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Ashii

@AkaiBara

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Posted: 8 years ago

#151

Originally posted by: Ajuzangel
Very stressful update
Don't want to comment
Aik update se guzara nhi hota
Next time want double update
Thanks for pm
Update as soon as possible

i know it was stressful and guess now you can imagine how hard it is for me to types such updates

its not regular thing you know

hope i'm doing justice to the plot

and yes I'll try to make it long one

thank you for reading and liking

stay tuned 😊

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Ashii

@AkaiBara

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#152

Originally posted by: Ajuzangel
Sorry I did mistake in upper comment
I want to said don't know what to comment

its okay dear... it happens

Edited by AkaiBara - 8 years ago

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Ashii

@AkaiBara

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#153

Originally posted by: anuv6
beautiful update
LUVD IT to the core...AWESOME
finally ASYA reunited, bt still ahad's revelations nd many more thrilling turns are there i guess...
so waiting very much eager fr the nxt update
update sooonish as u can

thank you so much dear... I'm glad you liked it

yes many things need to unrevealed and I'll try to do that soon

thanks again and stay tuned 😊

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Ashii

@AkaiBara

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#154

Originally posted by: shonajain
finalllyyy again a superawsume update...my words will not do justice with ur superb writing skills ❤️

update was superb...atlast zoe knws abt asad disease but yet to knw his side of story

ziddi asad and emotional zoe loved it to core...fahad is sweet and meher tooo

I seriously and am saying it seriously , I loveee your song selection it is super Awsume superrrbbb and this time veer zaara ohhh myy love muaaahh (srk fangirling) sowwwyyy

I am not complaining or anything but when it comes to TSB I want you more more more n more ..."yeh dil mange more " ❤️

but intezaar ka apna mazaa h n as I said beforee intezaar ka phal meethhaaa thaaa bahuttt

loved it ❤️

thank u for the pm

continuee supersoon ho sake toh Thursday se pele...no now joking take ur time

love
shona ''

thank you so so sooo much shona 😃

your comments always made me smile no actually they made my day

keep showing your love towards TSB ❤️

yes my song selection is quite famous here 😳 and I'm glad you all like it

dill maange more but mind maange many moreee days to plan and type 😆 😆

haan sabar ka phal meetha hota hai and lets see kal wala phal kitna meetha milta hai 😉

thanks again dear

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Ashii

@AkaiBara

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#155

Originally posted by: ayat20
Hope all goes well
Hope asad gets well soon s I don't want Asya to separated more
Neither ahad to b away from his father n family

asad will get well soon and will be living with zoya and ahad

thank you and stay tuned

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Ashii

@AkaiBara

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#156

Originally posted by: ridhi95
So emotional part
Ab asad joya ko alag mat krna 😛

Amazing update

Wonderfully written 👏

Thank u for the pm 😊

thank you dear

will try not to separate asya

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Ashii

@AkaiBara

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#157

Originally posted by: shaikhsabreen14
Ashii love its just a mindblowing update but to asy convo hona chahiye tha
But amyway i just loved the concept please unite together them asap

A writer is a writer not because she writes
Well and easily because she has amazimg talent or because everything she does is golden
A writer is a writer because even when there is no hope even nothing you do show amy sigm of promise you keep writing

I was so tensed while writing it dear... didn't know how to put my thoughts into words and abt convo I honestly feel khamoshi ki bhi ek zuban hoti hai

don't you remember WHT updae where AsYa spent the whole night without talking

anyways I'll try to show more asya scenes and talk

thank you so much for encouraging me... it really means a lot... specially when the forum is almost dead and the response is less... thanks again 😃

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Ashii

@AkaiBara

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#158

Originally posted by: sisgeo
I hope every thing ends fine for Asya

it will dear

just stay tuned

thank you for reading and liking

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Ashii

@AkaiBara

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#159

Originally posted by: sweet_tehs
Ye Kya likha
Ye kyun likha
Aur kitna rulana hai..
Thanks for ending fahad
But my Asad😭

Itna emotional Kaun likhta hai?

Now waiting for many more FBs.

I loved the hug..
Too good.

itna chota sa comment

mai likhti hoon itna emotional... not because mera dill tha actually story ki demand hai

Asad apka kab se hua 😲 😕 mere or Choco ki ladayi mai ap aage nahi nikal sakte 😆

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Ashii

@AkaiBara

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#160

Originally posted by: anopama
When u write I just want to cry for how beautiful it is
Loved it
It was an emotional one but beautiful all the same
Love fahad he was a gentleman all he wanted was his zoe happiness
And tht lies with asad
Asad just needed to meet zoya he had to by any means
Love their connection she just knew he was there
Love how she soothed his pain
Aww ahad was happy to see his parents together and happy
So he kept his word he stood by nuzhat
Dilshad knew as soon as she saw him
Surprise afra was not mentioned in all the commotion
So now zoya has to explain it all to a room full of people
Meher pkz make asad better he has a story to tell
And zoya might just kill him if he mention death again
Cont and congrats on new thread

thank you so much anopama 🤗 being a writer i only want that my readers fell the same thing that i had planned and wanted to explain via my words... i cried while typing last 2 updates of TSB and when you said you want to cry... i felt like this is what i wanted from sooo long... thank you for feeling it...

coming to the fahad... i honestly didn't wanted to end his track abruptly but seeing my readers hatred for him i took a back step... i didn't want to show a sacrifice scene by fahad, he loves zoya enough to let her go without knowing asad's disease...

hope i did justice to him...

afra was there but i literally forgot her... my focus was on asya 😳

thanks again dear