*New* AsYa OS : Ae Dil Hai Mushkil !!!

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Mayur Chan

@MayurChan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#11

Wonderful O.S Riddhi...👏👏

I liked the way how you you have presented this O.S...

Do wrrite some moreee...

Their are Readers to read here...and visit this forum with a hope to read something good...so do continue writing more of these whenever you get time...

Take Care..😊

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Sumi Roy

@LoveSonu2408

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+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#12

Love it.
So emotnal,so beautiful..
Nwdays m humming/lisening ths sng cntiniously...

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anopama

@anopama

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Posted: 8 years ago

#13

Loved it

Asad came and claim his zoya just before she got engaged

But rehan was great he realizes her feelings and was going to postpone

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Binzzz

@Binzzz

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Posted: 8 years ago

#14

awesome os ridzzz..
loved it..
you can't do it..I was reading in a flow and it ended 😭
beautifully penned dear...
totally njoyddd...

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MOnkEy_rAngEr

@MOnkEy_rAngEr

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Posted: 8 years ago

#15

Very well written

Loved it

Continue soon :-))

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Basanti 🦄

@KaBhiKiBasanti

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+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: allwaysasya
Awesome os riddhi
zoya was goung to get married to Rehan but he he understood her feeling and back out
lovely moment of asya
after a long time read your os
loved it

Hey!!

Thank u sooo much!! 🤗

He knew what would be better he never backed out he just gave AsYa a chance!

Thank u so much

He he ya I have been caught with my hectic schedule lately so this was just something that came on suddenly and I wrote it

Thank u thank u thank u so much

I m seriously glad!

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Basanti 🦄

@KaBhiKiBasanti

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: --Arpita--
beautiful work dear
Glad to see you back

Thank thank thank u sooo much

That's so sweet of you🤗

I will be completely back after 26th

Thank u so much 😳

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Basanti 🦄

@KaBhiKiBasanti

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: --Aishwarya--
Its an amazing work Ridzie!! 👏

Loved it! Good work! 👍🏼

Aishu Di!! 🤗

Thank u thank u soo much

When it comes from writer as u it feels happy and proud

Thank u so much

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jas91

@jas91

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Posted: 8 years ago

#19

Riddhu this is not done 😆 tune bhi is song pe OS likh daali 🤣
Maine bhi likhi hai start middle sab ho gya but ending kuch samjh nahi aa rhi 1 week se 😆
I m sure main bhi ending main blunder karungi 😆 😆

Khair coming 2 OS its beautiful 😃
poor Zoya ke liye aaye tears 😭
Asad ke liye bhi bura lga but jyada sad Zoya ka part tha
thank goodness Rehan samjh ke piche hat gya btw QH wala Rehan yahi karta uski feel aayi mujhe 😊
& end main finally reunion & Asad bada daring nikla Sidha Dulhan ke room main entry maar li 😆
Acha acha bolun kya hehe
but truth is u could have done better cuz yeh tera best nahi tha I know cuz I read ur work b4
so can I ask 4 2nd shot wid ur best foot 4ward 😉 😳
Rest I enjoyed it

Jaane se pehle mujhe ashirwaad do main bhi jaldi finish kar dun MERI WALI 😉 😆

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Basanti 🦄

@KaBhiKiBasanti

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Posted: 8 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: jas91
Riddhu this is not done 😆 tune bhi is song pe OS likh daali 🤣 haww mujhe pata hota main nahi karti, vaise bhi abhi tak ka shayad sabse wahiyaad hai
Maine bhi likhi hai start middle sab ho gya but ending kuch samjh nahi aa rhi 1 week se 😆
I m sure main bhi ending main blunder karungi 😆 😆
Hoshiyari mat maro ha!! Aap jaise logo ko yeh line shobha nahi deti 😆
Khair coming 2 OS its beautiful 😃
Liar liar pants on fire! 😆
poor Zoya ke liye aaye tears 😭
Asad ke liye bhi bura lga but jyada sad Zoya ka part tha
thank goodness Rehan samjh ke piche hat gya btw QH wala Rehan yahi karta uski feel aayi mujhe 😊
Yes ye Qubool hai wala hi Rehaan tha
While writing Rehaan I only imagine SS

& end main finally reunion & Asad bada daring nikla Sidha Dulhan ke room main entry maar li 😆
Daringbaaz dulha...dulhan hum lejaenge 🤣

Acha acha bolun kya hehe
but truth is u could have done better cuz yeh tera best nahi tha I know cuz I read ur work b4

Finallyyy!! Honest reviews!! Meko malum che! Pehle to ek ghante me likha...dusra ye naya forte tha mere liye...to yes...it can be claimed as my worse..so ha even I am not satisfied...thank u seriously 🤗 And abhi apka wala hai na 😃

so can I ask 4 2nd shot wid ur best foot 4ward 😉 😳
Rest I enjoyed it

Mere life me commerce be already hurdung macha rakhi hai...inki problem kaise solve karu..dekhungi if I get something... Sab 26th k baad ab...bohat saari writings Sochi hai..including ff's...
To tab hi kuch

Jaane se pehle mujhe ashirwaad do main bhi jaldi finish kar dun MERI WALI 😉 😆
Kaha na aap jaise logo pe ye sab acha nahi lagta... Bache yeah sab moh Maya hai 🤣...dedh hoshiyari nahi ha...aap meko ashirwad do plzz n mujhe bata sakte ho mere paase kuch help miljaaye

Thank u so much once again juju!! Jas likhne me ajeeb lagraha tha bade ho na 😆