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sweet_tehs

@sweet_tehs

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Posted: 8 years ago

#111

Ye Kya likha

Ye kyun likha

Aur kitna rulana hai..

Thanks for ending fahad

But my Asad😭

Itna emotional Kaun likhta hai?

Now waiting for many more FBs.

I loved the hug..

Too good.

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anopama

@anopama

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Posted: 8 years ago

#112

When u write I just want to cry for how beautiful it is

Loved it

It was an emotional one but beautiful all the same

Love fahad he was a gentleman all he wanted was his zoe happiness

And tht lies with asad

Asad just needed to meet zoya he had to by any means

Love their connection she just knew he was there

Love how she soothed his pain

Aww ahad was happy to see his parents together and happy

So he kept his word he stood by nuzhat

Dilshad knew as soon as she saw him

Surprise afra was not mentioned in all the commotion

So now zoya has to explain it all to a room full of people

Meher pkz make asad better he has a story to tell

And zoya might just kill him if he mention death again

Cont and congrats on new thread

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Asif

@asifiqbalsh

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Posted: 8 years ago

#113

Nice & emotional update
Liked Fahad & zoya scene
He need her & she will be with him no matter what.
Asad as worst patient of meher. Now time for family to know what happened to him.
Update soon plz
Thanks for pm

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shweta_yadav

@shweta_yadav

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Posted: 8 years ago

#114

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yr me already ek emotiaonl ladki hu.. n u r doing emotaionl atayachar on us in each update

i knw u love 2 write emotaionl stories but thora to rehm kro asya or mere jaise reader pr .. hora hora happy part bhi add kr dia kro ..

the shocking part is asad had heart surgery ..bechara kitana kuch hua uske saath

Luv this Fahad guy , he understand & wht zoe to be happy with asad, so engegment thor di ( well done boy, i hate u ealier but nw i like u )

so asad shadi me aa he gaya as he promised nurzhat .. but again wo thora sa to baat kr sakta tha zoya hai ( 2 din se dono ne baat bhi nahi kia )

waiting to knw ab kya hota hai ,,,i hope asad jaldi se theek ho jaye..cnt w8 to knw his side of story

whn asad will knw about ahad ?

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update short tha sachi..after taking so long u should update thora bigger update na ... mene kitana w8 kia

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nilusoni

@nilusoni

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Posted: 8 years ago

#115

omg superb part

lots of emotions and roller coster for zoya

so finally zoya knows that asad had problem and thats why gone earlier

omg asad's condition really serious

asya emotional reunion and fahad's decision loved it

finally complete family in shock seeing asya and now want answers

excited for next part and complete truth to be revealed

i hope to see asya and ahad cute family time as well

thanx for pm

plz pm me for next

continue soon

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Ashii

@AkaiBara

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Posted: 8 years ago

#116

Originally posted by: shweta_yadav
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yr me already ek emotiaonl ladki hu.. n u r doing emotaionl atayachar on us in each update

i knw u love 2 write emotaionl stories but thora to rehm kro asya or mere jaise reader pr .. hora hora happy part bhi add kr dia kro ..

the shocking part is asad had heart surgery ..bechara kitana kuch hua uske saath

Luv this Fahad guy , he understand & wht zoe to be happy with asad, so engegment thor di ( well done boy, i hate u ealier but nw i like u )

so asad shadi me aa he gaya as he promised nurzhat .. but again wo thora sa to baat kr sakta tha zoya hai ( 2 din se dono ne baat bhi nahi kia )

waiting to knw ab kya hota hai ,,,i hope asad jaldi se theek ho jaye..cnt w8 to knw his side of story

whn asad will knw about ahad ?

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update short tha sachi..after taking so long u should update thora bigger update na ... mene kitana w8 kia

jitna mila hai usi mai khush raho baalike 😆 you should be happy mene yeh likh liya or else i was at loss of words

haan nxt tym i'll try more long update

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Daljit Dhami

@Always_asya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#117

Wonderful update dear
loved it
zoya's emotions were written beautifully
fahad broke the engagement knowing that they loved each other and zoya would be happy with asad only
love the song
it is one of my favourite songs
waiting how their life took another step
also waiting the moments asad comes to know about ahad
thanks for pm
update soon

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Priya_KABHI

@PriyaKABHI

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Posted: 8 years ago

#118

Thanks for PM,Dear.😊

It was Awesome Part.😊

The way Zoya worried for Asad(KSG) was Heart-Touching.😭

Asad(KSG) already done with a Surgery and now he did another pacemaker,it was so sad.😭

But,Asad(KSG) is fine,it was so Nice.😊

Meher was so nice,he is supporting Zoya and taking care of Asad(KSG).😊

Zoya feeling on heard about Asad(KSG) condition was so sad.😭

Fahad was so Nice,he understood Zoya's Love towards Asad(KSG).😊

Asad(KSG) asked Meher to see Zoya immediately was so Nice.😊

The Feeling of ASYA(KABHI) on seeing each other was so Heart-Touching.😭

ASYA(KABHI) finally together and their Hug was so Cute.😳

Ahad happiness on seeing his Parents was so Nice.😊

I hope Everyone will understood Zoya.😊

Please Update Next Part soon,I am waiting here.😊

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(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)

PriyaSweety-Anu

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shweta_yadav

@shweta_yadav

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Posted: 8 years ago

#119

Originally posted by: AkaiBara

jitna mila hai usi mai khush raho baalike 😆 you should be happy mene yeh likh liya or else i was at loss of words

haan nxt tym i'll try more long update

balika is 2 greedy kya kare😆

Nw whn u will update WHT ?