AsYa FF: Mohabbatein - Part 18 Updated: Pg 140 - 20/12/16 - Page 87

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: addicted_93



No problem Daisy! Great update so far

Just wondering though... I believe that Asad, Ayaan and Akram are part of the same brotherhood. So how come Akram never knew that the girl he was to get married to was Ayaans sister. Just wondering whether you missed that detail or there is a twist to it



Aww thanks, Glad you're enjoying! Okay so without commenting on the brotherhood or confirming anything 😆 I'll come to the question you asked..So Asad and Ayaan do share the same friend circle but MOST of these guys were Asad's friends before Ayaans that too from childhood. Ayaan has lived in and out of Kasauli and for the most part spent his life in London and when he came to India permanently Zoya was in new york. So whilst Akram is a close friend of Asad's he has just recently gotten to know Ayaan and doesn't know Zoya is his sister. Also, do remember that MOST people in Kasauli do not know who Zoya is or what her relationship with the Farooqui's is..she is always said to be Zeenats sister to outsiders.

Now that being said, there IS a twist which will come up in part 17 & 18 and will clear the whole thing up. I am not confirming if Akram knows or not..you'll find out the whole deal soon..hope that helps 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
Alright Guys, internet is finally working A LITTLE BIT 😡 so I'm going to start updating now hopefully the part will be up in a few hours! It's really slow so please be patient with me..it'll take an hour for each bit to update but I'm going to get the whole thing done (fingers crossed)!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Cancerian111

Hey daisy wat a dhamaka episode...very long but smartly written and composed.luved it.in b/w my hectic and busy scheduled it's like a refreshner.lovely dialogues and full justification of all emotions. For me da best part ws azaan-asad scenes.u take me too da world of imagination it's just like m watching movie wd beautifully portray of words and characters.and regarding S I think u by mistake wrote asad in fluency so my gut feelings regarding both asad and S are same person Becum true for da time being.:)Just go thru comments as we'll so m agree wd always_asya as I too read Asad in tht scene tbhe I got shocked tht u revealed in fluency.lets wait for ur beautiful relevation for S.ur picture sequel is awesum too.again saying good work.keep it up and do update quickly as ye dil mange more 😛 😊


Aww, Thank You! Glad you are liking Asad & Azlan! Lol, next update mein sabke doubts regarding S will be cleared..let's see who is right. 16 is up...17 will be coming this weekend. Hope you enjoy, don't forget to leave a nice long comment!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: addicted_93

My comment is going to be bursting with quotes today. Especially since we seem to have a crazy connection about those 😛

Great chapter! Asad's past seems so heart-wrenching. If I have to make guesses then I think that they raped a girl and killed her (in the most grotesque way) since Asad seemed so traumatized. Of course, knowing you there will be much more to it. Reading about Asad's past and obvious devastation reminded me of this line from Grey's Anatomy-- "People have scars in all sorts of unexpected places like secret road maps of their personal histories, diagrams of all their old wounds. Most of our old wounds heal leaving nothing behind but a scar. But some of them don't. Some wounds we carry with us everywhere and though the cut's long gone, the pain still lingers".

The Asya moments were obviously my favourite bits. Especially the one in the cafe where ONLY Zoya could piss AAK off and live to tell the tale 😛. Their scenes reminded me of this couplet-- Aag suraj mein hoti hai, jalna zameen ko padta hai ... mohabbat nigahein karti hai, tadapna dil ko padta hai
Again, I'm positive that Asad is S especially because you said that there is no difference between "HIM and HIM"

Loved that Zoya gave it back to Sameer publicly. At least some of them have a clue as to what's going on even if they do nothing about it. Lets hope they the people of Kasauli have the courage to speak up when it counts.

Azlan and Asad scenes ripped my heart apart. I read a simple line once that Azlan should really hear-- "You never loved (him)...Because you don't destroy the people you love" Azlan needs to get his act together. Cause as much as I love him he's really falling in my eyes with every step he takes. He obviously hates playing second fiddle to Asad but has to grow a pair and match up to him.

Humeira is really playing with fire. She's going to get her heart broken and I don't think she's capable of dealing with that. Their scene reminded me of a line from Fanaa that you could make Ayaan use on Naina (even if only to screw with Azlan--

Phool hoon gulaab ka chameli ka mat samajhna ... aashiq hoon aapka apni saheli ka mat samajhna

As always, love the role that Dilshad and Malik play in the FF. Growing a real soft corner for Maya too. Seems to be the only normal one in that Haveli.

Update soon! Waiting for you to officially tell us that Asad is S in the next one 😛


Keep em quotes coming! Asad's past is truly heart wrenching and it hasn't been entirely revealed yet. You may be onto something about the rape and murder but you'll have to wait for the official confirmation in the parts. I didn't finish watching Grey's Anatomy found it to be too boring but that quote was very relative and appropriate. It summed up his past and pain so beautifully and completely. Lol, hope you enjoy AsYa's Caf Scenes in this part too. She lives to tell even greater tales in this part and in 17 too 😆 The couplet is so suitable for their story down the lane. LOL this weekend sabka yeh S wala doubt once and for all door ho jayega..

Sameer seems to forget who he is dealing with. He knows this side to Zoya and yet he just doesn't learn. People of Kasauli seem eager for change so let's see if they stand up when need be. Glad you're enjoying Azlaan and Asad and yes Azlan really does need to step up his game..let's see if he does. Exactly, again with the quote. He really has hurt & messed Asad up as much as Rashid or his step father did. Let's see who gets their hearts broken in the Azlan-Humeira & Naina triangle. I can tell you it's more than one person. Thank you for the Fanaa Dialgoue, it is so apt..I will definitely use it and credit you! Malik & Dilshad are two of my most favourite characters too!

16 is up, hope you enjoy! Can't wait to read your comments. 17 coming soon! LoL 17 mein confirm hoga who 's" is.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: mummyoftwo

Wow. What a powerpacked update!! And a very emotional one to!

My heart really broke for the two (asad n zoya) poor souls throughout the update. Their anguish, torment, and pain is so real and it's torturing to read about Assad horrible past and zoyas struggle with sameer today and her recovery from previous harassment a. I'm very happy with zoyas public bashing of sameer, but unfortunately I believe that she has to withstand a lot of torture from this guy before it gets better.

What do u say about Malik and dilshad! Incredible ppl and their love and support are along with zoya seems like the thing asad will need to heal.

Azlan and asad need to sort their problems. I just want them to be there for each other instead of fighting one another. But azlan has a lot of growing up to do. He was finally starting to grow on me but he really need to get his act together.

The love triangles that are seeming to be developing are also very interested to follow. But I like all the characters, except humaira, therefor I hope no one has their heart broken beyond repair.

Haveli ppl are seriously pissing me of, maybe because I haven't got the whole background story yet. But their claim of love for the other khans just sounds like BS. They are the reason the other khans has a horrible life!

Can't get enough of your ff. Loving every bit of it!


Aw, Thank You! Glad you felt the emotions, meaning I managed to do it some justice. Yah, Sameer is not a side character..he is one of the main villains of the story so I can't randomly kill him off. She will unfortunately suffer at his hands a bit longer but justice will be served in the end. Sameer will get what he deserves. Asad's past is very painful and gruesome..and I haven't fully revealed everything yet..poor baby of mine. Malik and Asad seem to have a lot of fans, me included! Very happy about that. Malik, Zoya and Dilshad. Quite the team eh. It always hurts my heart to write scenes where Azlan & Asad are fighting. A big fan of theirs and their bromance...it's one of my most favourite things about the FF and soon things will change between them. Waiting on that change..and those scenes. Humeira is one of my most least favourite characters too and I'm sorry to say but she will piss you off even more in the upcoming parts before she redeems herself. The love triangles may be interesting...but the broken hearts that will result from it will be not so interesting. That's what it seems like to Asad too. A whole lot of B.S. They ruined my poor baby Asad and now they want forgiveness just like that..well tough luck! Thanks to them Asad is a very unforgiving soul so they can kiss their forgiveness goodbye. They will live to regret what they did to him and his family. Asad will make sure of it. It's a promise he made long ago...

😆 I don't want you to EVER get enough of it. Keep the love coming! 16, is up hope you enjoy! Can't wait to read your comments. 17 coming this weekend too with the big "s" revelation!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Awesome update dear
Loved it
She broke coffee machine & then his coffee with sugar, only she can do that. Asad was in pain & the song described his pain clearly even zoya felt his pain. Sameer was disgusting. Liked the way zoya stood for herself. She was shaken but decided to fight. Asad Azlan scene was good as well as painful for both. Curious to know the history of azlan accusations on asad. Feroz as usual wanted to know their relation but unsuccessful. Asya scene at cafe & Malik teasing was good. Didn't like Humeira as she just judged her as she like Ayaan. She should get to know their relation & then talk. I feel that S is Asad only. He wanted to know why she was worried. Waiting for next update soon plz. Thanks for pm


Aw, Thank You! Yes, only Zoya can both feel his pain and cause him so much pain altogether! There is a little bit of light shedded on the past of Azlan and Asad in part 16 & a little more in 17. Not entirely but some things do clear up. Trust me you won't be a great fan of Humeira for a WHILE! You too! LOL Guess you too will have to wait till 17 for the confirmation of "S". Feroz will finally find out their relationship in 17. 16 is up! Hope you enjoy! Please do remember to leave your comment can't wait to read it. 17 will be up this weekend..hope you enjoy that too!
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Originally posted by: anopama

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Mohab 15
Finally I can read
Demons demons demons of the past
Asad can never have a peaceful sleep always something waiting in thw shadows
Zoya is she his soothing effect his calm
Her anxiousness on feeling him but not seeing him drives her mad
Loved how asad cry for help reached zoya ear in her sleep causing her to wake.
Omg did asad give up on zoya she broke metal and no lash out from him
Good talk zain give to azlan of naina and throw asad in the mix but still azlan heart is clueless
When would a mother worry ever stop for her children especially dilshad seeong her son tortured features
Glad for the smile on asad face seeing zoya in glasses but her sadness he cant handle he can fight the world for her happiness
Black and bitter sweet and creamy their drinks describe both of them they both need tht swap
He is enarmoured by her cant control what tht heart wants tht pull to her
But asad the heart know y it is pulling u to her
Omg the khan khandaan has branch out to seek help and understanding from asad
Rashid is a darpok for real
Glad asad showed them out without a word
Omg thank god anaya didnt witness to ahil and aisha
Asad behavior was justified for a god damn lengha for 25 yrs they didnt seek them out but now he has seen them all in less than 25 days looking for their help
Dilshad said right to suleman when u can give me back my son then u will be forgiven
Zoya Farooqui can do anything and she intend to make jahapanah smile or even laugh her promise to her phuphi
Azlan bribery works every time especially if the person loves u
He is so jealous and clueless
Asad song so amp for him and his voice was able to stop zoya from cutting
Y am i getting a fear tht this haunted screams of girl tht has asad like this may be zoya as her incident happen 7 yrs ago
Yyy it just ripped my heart I am crying with asya as he sang and she listened too and cry
Aww asad the urge to run after her to face the challenge but how can u give in so easily but then the tally on his prestine home had me... lmao
Glad asad tried zoya excercise by himself and felt the relief
It is so interested to see how the haveli is so interested in asad life and they r thr reason it was ruin in thr first place
cant wait for tht to unfold
Azlan reaction definitely a girl came in between the brothers
So zoya ammi went ro same college bur hiw she knows tht thought she dont know her ammi and she is looking for her abu but where she got the pics info etc
Hindi is killing me plz at least put asya convo in english plz.plz
Sameer nasty disgusting creature cant wait for asad to get his hands on u
Humera awww can I strangle her judgemental much
Azlan reaction to his mother outburst shireen always a mean sonofabitch Y the hell hr angry on asad they snatched away from asad not the other way around
Anaya need to grow some balls and walk away from tht proposal bcuz the man us smitten by someone else and it is none other than her sister and tht would be another insult on the family to blame asad and dilshad
Thought asad knew zoya work at cafe ...if only dilshad know kuch kuch already happen to asad for the cafe wali
A crying zoya a worried asad
Are you ok he didnt walk away he left a note awww
Cant wait for asya together so asad could stop Zoya from hurting herself
Awww a perfect tally she was happy he tried her notion she coould help him heal
Really azlan took ur anger on pari
Asad might have just killed him if he stayed and hash it out
But these bros need to sit and talk and clear all MU and the biggest one seems to be pari mother
Love arselan surprise visit Oh god judgmental humera seeing zoya with more guys at rogue
So she is there to impress ayaan but ayaan is ayaan asked for naina
But her seducing dancr worked for her he bite the bait but her night was left hanging
Asad intense eyes on Zoya he was plz she was smiling her worry for him and his pain even though she hate his arrogance she want to see him like tht always not forlorn
Even I am wondering abt tht smile will it be slight or would it be the bhang wala grin
Aww but the asya contact in rogue was so much better than a dance for now
So much peace passion desire and much much more love how zoya didnt flinch at his touch his contact she needed it to feel alive and him he just forgets everything with her even she the same in her he sees life he is not a living corpse with her
From the time I reached to the rogue section in chap I was just anticipating asya promised dance I was like so on edge but it never happened
But she did dare him but he refused bcuz it might have ended more than dancing
But love him dj for her and her dancing her worries away and his torturous thoughts of this happiness he wants but dont deserve drinking himself to oblivion then driving and then crashing
Feroz got told by malik ...oh hope when asad sober he remembers those slap and give it back double time
Azlan rage he was abt to tell the relation but asad beat him to it and said hatred
Love malik giving azlan the job of caring for his brother after all he is his big brother and he broke asad he didnt keep his promise ...asad words hurt him
Lengha showed up at the palace sacing anaya engagement but hope arselan is able to help his brother out of his predicament
Aahil has to speak up soon wonder if arselan is thw man written in anaya kismat
Malik lecturing asad to live look for love life and let go of the pain the hurt but asad dont think of anything but his death tht is his only peace for him
Worried zoya for her jahapanah love ayan teasing her
love asad complain abt coffe his musibat and sugar he do need a little sugar in his life
Sugar and spice and all thing nice again asya and their fights dont matter how hard u try asad she will come closer
Aww anaya modelling her lengha
Haha kajol sleeps with AAK every night maya reaction funny
But AAK and GAFFUR daughter it will happen only it will be Zoya
Azlan has a lot to regret and be ashamed of he can never repay asad for all he has done and doing for him
Zoya should have beat the shit more out if sameer but slowly but surely
Love how assd observed zoya he is so into her what sympton did he recognized and questioned
Zoya qnd her mysterious S tht is so so Asad she didnt know if it was HIM or HIM it is all the same but they both made her feel the same safe secure trust
So it can only be one Asad
Love how he questioned her do u have something to tell me but she hesitated I would have spilled my guts
Love zoya snd pari time their talk abt chachu and prayer for chachu
How do asad know chutki or of chutki
Azlan has a death to repay know aisha fav colour
Aww asad fell harder seeing a selfless zoya an almost dimple smile tht girl will make him mad
Phirse jinn playing ps4 another smile as he ran to turn up the heat to warm this kindhearted girl who didnt rat him out to his mother and he was thankful, appreciative and made him admire her kindness.
Took me 11/2 days to read it was hard finding my quiet space but enjoyed love the slow changing of asya equations hopefully soon it will be asya together
Waiting impatiently for more.


Bechara Asad eh. Yes Zoya is his healer! I loved writing that scene too, where Asads cry for help reaches Zoya once again. Azlan is a fool! As bewakoof as Ayaan was in the show. Dilshad is a very worried mother indeed especially in this part. Asad is a very troublesome son..Yes Asad can literally fight the world for Zoya but he can also fight Zoya too (no hating!) LOL that is the plan. They really need the sweetness swap! His heart is helpless and thus so is he. Yes, Rashid is coward! Asad hasn't even fully put them in their spot yet. One day and I can't wait for that day! Exactly! A damn lehnga is what it took for them to wake up and remember him. Zoya Farooqui one day will fulfill her promise of making her Jahapanah laugh. They are the reason why her son is so broken so until and unless they can fix him how can they expect forgiveness right? Well, no confirmations on the haunted screams and the incident 7 years ago..all in due time! LOL only Zoya would have the guts to make a scoreboard on AAK's mansion. More about the girl and the Khan brothers is revealed in this part! Don't worry Sameer will get what is coming to him. HUmeira will piss you off even more I'm afraid. Yes, Zoya's ammi did go to IMA as well. Yes the Haveli is very much interested in Asad's life..and their interest and curiosity will only continue to grow. No Asad doesn't know Zoya works there..he will be finding out soon though! Kuch Kuch nahin bauhat kuch ho raha hai that Dilshad is unaware of. Anaya would walk away but she doesn't know yet that Aahil is falling for someone else so she really has no reason to want out of the relationship. It was in Azlans best interest that Asad left at that moment...the brothers scenario will soon be shaping up a bit. Not entirely, just a bit! Hope you enjoy that! Oh that bhang waala grin 😳..let's see eh..Zoya needs to get him smiling soon so we can all find out soon 😉 Glad you enjoyed the Rogue sequence. Everyone is eager for a dance but AsYa have not reached the point in their relationship where they can dance yet. They will soon, and trust me it'll be worth the wait. Asad will be giving 100x worse to Feroz..he has it coming! Malik is just too much 😆 Let's see who Ghaffurs daughter is...my mouth is zipped. LOL rarely are Haveli scenes funny. The sleeping with AAK was one such scene 😆 Azlan can NEVER repay Asad..He knows of chute through Farida Bi again..it will only be explained later on. In due time. Asya's equation will continue to change slowly and steadily. Hope you continue to enjoy it! Lets see if Arsalan does damage control in advance or if things get ugly and hearts are broken.

16 is up! Hope you enjoy! Can't wait to read your comments. 17 too coming soon!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Always_asya

Wonderful update Daisy
totally loved it
asad's past haunting him badlly and day by day it is becoming difficult for to him breath
i badlly wanted to know how all this happened though i have a vague idea about it
poor asad already so upset and madam zoya keeping continue her mission how to ruin everything in his house
so it was the incident you were saying that asad will not scold her
she also shocked to see that he did not scold her
asad did not want to worry his mother and sister so pretend to be happy but being a mother dilshaad can see his pain
asad forgets his pain to see zoya in pain and want to erase the sadness from her eyes and ready to do anything for that
zoya as usualy in her impulsiveness changed her coffee with his
loved their banter in cafe
i hate these royals
when they need anything they came to beg
they have no deceny
why cannot they let asad in peace now
even my mood become sour while reading their scenes
zoya's antics are really amazing
even the driver though that his mental balance is not right
loved her way of lesson the stress
so how she marked asad's white haddi
and he did not erase it
one thing i didnot understand why azlan is so angry to see the magazine
in previous chapters he wondered why asad did not look for any girl at IMA and at his bunglow he was teasing him and now he got angry that asad move just bcs he think that asad killed pari's mother
he himself brought every different girl to his house and expecting that asad did not even moven wowi really do not understand his so called love
i really want to kill that sameer
he is crossing the limits now
cannot wait to see asad killing him
asad saw zoya crying but did not much thought about it
oh my god zoya said to zeenat thinking as ayaan
loved the rouge scene
humaira is jealous to see ayaan with zoya and so asad
asad become DJs for zoya
loved the way azlan took care of asad though he himself was the reason behind asad's bad state
asad in his unconsciousness ranted about zoya too and azlan is curious to know who is she
ayaan is really the bestest friend someone wished for
i really loved his bonding with asad and zoya
zoya again doing mischiefs to take revenge from asad
malik make comment about both
being a old man he can see through their fights
i want more malik and zoya bonding
asad got suspected about the signs of depression in zoya
loved zoya's intraction with s guy though i am 101% sure is asad
zoya gave toys to children and laughed with them
asad saw her humanity and respected her though did not admit
zoya's ps4 and jinn
loved that scene too
hope this comment of mine is long enough to fair with long update
thansk for pm
update soon


Thank You! LOL I know you guys all want to know what Asad's past is and things will really start clearing up post part 18. Zoya ki to zindagi ka mission hi "Torture, Mr.Khan" banta jaa raha hai. Asad is the only one who can heal her pain and cause her THAT much pain at the same time. So NO hating on Asad in 16 please! Yes, a Mothers heart always knows. Hope you enjoy their banter in the caf in 16 as well. Don't worry we ALL hate the royals. Selfish people. Zoyas mental balance is ACTUALLY not right 😆😆! Not just Asad but I too question it when I write her scenes and dialogues. Asad Miyan is in so much trouble he just doesn't see it. Aaj to sirf ghar se line nahin erase hui..lets see what happens aage..You'll see why Azlan was so pissed about the magazine. It is easier said than done to see Asad move on when he is still hung up on the same girl. We all want to kill Sameer! Don't worry Asad will KILL Sameer when the time comes. Glad you enjoyed the Rogue scene! Glad you enjoyed Azlan and Asad scene..just as much as I love writing them. Ayaan-Asad-Zoya my favourite characters. He really is the greatest friend! Malik & Zoya will have a GREAT bond don't worry. "S" revelation coming in 17! Lets see how right everyone is!

16 is FINALLY up! Hope you enjoy! Can't wait to read your comments. 17 this weekend!
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Oh no. Cliff hanger. I hope Zoya is safe. As always beautiful update and can't wait for more. Please update soon.

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