AsYa FF: Mohabbatein - Part 18 Updated: Pg 140 - 20/12/16

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Posted: 8 years ago

#461

Originally posted by: Always_asya
How 😲

Can't choose one scene...

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Posted: 8 years ago

#462

Originally posted by: Always_asya
Btw you did to replied to the comments of previous part yet

No I reply to the comments while I do the final edit and post the next part so will reply to all the lovely comments when I'm posting 15 or when I start editing it...

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Daljit Dhami

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: DailyDaisy

Can't choose one scene...

I agree it is difficult but according to me there was a special scene in every part which become my fav like in 14 beach scene was something new from all

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Prettyzoya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#464

Stop teasing us and give us a teaser

Plzzz

Pretty plzzz

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DailyDaisy

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Posted: 8 years ago

#465

Originally posted by: Always_asya
I agree it is difficult but according to me there was a special scene in every part which become my fav like in 14 beach scene was something new from all

Giving the teaser now just undecided between two scenes...yo part 15 is already so long and I have so much left to write in it I'm scared..😲 tum log agle saal parna finish karoge 😆

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Okay Guys, so normally I don't post spoilers mid way between two updates for the coming part but this was specially requested by one of my most loyal readers @always_asya so everybody thank her 😆! The next part will be up this weekend OR Monday/Tuesday at he latest and it is SO bloody long I am SCARED. Initially I was undecided about which scene to post and again @always_asya told me to post the most special scene..so I chose two things to tease. They are two different spoilers (show some love people I am giving you two!) One is part of my most favourite dialect between AsYa in the part and the second one, it may not be the most special scene in the update but I personally LOVE it. This along with many other AsYa scenes in 15 show the constantly shifting dynamics between AsYa. Okay I will stop torturing you guys with my rant and let you read the teaser. Don't kill me for the tease...

Also if you want to comment please make sure not to on page 70. If this page finishes let me quickly res and then you can continue commenting on page 71 (DEFINITLY do so 😛). Okay for real this time, here it goes..

Teaser 1:

Asad walked downstairs replying a message on his phone when he heard the front door being thrown open. His face paled for a split second, worry taking over as he watched too shocked and bewildered to react initially as a hysterical Zoya, ran through the front doors Vigorously wiping away her tears with the back of her hands. Asad watched panicking as she dropped her book bag, almost as if she were too weak to carry it, it just fell off her shoulder and she merely stumbled a few steps before she staggered upright and continued running towards her room again just as Asad almost reached out for her as if he could touch her, hold her from the distant stairs he was standing on. She didn't even notice him standing there and ran away to her room crying. Asad flinched as her room door slammed shut, something clenching painfully in his chest at the sight of her tears. He slowly walked down the remaining steps, zoned out completely. His eyes, mind, heart everything focused on that one bedroom door alone and nothing else.

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A little while later...something appears beneath Zoyas bedroom door. Zoya is very shocked to see it.

What is it and who put it there?...

Teaser 2:

Zoya - Are you suggesting we get high before this?

Asad - (Screamed. Bewildered by her outrageous behaviour) Aapka Dimaagh Kharaab hai! High before what?

Zoya - Before racing to the front gates and back (she shrugged and said with such a dead serious face that he was even more convinced she was high. She said it like it was the most obvious thing in the world)

Asad - Are you MAD! You want to race to the front gates in this freezing weather!

Why does Zoya want to race to the front gates in the freezing weather and why does Asad want to get high?

xxx

LOL, there you have it. So don't kill me for the tease like I said before..and try to keep calm till the update. Enjoy and leave me comments about what you think is happening in both the scenes..

xo - DailyDaisy!

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Daljit Dhami

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Posted: 8 years ago

#467

Originally posted by: DailyDaisy

Giving the teaser now just undecided between two scenes...yo part 15 is already so long and I have so much left to write in it I'm scared..😲tum log agle saal parna finish karoge 😆

Hahaa i would loved if the update never ends though even a year darling 😉 you make me addicted to your update like this 😆