#2| Drabble Series: Forbidden Love [COMPLETED-20/01] PMs Later - Page 6

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Posted: 9 years ago
#51
Omg nooo...
If you're thinking of marrying zoya to kabir and him raping her or any other guy for that matter, please don't do that.. Don't taint zoya... She is only asad's...it'll really break the readers including me😭
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Posted: 9 years ago
#52
Nice update
Asya needs to talk
A real convo
They need to put the sex to the back burner and finally figure out what they want
Zoya is young she is entitled to be confused
Asad is a grown man he needs to know what he feels he should know what he feels and what he wants
Plz have kabir there but don't bring him between Asya relationship
Don't bring rape into this it is not a good thing
And Asad didn't rape zoya she is an adult and she give into her desire
Asad knows he want her in his life for some reason he is afraid to commit
Maybe it has to do with her age and what will be said in society
Cont soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#53
WOW!! fantastic updates dear...loved them
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Posted: 9 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: anuv6

too short update... :(
arghhh, why i feel like i'm going to be mad...yaar hw could u stop at that point, i mean from last two updates i really just hope to knw asad's pov ,bt u gave a very short update which ends with just asad's reaction...like some typical serials,makes audience crazy fr the nxt part
Nw, what will happen nxt...?
apart from my complaints its an amazing update, honestly...LUVD it ,like always.
I just hope u will update the nxt part soon , otherwise i'll end up being mad by reading this story again nd again.



I wanted to include Asad's POV bt the update was turning longer... and I want to write a drabble series not SS or FF so I had to cut short it his POV will be coming soon in the next part
Thanks I will update soon:)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: Lovesahil

Omg nooo...

If you're thinking of marrying zoya to kabir and him raping her or any other guy for that matter, please don't do that.. Don't taint zoya... She is only asad's...it'll really break the readers including me😭



No I know what kind of thing rape is and this story is not really that dark I won't really jeopardize it to that extent trust me with it, it is moving towards its end and a high voltage drama was planned right from the beginning... Kabir is only a side character I don't plan anything of that sort...:)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: muskaan17rocks

Awesome update

Glad that we are finally getting the much awaited confrontation between them
Surely this would lead the way toward the future of their relation
Hopefully they would make a good decision especially asad
Looking forward to know what happens next in the story
Please try to continue soon
Will be waiting impatiently😊



Yeah its time for the decision cos, he story is ending atleast the first series:) It will be a roller coaster ride though when others get included in too :P
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Posted: 9 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: anopama

Nice update

Asya needs to talk
A real convo
They need to put the sex to the back burner and finally figure out what they want
Zoya is young she is entitled to be confused
Asad is a grown man he needs to know what he feels he should know what he feels and what he wants
Plz have kabir there but don't bring him between Asya relationship
Don't bring rape into this it is not a good thing
And Asad didn't rape zoya she is an adult and she give into her desire
Asad knows he want her in his life for some reason he is afraid to commit
Maybe it has to do with her age and what will be said in society
Cont soon



I guess its my mistake in penning it down this way or atleast I should have added full confrontation instead of breaking it to avoid confusions! The word like forced or rape was just used cos it was an outburst that's it! This piece would never turn that dark... Its just about a relationship between two people having huge age gap and all the differences they will have as its also a generation gap!!!!! NO DISGUSTING SUBPLOTS:)

Zoya is an adult a strong girl she will defo deal with its just like she is confused it will come to an end after their confrontation!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#58
A/N

I see many thinking this story is turning into darkest shade of black, I guess it's my fault I shouldn't have over done the heated argument all those words that are scaring you off were just added for emphasis and Kabir is just in for some drama that's it! I think many things will get clear as you read next part!

Since people are uncomfortable with over-heated things, I kept it mild trust me this is the softest version I could manage previous updates were just written keeping the tempting theme of this series in mind! I will write all remaining updates mild with least swearing or however you want just let me know:) I wanted to keep it heated and I guess not being able to do so has affected the quality of the update! You will know it yourself!

Scroll down for update

Edited by -Fleurdelice- - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#60
wow amazing updates loved all 3 parts thank you for pm.

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