly started shivering and Asad guessed the worst part coming ahead

Zoya: dad was driving the car and I was sitting on mom's lap, sometimes talking about random things, sometimes dad was pulling mom's leg making me laugh and all of sudden one drunken truck driver hit our car due to which dad lost the control and the breaks got failed, I was just 8 years old so I was not knowing what was going on what happened suddenly, why mom, dad was so panicked, finally not having any other option dad told us to jump out of the car but mom didn't agree to it they started arguing and I was just scared and clueless suddenly mom kissed all over my face and said beta we love you and always remember whatever happens we are always with you, dad also emotionally kissed my tiny hands then mom opened the car door and throughed me out of the car. I rolled down the road and banged my head on the tree and the car banged against the divider before closing the eyes I saw some sparkles in the car and soon it caught fire I screamed for help I was not able to move also and I didn't know when darkness engulfed me that's the last day I saw my parents and also this colorful world and when I opened my eyes I was in the hospital and everything was over, my parents had left me and I had lost my eyesight too

With that she started sobbing, small tears were rolling down from Asad's eyes thinking how difficult it might have been for a 8 years old kid to go through all that, Asad realized one thing was common they both had a terrible past Zoya had hidden it behind her smile and Asad used his arrogance to hide his vulnerability, Asad wrapped her in a bear hug stroking her back and occasionally kissing her head and also controlling his tears, Zoya also hugged him tightly crying her heart out but he didn't stop her from crying because he wanted all the pain which she had locked inside her to come out, because he knew after that she would feel much better. After sometime Zoya had calmed down and wiped her tears, she came out of the hug

Zoya: I'm sorry, I was too vulnerable

Asad: I understand (cupping her face) I'm so proud of you, you are the strongest girl I have ever met!

Zoya: no Asad I'm not! I have always been a burden to others, specially ammi

Asad(confused): ammi?

Zoya: Humeira's ammi she is like my ammi too but she hates me, she never accepted me in her family when abbu brought me home she was not happy at all, I have heard many times they were fighting because of me, once I had told abbu I can live in boarding school but abbu refused, he loves me very much I can feel my dad in him but I can't be so selfish, once after lot of struggle I had convinced him and ammi was also happy but last moment Humeira ruined everything saying she is not leaving me anywhere and if I will go then she will accompany me. She was too stubborn at that time so I had to stay back which angered ammi a lot

Asad: I'm not liking your ammi at all! How can she be so rude

Zoya: no Asad, don't say like that. You are feeling like this because you love me, just think from her side, for her always her family has been a priority and one fine day out of nowhere one blind girl enters in her family picture and ruins everything and even her husband and her only daughter whom she loves so much is not ready to understand her, so I think her reaction is normal but then I was determined that I will be such a good daughter that ammi would have no other option but to love me(sadly)but till date I had not progressed much in it.

Asad: you don't have to because you are the best daughter anyone could get and if someone is not realizing it's their loss you don't have to blame yourself for that

Zoya: Asad if you ever feel me as a burden in your life please you will tell me, I promise I won't be hurt at all

Asad: that day will never come! AAK only has one weakness in his life that is my family and after meeting you I have got my strength. Yes, Zoya you are my strength and without strength, it won't take much time for a person to fall, so never think yourself as a burden to me! You are my life

Zoya emotionally gave him a quick hug

Zoya: enough of my talk, now it's your turn tell me what you wanted to talk

Asad: Zoya maybe some other day, it's getting late now

Zoya: no we are not getting late, I know you are saying this because you don't want to stress me more but trust me I'm not at all stressed and after pouring out my heart to you I feel so good and I want you to feel the same way

Asad: but Zoya...

Zoya: please Asad..please..please you can't do this mera haq banta hai

Asad: are you sure?

Zoya: very much


Precap:

Asad's past

Edited by -loving_life- - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice update dear
Phone convo was good. Liked the way humeira teased her. Zoya tragedy was sad. She lost both her parents but found ghafoor and humeira in return. She told him everything & now it's Asad time to reveal his past. Update soon plz. Thanks for pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome update Anchal
loved it yr
Asya conversations just wow
so lovely and funny too
humaira teased zoya
Asya conversations on phone was cute
zoya's past is so painful
wonder what happened with Asad
can't wait for next update
please continue soon
thanks for pm and res
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Posted: 8 years ago
Fianlly the update is here.
It was really a fantastic update
The way asad cared abt zoya at airport and then the phone conversation was sooo cute.
How zoya wanted to hear i love u and they were teasing each other
Asad is getting more and more romantic now. I mean he booked an entire beach area for their talk
Again zoya past was very emotional. Good thing she told everything to asad now only .. cant believe she was 8 yrs old when all these things happened.
But now she has asad for ger support and he will never leave her alone in this difficult world. He will be there to support and love her a lot
Now lets see how asad past vomes out infront of zoya
Thanks for the pm but plzzz update next part soon
~JAZ~
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Posted: 8 years ago
I thought Asad to be a sober person...but that NIGHT comment changed my perception about him and I am too pleased 😉 Asad being naughty...wohooo..I am just waiting for all his naughtiness to come out..
and Zoya is confiding in Asad now..which is beautiful..it enhances the understanding and intimacy.
Asad has a bad past or a good past ...Let's see
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
That was such a nice update!!
Zoya's past was😭
Airport scene was cute.
Asya convo. was 😆😆.
Inshort loved the whole update.
Update sooon.
Thanks for the PM.
Edited by MH2002 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hello anchal
Hw's ur leg now??
Awsm update
Loved asad in this update
He was so cute nd naughty 😆
Loved Asya phone convo .
Nvr imagine asad like the way u portrayed him .
He booked whole beach for them 😳
Zoya's past was so sad nd heartwrenching
She gone through so much at the age of 8 .
Loved the way asad support her.
Now waiting to know abt asad past.
Thanks for the res
🤗
Continue soon.
Edited by LuvurselF - 8 years ago

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