The one night stand (AsYa FF) update p28

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MOnkEy_rAngEr

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Posted: 8 years ago

#21

So Asad does remember Zoya

Zoya is gonna work as Asad'a pa

Gazia r treating children badly

Lovely update

Continue soon :-))

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JASLEEN

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Posted: 8 years ago

#22

Sooo happy that Zoe gave birth to twins...

N i loved their names too...

Loved the interaction between zoya n asad ..

N that tannu lie is out in front of asad.

But i cant understand why humaira calles zoya as bhabhi...

Who is the bhaiya then??

Waiting to read more scenes between asya...

Thanks for the pm..

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9849565007

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Posted: 8 years ago

#23

Loved the start. Wow twins...want to know asad's reaction

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muskaan17rocks

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Posted: 8 years ago

#24

Amazing start to an amazing story

Loved reading it to the core

I am so glad that asad did not believe tanveer

Thankfully, the biggest fear of mine did not come true

Looking forward to know what happens next now that asya are working together

Hopefully, asad would soon come to know about his children too

Please continue soon

Thanks for the pm😊

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sanarujub

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Posted: 8 years ago

#25

I love this story

Continue soon

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sweet_tehs

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Posted: 8 years ago

#26

Nice start..

And Asya separated in the start itself..

Both remember each other but act out different..

Also babies already there.

Parents are horrible so what is in store..

Please pm me if possible.

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Asyawriting

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Posted: 8 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: shweta_yadav
Vry nice update
So zoya hs twins .. waiting fr asad reaction
N y humaira calling zoya as bhabhi n not nahi or api ??
Well waitng fr the nxt prt ..n thnkew fr the pm
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Thank you! Yup Zoya has twins! And well it's a mistake! Zoya is Humeira's baji not bhabhi, I'm so sorry for the mistake 😕

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Asyawriting

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Posted: 8 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: anopama
Wow my comment give idea of new story
Nice
But back to this story
Love the update
So 2 yrs pass
Zoya going for an interview at DC
Both recognized eaxh other
She will be his pa
Love how he questioned her and his goodbye a little personal
So zoya is humi baji or bhabi error their
Also shouldnt the title of the story has the word ONE in it
So gazia r horrible
Zoya has beautiful twins babies
Mahira and Ahsan
Cant wait to see asad reaction if he learn this
So love the flashback
So he dreamt abt her for the 2 yrs
So she couldnt be a figment of his imagination
So tanveer couldnt con him and she left disappointed
But guessing she is not out of his life bcuz she is on the banner
So guessing asya wouldnt have a smooth reunion
Cont soon

Haha yeah, I can have ideas easily sometimes haha 😆

Zoya is Humzie's baji, I'm sorry for the mistake 😭

Yup I added the one word in the title, I had published it in a rush so well, I'm sorry

Gazia are always horrible 🤢

Tanveer has found a smarter Asad this time 😆

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Asyawriting

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Posted: 8 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: preetiasya
i am happy tat zoya is present tere.😊
feeling bad fr two beautiful twins😭(did u personally like twins?)😆
do cont soon
wat is tere in asad mind?😉
wen will he know about his kids?😭
fastly make the kids come out of the hands of raziya&gafoor.😡
did asad find zoya &made her come to interview?😉
ok enough of questions cont soon...😃👏
next time big update plsss😭⭐️

A story about Qubool hai (with Asad as the main character) can't be complete without Zoya 😆 And yes I do like twins a lot!! I personally expect that someday I'd have twins 😃😆 He seems to be really smitten with Zoya 😳 And no he didn't find her before the interview, it was just destiny 😉

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Asyawriting

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Posted: 8 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: nilusoni
superb part
omg that gafoour and razia behaving so badly with kids
excited to know more
why zoya dont kept kids with her
thanx for pm
plz pm me for next
continue soon

Thank you 😆 Gafoor and Razia are heartless in this story and well.. we can't really change them. I do believe that in this story they're better being bad.. You'll know why in the next chapter 😉