AsYa FF: Mohabbatein - Part 18 Updated: Pg 140 - 20/12/16 - Page 24

when will you update the next part ?

Originally posted by: Always_asya

when will you update the next part ?

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I just updated SUCH a long part yesterday..haven't even started on the next! Did you even finish 12 yet?

Yes i have read the part immediately when you updated 😊
but when i was goingvto post my comment my phone got hanged 😭
i was so frustrated then
but i shall comment after re-reading the chapter 12.Bcs i do not feel right to comment without reading it again

Super duper awsm update

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very very very well written daisy

Hey BTW azlaan was asad's best friend before ayaan how?

Excellent chapter!
My favourite bits were the ones where Ayaan pisses the Khan family off by talking about Asad. I love that he does it to defend Asad in his own way. Asad deserves friends like these after his seemingly horrible past.
Love that he didn't reveal to Asad that he's Zoya's brother. Asad's jealousy is adorable.

Sameer Anand and Zoya? I feel like he was with her in New York or boarding school and must have harassed her while she was there. Can't wait for Zoya to put him in his place and of course, for Asad to beat the crap out of him

Loving the way Naina is putting Azlan in his place. About time he accepts that he has feelings for her. I absolutely love this side of her. She's matching up to Azlan.

I feel so bad for Aahil, Aisha and Anaya. I can see their story shaping up soon. This love triangle is going to end up hurting a lot of relationships.

Zoya and Asad. What do I even say? There's no part about their story that I don't love. Zoya is playing with fire and she's going to have to face the consequences soon. I hope Asad isn't too mean to her. I'm sure it'll be worth it in the end though.
Knowing that they have disturbing pasts, I know they'll love each other like there's no tomorrow. It reminds me of that dialogue from Jab Tak Hai Jaan "Love that breaks you,still keeps you together, love that create distances, still brings you closer...love that is true and forever"

Azlan and Asads moment at the hospital was so touching. Please don't kill little Pari off with some disease. It will literally break my heart.

Awaiting the next update!

Are yaar tum sab writer update dete ho toh ek saath warna nahi
we poor readers are waiting waiting and only waiting 😭

first of all a big thanks and hug fr ur another long update
coming to ur update its just amazing asusual, interesting and exctng too
after read even a long update, cant satisfied . i mean, it makes want to read more nd more esp ASYA. the way u writing ASYA na... its really an another QH. the same asad nd very similar zoya bt a diff,cute and very intense plot ...must say You are an awsome write dear.
the way u tailored the story, each chars, ASYA's attraction esp Asad's pull to zoya ...awesome nd intense
i luvd ayaan nd zoya's relation nd the jealous asad too nd when ayaan asked asad ," hey, how is my girl, i mean zoya...",i can imagine wat'll be asad's reaction,,... very funny bt cute too. LUVD jeal asad.
nd a new negat char, what'll he do? i mean he is such a ,.,.;, bt still no worries asad is there na nw,.
waiting to knw wat'll happen nxt,.
update sooon na