FOR U - ASAD AYAAN DRABBLE

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hello guys!
Do y'all remember me😃

I hope you all do.

Am back with a little piece on Asad-Ayaan which I wrote just like that because my Ankie Alien (MisHumptyDumpty) wanted me to. So here it goes for her...

FLASHBACK IN ITALICS 😳

FOR YOU

His eyes moist with unshed tears, he watched his baby brother sleeping peacefully. How thankful to Allah he was that he didn't take away the last piece of his life, his Ayaan, away from him.

"Aap mere Abbu nahi ho sakte! Mere Abbu bahut hi nek insaan the. Aur aap Mr. Rashid Ahmed Khan, ek criminal hain!" Ayaan shouted at the top of his voice. Asad rushed towards him as he staggered on his feet while walking out of the dilapidated factory. The place which has burnt not just his and Ayaan's life but also of Zoya's. And who was the person behind it? His own father...it had hit him hard too. But he had to be strong for his brother.

He walked towards his sleeping form and adjusted the covers over him. As he was about to walk out, Ayaan's lifeless body floating in the pool water flashed in front of his eyes. What if he tries to do something like that again!? His head moved in negative on its own. He sat down again and caressed his messy curls lovingly. He had to be with him. Tonight and till the time he has healed himself.


Tadaaa! How was it?

Do read and let me know!

P.S- V, Sweety, Dipu ur surprise 🤗


Lots of love guys

SRASHTI

XOXO😳



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WaqtZaya thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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First place



KITNE SAALO BAAD I AM GETTING TO RESERVE MY COMMENT AT YOUR POST THAT EVEN AT THE FIRST PLACE 😭
Edited by MisHumptyDumpty - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Second place
Too


SO Finally FINALLY Fi-Na-LLY U WROTE


This little chotu sa cute sa shona sa piece is making me so proud that I dont have words.




Totally like this >



No seriously.


This was loveable. I missed my Bromance. I missed my AsYaan. And your this chotu sa piece was like sudden rain in a scorching weather.


U have improved SO much.

Alien Proud. So Proud.




And this one is for ya



Edited by MisHumptyDumpty - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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For panda
Edited by MisHumptyDumpty - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Omg!!!!Feels just like this

Okay bakwass band kaam zyada
Its was so beautiful
AsYaan...❤️
Drabbles inne chote kyu hote hai 😭
But inne kam words me bhi I felt like thoda base bgi samjh aya and the bromance too
Baby ko bass pasand hai 😆
Sometimes zyda words me baatein beautifully express nahi karpate and kam shabd me we hit the bulls eye
I loved it totally
Asad is one elder brother jisko dekhkar lagta hai he defined brotherhood as an eldr one and Ayaan is yet again that kid and mature one at the same time
They both define brotherhood
N i love the way they relied on each other and u know like being together
Beautiful!!!!
Lived it and loved it
I missed ur writing and just read UWS few days back
Plzz come with more
I don't know raabit I can say this or not but I am proud
I m chotu na😆
Rabbit tussi agaye tussi chagaye 🤗👏
Keep rocking
Write more!
Much love
Squizi 🤗
Edited by riddhi1206 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Res
Unres

Awesome cute sa surprise...

But very very short drabble

Aur likho


Edited by sweet_tehs - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Srash ,it was really a pleasant surprise for us.👏
It made me nostalgic again
Asad n ayaan
Thank you for writing this 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
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res
so happy to see u baby 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanks for PM,Dear.😊
How are you,Dear? I am missing you,Dear.😭
It was so happy to see you,Dear.😊
It was So Interesting Drabble.😊
The Starting was so Interesting and Different.😊
Please Continue soon and Pm to me,I am waiting here.😊
Always Keep Smiling.😊
__________________________________
(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)
PriyaCherry.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wowww...
Very well done...
It hit hard..

Thank you for the pm..

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