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Chapter 4

Ayan's residence:

Next morning, everyone is sitting quietly at the breakfast table eating. Shireen breaks the silence.

"Ayan, kal kahan thay tum? Poora din ghar par nahi thay or kisi ko kuch bataya bhi nahi k kahan ja rahe ho tum."

"Ammi, main ab bara ho gaya hoon. Yeh zaroori nahi k jab bhi main ghar sy bahar jaon apse pooch kar jaon" said Ayan.

"Ayan, tum yeh kaise baate kar rahe ho? Main tumhare Ammi hoon, mera itna toh hakh banta hai k main tumhe pooch sakte hoon k tum kahan thay," Shireen said hurtfully.

"Theek hai Ammi, main kal poora din Asad Bhaijaan k ghar par tha. Isme koi problem hai?

"Kya? Tum unn logo k ghar thay? Tum jaante ho k mujhe unn sabse kitne nafrat hai par phir b tum wahan gy thay? Humara unn logon k saath koi rishta nahi." Shireen replied back angrily.

"Ammi, apko koi rishta nahi ho ga unse par mera toh hai. Wahan mere Asad Bhaijaan rete hain. Mere chote behan Najmq or mere Badi Ammi. Mera unn sab sy hai rishta. Mujhe mere Bhaijaan sy milne sy koi nahi rokh sakta, ap bhi nahi Ammi," Ayan replied in hurtfully and angrily.

"AYAN, apni Ammi sy tameez sy baat karo. Aaj k baad tum apne pyari Asad Bhaijaan k ghar nahi jaa sakte. Bhool gy ho k unn sab ny kya kiya tha tumhare saath?" Gaffur said in anger.

"Please, ap sab mujhe nahi rokh sakte mere Bhaijaan sy milne sy. Or agar koi rokhne k koshish b kare ga, main yeh ghar chor k chale jaon ga." Ayan said and he got up from the table and walked out of the house in anger.

Everyone else gets up from the table and leaves. Shireen goes to her room and Razia follows her.

"Shireen, dekh rahi ho k kya jadoo kiya hai uss Dilshad k baacho ny hamare Ayan par," Razia said to Shireen.

"Haan bhabhi, dekh rahi hoon jab kuch. Mujhe nafrat hai uss Dilshad sy. Mera sab kuch cheen ly gee. Abhi mera Ayan cheena hai mujhse, baad me mere dono betiya b cheen ly gee or saath me Rashid ko bhi. Bhabi ap bataye k main kya karoon? Shireen said while crying.

"Tum bas aisa karo jaise main kahoongi tumhe. Phir dekhna k kaise wo Dilshad tumse kuch nahi cheen paye gee." Razia said evilly.

"Jee bhabhi, main apki haar baat mano gee. Ap bataye toh kya karna hai."

"Mujhe sooch ny do phir batate hoon."

"Jee bhabhi," Shireen said with a smile.

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Asad's residence:

Asad is sitting at the table, eating his breakfast. Dilshad is making tea in the kitchen and Najma is helping her. Zoya comes and sits down at the table. Asad looks at her her. He can see that her eyes are a little red, maybe because she cried herself to sleep last night.

"Good morning Phophi. Good Morning Najma." Zoya says ignoring Asad's presence.

Najma and Dilshad smile at Zoya and Dilshad says, "Zoya, tum nashta shuru kar lo. Main abhi chai ly kar aate hoon."

"Jee Phophi."

"Waise Phophi, Appi or Jiju kahan hain?" Zoya asked Dilshad.

"Wo kisi zaroori kaam sy bahar k hain. Thodhi hi dair tak ajayenge." Dilshad replied.

"Hmmm." Zoya was thinking what was so important that Appi and Jiju had to leave early morning. "Jab wapis aayenge main pooch loonge unse." Zoya said to herself.

"I wish k maine phele Zoya py yakeen kiya hota. Phir aaj wo aise rote nahi or upset bhi nahi hote. Agar maine phele yakeen kiya hota uss py, toh aaj wo mujhse aise naraz nahi hote," Asad said to himself.

"Ms. Farooqui, ap abhi b mujhse naraz hain?" Asad questioned her.

Zoya totally ignored him and said to Dilshad, "Phophi, main bahar jaa rahe hoon, apni Abbu ko doondne. Don't worry, main shaam tak aa jaongi."

"Theek hai beta, tum jao," Dilshad replied back to Zoya.

"Ms. Farooqui, main aapky saath chalta hoon," Asad said to Zoya.

"Mr. Khan, ap please mujhe akhela chor dijiye. Mujhe aapke koi madat nahi chaiye. Or achanak sy main aapky liye Zoya sy Ms. Farooqui ho gee hoon? Zoya replied to him angrily.

"Ab main kya kar sakta hoon? Apke upar ab mera koi haak toh hai nahi toh apko Ms. Farooqui he bulana pare ga. Or aapke help k liye nahi jaana tha mujhe aapke saath. Maine toh bas aise he poocha tha kyunki ap jahan b jaate hain, musibat ko attract karte hain, ap musibat magnet hain. Agar main aapke saath chaloon ga, toh har musibat ho hone sy rok sakta hoon." Asad replied to her.

"Oh really Mr. Khan? Main musibat magnet hoon? Apko pata hai k app kya hain? Akdu Ahmed Khan. Har baat b gussa kar tay hain, kisi baat sunty nahi or daantna shuru ho jate hain." Zoya replied back angrily.

Dilshad and Najma were both amused. They both were happy seeing Asad and Zoya fight like before. Both of them wishes that they lived happily like that, arguing but at least still talking to each other.

"Ms. Farooqui, ap na-" He pauses and then continues. "Ms. Farooqui main aapke saath chalta hoon. Agar main aapke madat karoon ga toh shyad apke Abbu jaldi mil jayenge."

Suddenly Zoya remembered that she was still mad at Asad for not trusting her. She ignored him and left to go search for her Abbu.

"Ms. Farooqui," Asad called out. But it was too late, she already left.

"Asad koi baat nahi. Dekhna bohat jald wo maan jaye gee or tumhe maaf kar dy gee. Uska gussa jayaz hai. Par tum fikr mat karo. Zyada dair tak wo tumse naraz nahi reh sakte. Dekha, aaj phele k tara wo tumse larh rahe thee. Dekhna, tumhe tumhare Zoya wapis mil jaye gee," Dilshad said to Asad after seeing how upset he was.

"InshAllah Ammi jo ap keh rahe hain wo saach ho."

"InshAllah." Dilshad replied.

"Ammi, main office ja raha hoon. App Zoya ko phone kar k pooch lena k wo kahan ho gee shaam ko or main wahan sy usse pick up kar loon ga," Asad said to Dilshad before leaving.

"Theek hai Asad. Ab tum jao."

Asad leaves.

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Zoya is wandering on the streets, looking at those old photographs she has of her Abbu, and asking people on the street.

"Allah Miyan, main kahan dhoondon apne Abbu ko? Ab main apne manzil sy bohat door hoon. Pata nahi kahan hain mere Abbu. Phele toh mujhe lagta tha k main mere manzil k bohat kareeb hoon par phir kisi ne nakhli kabar dy k mujhe mislead kar diya tha. Ab mujhe kuch samaj nahi aa rahe main kya karoon," Zoya said to herself, while crying, tears streaming down her eyes.

Zoya is walking on the street and she bumps into someone. She falls down on the road and so does that person.

"Allah Miyan, what's wrong with you? Dekh k nahi chal sakty?" Zoya said angrily to that person.

Zoya looks up and is shocked to see who it is.

"AYAN TUM?"

"Mona tum?" Ayan said to her.

"Yeh dekho, tumhare wajah sy mere saree photographs ghir gee hain. Ab tum hi utha k do mujhe." Zoya said to him.

"Okay okay Mona, calm down." Ayan picks up the photographs and hands them to Zoya. "Waise Mona, itne gussi main kyun ho?"

Ayan and Zoya walk to a bench and sit there and talk.

"Ayan, mujhe samaj he nahi aa raha k main mere Abbu ko kahan dhoondo. Isliye bus thodi upset hoon." Zoya replied to him.

"Don't worry, tumhe tumhare Abbu bohat jald mil jaye gy. Tum Bhaijaan k help kyun nahi lete? Agar unke help lo gy toh shyad koi clue mil jaye yan kuch?

"Ayan, tum bhool gy? Main tumhare Bhaijaan sy abhi tak naraz hoon or dekhna, main itne jald maaf nahi karoon gee unhe." Zoya replied back in a upset tone.

"Lekin Mona, main jaanta hoon maine tumhara saath diya tha or dost ban kar hamesha doon ga par ab mujhe lagta hai k Bhaijaan ko unke galti ka ehsaas ho gaya. Toh ap unhe maaf kar dy." Ayan tried explaining to Zoya but Zoya being her stubborn self didn't agree.

"Nahi Robert, main dekhna chahate hoon k mujhe manane k liye wo kya kya kar sakty hain. Or main nahi itne ehsaani sy unhe maaf karoon gee. Waise inn sab baaton ko choru. Tum yahan kya kar rahe ho?" Zoya asked Ayan.

"Wo Ammi k saath chota sa jagra hua tha aaj subha. Uno ny mujhe poocha tha k kal kahan thay tum. Maine kaha tha k main Bhaijaan k ghar par tha. Toh uno ny gussa kiya tha or mujhe kaha tha k aaj k baad tum Asad or uske family sy nahi mil sakty. Mona, tumhe toh pata hai k main Bhaijaan ko dekhe bina nahi jee sakta. Toh main gussi main ghar sy chala gaya tha." Ayan explained to Zoya.

"Allah Miyan, what's wrong with you Ayan? Gussa toh har kisi ko aata hai or jagre bhi har kisi k ghar hote hain. Par aise ghar sy chale ana? Yeh theek nahi hain. Main jaante hoon k tumhare ghar walon ko aacha nahi lagta jab tum Mr. Khan sy milty ho. Par duniya wale jo bhi kahe, usse tumhe kya matlab? Tumhe apne Ammi ko pyaar sy samjhana chaiye hai k tumhara or tumhare Bhaijaan ka rishta koi nahi todh sakta. Or tum dono ko koi alag nahi kar sakta. Bhale tum saghe Bhai bahi ho par saghe Bhai sy bhar kar hai tum dono ka rishta. Tumhe tumhare Bhaijaan sy koi alag nahi kar sakta. Tum jab chaho tum apne Bhaijaan sy mil sakty ho. Apne Ammi ko pyaar sy samjaty. Aise gussa bahi kar tay. Ayan, kisi ko apne Ammi ko kabhi bhi nahi hurt karna chaiye hai. Iss duniya main koi aise cheez nahi hai jo ek Ammi sy bhar kar hai. Mere Ammi abhi iss duniya main hai nahi par or mujhe woh theek sy yaad bhi nahi par jo bhi ho, main abhi b unse bohat pyaar karte hoon or unhe bohat miss karte hoon. Ayan, tumhare paas toh Ammi hai. Galti sy b unhe itna hurt mat karna k wo tumhe chod k chale jaye. Ayan, tum ghar jaa k apne Ammi sy maafi maango gy or unhe pyaar sy samajao gy," Zoya explained to Ayan, with tears streaming down her cheeks.

"Mona, tum theek keh rahe ho. I'm sorty k maine apne problem sy tumhe upset kar diya. Thank you so much Mona. Tumne mujhe apne galti ka ehsaas kara diya. Mona, main ghar chalta hoon. Pata nahi Ammi kitne upset hoon gee. Over and out."

"Ayan, yaad hai tumne kya kaha tha? Friendship mein no sorry or no thank you. Main tumhare dost hoon or tumhare hamesha help karoon gee. Over and out." Zoya said to Ayan before leaving."

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Asad's residence:

The door bell rings. Najma goes to answer it.

"Bhaijaan, app itne jaldi aa gy hain?" Najma asked Asad, who was standing at door.

"Haan Tamatar, kuch kam tha isliye aaya hoon." Asad answered.

"Aacha, kya kaam tha?"

"Wo actually, tumhare jo hone wale Bhabhi hai, usse manane k liye aaye hoon."

"Ooo acchaaa. Par Bhaijaan, mere Bhabhi toh abhi ghar par nahi hai." Najma teased Asad.

"Tum bas dekho. Jab Zoya ghar aaye gee, tab tumhe pata chal jaye ga k mera plan kya hai or main usse kaisa surprise doon ga."

"Najma kon hai?" Dilshad called out to Najma.

"Wo Bhaijaan aaye hain." Najma answered.

Dilshad comes to the living room. "Asad, tum itne jaldi kyun aaye ho?"

"Ammi, apki "behari" bete ko manane ke koi tyari karne hai. Isliye aaya hoon."

"Aachaaa." Najma and Dilshad smile at each other. "Tum ja k fresh ho jao. Main khana laga tee hoon." Asad goes to his room to freshen up. Dilshad said. "Waise Najma, Zeenat or Anwar abhi tak nahi aaye?"

"Nahi Ammi. Pata nahi kahan hai." Najma answered.

The doorbell rings again and Najma answers it. It's Zeenat and Anwar.

"Ap dono aa gy? Mujhe kitne jinta ho rahe thee. Pata b nahi tha ap dono gy kahan thay." Dilshad said to Zeenat and Anwar worriedly.

"Woh hum dono sooch rahe thay k hum yahan shift ho jaye, Bhopal mein. Isliye ghar dekhne gy thay. Or humne ek hareed b liya. Ab hum Bhopal mein he rahenge." Zeenat said.

"Arre yeh toh bohat aache baat hai. Yeh sunn k Zoya b bohat khush ho gee." Dilshad said happily.

"Haan, bohat khush ho gee. Hum dono jaa k fresh ho jate hain." Zeenat said to Dilshad and went to the guest roon with Anwar to freshen up.

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Ayan's residence:

Ayan comes home and goes to Shireen's room. He knocks on her door.

"Ammi, mein andhar aa sakta hoon?" Ayan asked Shireen.

"Haan Ayan, aa jao." Shireen was still upset over how Ayan argued with her for his Bhaijaan.

Ayan runs to Shireen and lays his head on her lap. "Ammi, I'm sorry. Mujhe maaf kar di jiye. Mujhe apke saath aise badtameezi sy nahi bolna chahiye tha. I'm sorry."

"Koi baat nahi Ayan." Shireen said to him.

"Ammi, ap toh jante hai k mere lite mere Bhaijaan kitne important hain. Main toh unke bina jee nahi sakta. Ammi, main nahi chata k koi mujhe unse door kare." Ayan tried explaining to Shireen.

"Ayan, main jaante hoon. Mujhe sirf iss baat ka daar hai k koi mujhse mere family cheen ly. Main apko, Rashid ko or Nikhat Nuzhat ko khona nahi chahate. Ayan, mujhe daar lagta hai k wo Dilshad mera sab kuch ly na ly." Shireen said to Ayan.

"Ammi, apse apke baache china kyun chaiye gee Badi Ammi. Unke pass toh Bhaijaan hain, Najma hai, or Zoya bhi. Unke pass apne baache hain. Unko humare family sy kya matlab? Or jahan tak Abbu k bast hai, agar Badi Ammi apse unhe cheen na chahate, toh wo uno ny bohat phele kyun nahi kiya? Ammi, ap Bhaijaan k family k baare mein aisa kyun sooch tee hain? Wo bohat aache log hain. Humare ghar walon sy unka koi matlab nahi."

"Haan Ayan, tum theek keh rahe ho. Maine yeh phele kyun nahi soocha tha? Dilshad k apne baache hain. Wo toh bus mere baachon ko pyaar dy rahe hai or wo b maibe galat samajha. Or Rashid k paas wo aate he nahi. Maine kitna galat soocha, hai na Ayan?" Shireen asked Ayan.

"Haan Ammi, par apko apne galti ka ehsaas ho gaya or isse baari baat koi nahi."

Shireen hugs Ayan happily. Razia is standing at the door, watching all this.

"Aacha Ammi, mujhe bohat bhook lag rahe hai. Main Humaira ko kehta hoon k wo mere liye kuch banaye." Ayan said.

"Theek hai, jao kha lo kuch."

Ayan leaves and right after he leaves, Razia enters.

"Bhabhi ap? Apko pata hai, Ayan ny mujhse maafi mange hai or mujhe sab samajaya hai. Main kitna galat soich tee thee. Par ab sab kuch theek hai. Mujhe apke ab madat nahi chaiye Bhabhi, shukriya." Shireen said to Razia.

"Haan, wo sab to theek hai par-" Razia pauses. She thinks to herself "Agar main kuch kahoon gee, yeh Shireen shayad jaa k Ayan ko bata dee gee. Rehne he do." Razia says to Shireen, "Main bazaar ja rahe hoon. Thode dair tak aa jaon gee."

"Theek hai, ap jaye." Shireen said and Razia left.

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Precap:

Razia asks Tanveer for help. Will Tanveer help her or not?

Asad surprises Zoya. Will she forgive him or not?

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Sorry for this short update. I know it was kind of boring. I will try to make the next update longer and more interesting.

Please comment and like. Thank you.
Edited by Asya_Forever - 9 years ago
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Nice update dear
Loved it
Ayaan Zoya convo was good
He realised his mistake & apologies to his mother. Asad wanted to give Zoya surprise. Curious to know how he pacified his angry zoya. Update soon plz
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