AsYa FF: Mohabbatein - Part 18 Updated: Pg 140 - 20/12/16 - Page 23

Originally posted by: mummyoftwo

What a power packed update. Amazing as always! A true emotional rollarcoaster. I must say I likes this chapter just as much as the previous one. It was sweet, soft but a total crying fest!!
I feel so so sorry for asad ( and of course the rest of the family members). They have gone through so much and the now I can understand how the past has shaped the present asad. Poor baby! Both his grandparents and stepfather seems to have done serious damage to his being.
Zoya so cute as always. I love how she stands her forunds and do t back down. The slap was deserved even though asad has gone through so much, zoya is standing up for herself.
The bonding between zoya-anwar and asad-zen at it adorable. They have just accepted each other within this 10 days and are a family now.
Boy, asad dos t know what is going to hit him! He's already a goner and zoya is going to have him spellbound (at least that's what I'm hoping)
Asad and Ayaans secret eye-talk...interesting
Who is this S? Confused...
Can wait for the next update! Revelation of Paris relation to the khan boys :-)

Originally posted by: hatelove2012

Very emotional. Poor Asad..8 years old very tender age. Feel so bad for the child in him...

Originally posted by: Always_asya

Aweaome update
loved it totally
Haseena is such a greedy
now she is going to create a big scene for surely
going to farmhouse scenes all were awesome
asad was ready for mehandi and all girls were ogling on him and anwer and dilshaad teased him
zoya as usual in her own world
loved the way how asad took care for his brother and bhabi
why was he so panicked after zeenat hugged him
zoya again teased him about money and this thing create doubt in asad's mind
loved their bickering as always
both are not ready to give up so soon
their performance together was awesome
dilshaad's wise eyes caught the spark between asya
loved the convo between zeenat and aisha
i hope aisha will understand zoya's pain to some extent
zoya put sleeping pills in everyone's tea oh my god
shazia as blame zoya for nothing
asad's step father make entry
i already started to loath him for whatever he did with asad in childhood and now with zoya
asad blamed zoya for stoling money
although i hate it but still he is right on his place
many people made relation with him for money sobit is obivious he would doubt on everyone new coming to his family
zoya slapped him
eagerly waiting to know what happened with her in past that she is so much scared even if someone just touched her
asad felt guilty for hurting her
i hope in future he will say sorry on her face
asad's past is so hurtful
zoya and zeenat's convo was so emotional and heart touching
zoya missed faizen
finally nikaah happened
zoya's brothers are gone
i will miss their bonding
loved the joote scene
asad proved that he is a big dealer
loved the way anwer took zoya for family picture
let see how story will move on
thanks for pm
please update soon

Originally posted by: Cancerian111

Hi. First of all congratulate u fr writng a beautiful concept and da way u portray each and very detail of characters,emotions and scenes it's awesum.Must say ur writing skill are at very high levels mashaAllah that silent reader just like me which is a regular candidate of all da stories move out frm it's shell and result is here that m posting here.love ur story waiting for ur update daily whenever get free time. I thanked all da writers of ds forums as all are beyond da world seriously.plz keep writing ur stuff as v silent ppl regularly wanna need ds type of beautiful medicine.