AsYa OS : Her Bleeding Words - Page 2

Originally posted by: ameena671

wow excellent os loved it thank you for pm.

Originally posted by: ameena671

wow excellent os loved it thank you for pm.

Originally posted by: angel_juhi04

In real life, d girl wud have slapped Asad 1st n then Ayaan. She wud then either filed a police complaint or left. She wud have even informed d police abt Nikhat's suicide attempt as a revenge to hurt d brothers. No NRI girl like Zoya tolerate all dis in d name of so-called love.

Originally posted by: sasir

Nice..
But I still think zoya shouldn't have stayed..
She is not 17th century women she is strong n 21st century women to be forced into something like that...
Asad or not no one have rights to force others ...
Leave it..
Very emotional...

Originally posted by: ksen

emotional os

zoya's feelings were written beautifully

loved it

thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: Kiddo_Star

It was a really emotional OS Pari

Loved reading it.

Tnx for sharing this work of urs with us.

Sometimes it really becomes too much to handle and then we just have to let go

Loved it

Thank you.

Love,

Yours,

Princo

Originally posted by: riddhi1206

Beautiful !!

Extremely welll penned!!

Perfect!!

Each word held so much of pain and so much of agony

Amazing!

I felt myself those words!

Amazing!

Keep writing!!

Brilliant work!