AsYa FF: Mohabbatein - Part 18 Updated: Pg 140 - 20/12/16 - Page 27

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey Guys! So FINALLY the long awaited Chapter 13 is up! This is the longest wait there has been for a part and I am sorry it kept on getting delayed even despite my promises but sometimes circumstances are NOT in my control. This part was originally supposed to be 3x this size because mera dimaagh haraab hai 😆..it took me almost 6 hours to edit this. Since I cut back I will probably give ya'll a double update this week and MAYBE another one next week. All that I teased for part 13 was supposed to happen in this part but...I would never finish writing/editing it and you would never finish reading it so all that will happen in the coming parts. That being said this is still one of MY favorite parts..because it shows deeper into AsYa's past and different sides to them. It also has many AsYa scenes! Part 14 which will be up later this week has a LOT of hilarious Zoya antics and AsYa scenes so I hope you enjoy that too! As always be sure to leave comments and views!

Guys, also note that I made a small change to the actors I originally posted to play the parts! Ayaan's character, I am now imagining as Ankit Raaj! I feel like all the other guys are more mature and elder looking and Vikrant looks like a kid in front of them. Especially Asad & Ayaan as friends wasn't gelling. I feel like Ankit looks the part completely! Casanova, bad boy who says it like it is! Plus he looks more mature and grown up like Asad's age! That, and his and SJ's off screen friendship is so endearing I feel like they would play the siblings perfectly! If you want to continue imagining Vikrant it's up to you! But I am writing with him as the actor in mind!

Also Guys..Thank you SO much for all your love and support I can't believe this fan fic has 12,000 + views or that the thread is 50 + pages. I literally never thought it would be possible when I first started writing..and now..WOW.,xoxoxo!!

Anyhow..enough of me rambling. Part 13 is up..Happy reading!

xx This by the way is the look of Asad I imagined for his speech at IMA 😳😳 and the poses he struck for the photographer that had girls swooning *swoons* xx




The top image (right side picture) is the one that will be printed in the newsletter. *Swoons again* 😆

P. S Can anyone tell me how to upload pictures on the forum..like with this fan fic that don't necessarily have a web link?

xo - DailyDaisy!
Edited by DailyDaisy - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Sorry so late
Wow the lion is furious and he roared
Poor zoya but dont matter how scared she was she stood her ground
In all his anger he still found her beautiful though
Loved the sisters bond in the haveli
Naina is so right azlan who but who is she kidding
Ayaan is funny though
Aww humeria he refuse ur fren request
So the elites dinner is terrorized
Our selfless zoya runs to help but was warned and sent home by her mysterious chocolate eyes
Zoya breaks down in dilshad arms the mothers love she always crave
She was ready to risk her son to find her daughter
Dont worry he did send her home safely and watched her tillnshe fot there
Asad at office how convenient
Azlan anger at asad is not justified he cant hate asad for being there for his daughter when he wasnt and cant blame the child for loving who was there for her
Asad would be totally broken if anything happens to pari
Aww zoya took her warning at heart she wore the chains back
How come it is 2 thought it was one chain
So she is hoping for a 3rd meeting
So Akdu came home she observed him
He dont smile dont worry u will make him smile
Dilshad and zoya convo on asad so sad
Smile laugh will he ever maybe one day dilshad wish will fulfil
He is insomniacs
So zoya learns he lost the contract
Say sorry would not be so easy a hand to silent and a foot in the face ...Oh boy
Ayaan puts royality to their place call them what no way they hurt the people he loves
So "S" saves the king but he didnt see the king he saw someone else when he looked at him ...his grandfather
So one morw confirmation the zoya mystery is Asad
Dillu and asad convo on love and family and his health ws so beautiful
She as a mother is worried for her son
He swore he will never ever fall in love
He dont want to see his ammi crying so he didnt kill the musibat
I want when asya get together for asad to just put his head in zoya lap and have a good night's sleep
Hurricane zoya
Cake Sauce un asad cup nice
Aww she wants to make phupi happy and make akdu smile
Dont worry zoya not impossible
Love malik a way to put azlan in his place
A prince as security for a nobody
Zain do enjoy azlan dilemma...haha
Malik has a special hatred for gaffur?
Hasena always a bitch
Zoya grandparents in regret good to let them grieve some more zoya
Shelia is a good fren
Honey singh tonite
Now i know how asya will have alot of moments at cafe bcuz she works there
Cant wait for them to get together
But guess we have to have friendship before lovers
Asya outburst with each other
God forbid he dont want to be her father or brother
Zoya considers him beautiful hope he acknowledge tht wgen he cools down
Concert ki dushman
Dream abt yo yo...haha zoya couldnt even say honey was better than asad
Off to the concert god help her
Ayan really y did u call asad and rat the girls
Asad memory so sad all his talent and ambitions got snatched away by fathers
Rogue cant wait for asya dances there but right now a dancing zoya who knows eyes r on her but whose is it S or asad how abt both the same...an angry and jealous one who will kill her when he got a hold of her
Also an angry and jealous azlan and humeria for ayan and naina
Fight fight fight
Azlan an ayaan asad a victim
Zain a pussy oh asad and azlan blow up
So their bond shattered over a girl
Who was she thought asad had no one in his life
Wow freedom asad gives up affter all the verbal vomit and tears he set thwm free he dont care
Asad the audacity how xan u throw away the girls world best creation something she only makes for special people
So r we gonna see a changed zoya she is genuinely sorry Ns wants to learn more abt him
Naina and kajol plan may work but in the end ayan may be hurt bcuz I think he do like naina
Dilshad pain at being the cost of her son broken dreams heartbreaking
Love the respect aisha has for her younger bro
Plz too much tears in KM we need happiness in tht house
Omg hymeria rude much ayaan got girls fighting for him
Rolls Royce nice ...asad hates the sight of his abbu and family
Yes yes yes zoya is asad faceless girl from years ago bcuz he gor tht feeling of hwr being near and it was zoya in the other room dancing the song
Asad needs food and azlan needs to get it
His speech touch my heart
AAK for mayor never happening
Zoya jealousy at the behayad girls
So she talked to him and he lashed out
She is not impressed by his looks really and he wants her to be bcuz she is the only one who rurned his head
So slimey sameer has slezy friends too sohail
I hope asad would have seen her distress but he wad raged with jealousy
But glad he stuck around the School for he protection
But he needs to pay more attention to her but hopefully soon he will figure out everyrhing
Asad protectiveness and worry foe zoya is admirable at rhis early stage but when he realizes her life and what she does how will he heal her how will they heal eaxh other
Omg zoya is a cutter so so sad to see tht immense hurt and pain and her way ro ease it
So zoya is the reason her jiju die $ameer killed him he tried molesting zoya at thw age of 15 such a bas***d
And now he has her back after 7 yrs and he will claimed her as his this time no one to stop him
So they threaten asas life tht is y zoya went quietly.
Sameer Anand so he is the big criminal of kausali remember the name Anand at the beginning
Love asad and ayaan convo he is his brother by choice not his brother by blood
So he is more important
Love tht bond and friendship
Well I finished this chap still has 14 to go
Hope I catch up before 15 uploads
Edited by anopama - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
I mostly loved the part in chapter 13 at IMA
Gaffoor is just chance seeking person
he was full of pride for himself
the king and his sons what they think that asad will forgive them after what they did with him
just smiling and saying few sweet words is not going to heal his wounds of 25 years
asad felt the precence of her again which he felt before
waiting when you reveal this mystery
azlan is worried for asad's saftey but did want to show
oh gaffoor's speech everyone half asleep including rashid and javed too
zoya also came to know about asad's past by his speech
sameer is just disgusting
before asad i want ayaan beat him up for hurting his baby sister whom he loves more than anyone in his family
did zoya tried to suicide before ?
i really felt crying after reading zoya's convo in fazien's grave
ayaan's anger towards asad was right
when he need him he did not take his side
one more question why azlan said to asad that his hands are cover with her blood
whom he was talking about pari's mother or someone else
cannot wait to read next update
thanks for pm
update soon


Edited by Always_asya - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Guy's I'm sorry but I won't be updating today..I will have it up tomorrow! I just haven't finished writing it and still have to edit the part so it won't be done today and I don't want you guys sitting around waiting for it! Just please be patient with me till tomorrow..I changed the original plan I had of where to end it to get it up faster because if i continued to that point you wouldn't be getting it till next week 😆 !! I promise it's still just as good AND VERY LONG but I just chose to end the part sooner then I initially planned! None the less..just give me till tomorrow and I will give you the part! Once again, Thank you all for your patience support, and sweet words..Thank you especially to Always_Asya for all her kindness (she got me to pave 40!) I really hope you all enjoy Part 13 tomorrow!
Edited by DailyDaisy - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Its ok dear
update when you completed it
but please leave the note like you did now if you are unable to update
As much as we are eager but understanding too
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Posted: 8 years ago
Waiting for another fantastic update



Plzzz update sooon
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Posted: 8 years ago
I will be updating guys..just need a few more hours!!
Edited by DailyDaisy - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
That's ok dear
Will be waiting
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Posted: 8 years ago
Aaj update milega bhi ya nahi socha tha chutti ke din aram se update padhugi but still no update 😭
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Posted: 8 years ago
u promised atleast on weekend u will update bt it is also finishing

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