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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Oye_Hoye



and I don't know how to put my thoughts into words

you know loss of words type scene hai šŸ˜†

u read WHT

I'm off now

Good Night dear šŸ˜›


Do Whatever you want , BUT MUJE UPDATE CHAHIYE
And Good Night Dear 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Amina...


Do Whatever you want , BUT MUJE UPDATE CHAHIYE
And Good Night Dear 😳


haan abhi TSB hi update hoga

pakka promise
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Posted: 8 years ago
When are we getting the update ?
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: sisgeo

When are we getting the update ?


Thursday In Sha Allah
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: jas91

Heloo šŸ˜†

Main aayi
pehle siddha unres kar deti hun
cuz main us din unres karne wali thi but tune baton main lga diya & reh gya phir šŸ˜†
Chalo jaldi

So finally Asad hospital pahunch gya thank god... but oye 2 & half hour Asad ko kuch nahi hua šŸ˜•
& yeh Asad bhi na itni dur le gya tha 2 ghante drive karke & dono itna time chup rahe šŸ˜† Just imagine Zoe jiski chapad chapd kabhi rukti nahi thi who itni der kaise manage ki šŸ˜†
Oh coming back on track so Meher took care of AAK
& AAK ke sinne main Pacemaker 😭 But u still have 2 explain Asad ki story šŸ˜†
chalo than nxt Zoe came back & F guy se scene was OK but tu khuch bhi kar le I still don't like F guy 🤣
Nxt sagai tooti gud Mr F Zoe aapki thi hi nahi toh chalo aage chalo baba 😈 par yeah u r lucky Sara ke jaise galiyan khane se bach gaye šŸ˜†
Than AAk hosh aate hi Zoe se milne nikal pda awe 😳 par yeh bhi unrealistic tha ICU se aise bahar aana can b life threatening but khair fiction hai 🄱
Meher bechari AAk ki zidd ke aage kya karti
Song seq MA tha Bestu meko yeh original song bhi pasand hai & abhi 2 week pehle yeh Kaira pe bhi use hua tha so u see meko kita pyaara hai yeh song... Asya & Kaira dono pe use hua šŸ˜‰
acha toh than bhi Zoe ne Asad ko danta nahi (facepalm) Meher ke saath ke eye talk honi chahiye the where she qstns her through eyes & she makes a helpless look 😳 šŸ˜‰ Mere andar ka writer jaga 🤣
than Nikah time Asya ka emotional scene & Ahad ka unhe dekhna was very touchy & sweet
& than at last he fell down... & after scolding from Zoe & Meher was disposed 2 hospital šŸ˜†
Bestu tune AAK ko iron man bna diya jiski battery khatam hi nahi ho rahi thi šŸ˜† par finally in d end he fell just like a Robo & Meher ko rqst bhi waise ki... "mujhe theek kar do mujhe apni story sunnai hai" 🤣
Overall very mast part
par I was very upset that day ki tune is point pe chod diya 😔 suspence kholne ka dil nahi karta tera
18 part ho gaye ghasete ja rahi hai raaz ko Asad ke pacemaker wale sinne main chupake 😭
Oye but sachi padke maza bada aaya Menu ā¤ļø


Bestu teko pata hai na i love longgg comments par i don't like replying to them 🤣 ab mai nanhi si jaan teri kin kin baaton ka jawab doon šŸ˜† jokes aprart let me reply šŸ˜Ž

haan asad hospital pohanch gaya or asad faint tha budhu or kya hota usko but yes he is critical

i know zoya nonstop chatter hai par abhi wo same asya nahi hain na... bewafa asad... hurt zoya... kya baat karte woh par shayad mene bat hi nahi karni di meko door le jana tha na šŸ˜‰ šŸ˜†

tu na mere se maar khayegi ek ache bande ke liye bolte huwe kya jata tha abhi dekh mai kese usko wapis laongi between asya 😈

haan fiction hai tabhi asad ICU se bahir aya warna toh nurse hi patient ko jaan se maar de or phir doctores ke taunts tauba tauba šŸ˜†

tu or tere kaira... yeh song asya ke liye best laga tabhi use kiya 😳

tere andar ka writer jaag hi na jaaye pata hai kitne months se tu gayab hai as a writer 😔 is se pehle mai bhadak jaon let me concentrate on reply

hayeee tu meko kitne ache se jaanti hai bestu

hugsss šŸ¤—

qasam se mera bilkul dill nahi suspense reveal karne pe 🤣

tu kahe toh 19 part bhi drag kar loon šŸ˜‰ and yes AAK robo jese gira meko type karte time Ra-One yaad aayi thi 🤣 🤣

AAK ka pace maker wala dill 🤣 🤣 u cracked me Bestu 🤣 🤣

seriously yaar kahan se mila yeh title

kis ne dia yeh title

🤣 🤣

controlling myself... meko yeh jaan kar khushi hui ke teko yeh part acha laga

love u Bestu ā¤ļø šŸ¤—

p.s phew hogaya šŸ¤“
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: sasir

Too emotional..
I can't get enough...
Wanna read more...
Superbly written...


I'm trying to make it long one

yes it was emotional but needed for the story

thank you dear
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Sneha8337

Awesome

Plzzz update soon
Plzzz plzz plzzz i cant wait


thank you dear

will update tomorrow

In Sha Allah
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: --Mirage--

Awesome update...dear

Asad in hospital n Zoya came to know about his ealier surgery n is shocked..
She could never lose him
Fahad also freed her from his side so that she could be happy
N all of us do know she could be happy only with Asad
Then the stubborn patient n strict doc convo ..
Asad really took her words of anger to his heart..
AsYa stood together in front of all family n all are confused with the turn of events..
She comforted him when she saw he was in pain..
I too am angry on Asad..
Here all of us are praying for him n he is talking about his death...how could he?!!

Soon we could know Asad's part of story
N Asad too know have to know about his son

We only saw a small glimpse of Ahad..
Now he tooo saw right his father is in pain..

Do continue soon😊


thank you so much arpita šŸ¤— I'm glad you liked the whole update

yes asad is very bad but I guess zoya is there to tight his loose screws šŸ˜†

i know ahad's scenes are less but right now my focus is on Asad

but i promise I'll try to write more ahad scenes

thanks again arpita for such a lovely reply 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Amina...

This is not fair Ashiii ... really not fair 😭😭😭
I wanna read more 😭
First you made me wait so long ... and now finished it like that 😭 ... really not fair ...!!!

And now about the update , it was Really Amazing ...!!!
I m very much happy for AsYa , As they are Finally Together ... but sad to knowing Asad's Condition ...!!!
But i know he will be Alright ...!!!
Loved the Update ...!!!

Please Continue Soon This Time ... Please Please Please😭


amina... i'm here from 2014 and meri specialty hai mai har update ka cliffy end deti hoon šŸ˜† tumhe ab tak aadat hojani chahiye thi šŸ˜‰

jokes apart... thank you s much dear I'm glad you liked it

who said asya are together now??? ek hug se sab normal nahi hojata šŸ˜†

you never know kab kya hojaye

so do stay tuned for more updates

thanks again šŸ˜›
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: preetiasya

Oh my god tat was awesome yaar
Looking forward to read asad side stry
Don't let anything happen to asad
Cont soon


thanks a lot dear šŸ˜› I'm glad you liked it

asad ko kuch nahi hoga, he will tell his story for sure 😳

thanks again

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