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Posted: 9 years ago
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Guess what my verbal diarrhoea is at its peak now. I dunno if it's a good news or bad news for you but I m again going to extend this FS for one more update. I m surely loving my job to torture you guys 🤣 🤣
Hopefully you guys will enjoy this chappy too. 😊
And if you don't then don't waste your veggies and scandals on me as I m already running 🤣 🤣

No proof reading done I m too lazy for the task 🤣

SHOT 4B


Till the time zoya reached the parking lot asad has already left. She mentally thanked her stars that she had brought her bag with herself which had her car keys. She immediately ignited her car and left from there trying to follow asad. From far away she could see his car , she too sped her car to match his speed. She was constantly trying to call him while driving but she couldn't reach him as he has switched off his mobile. Finally giving up she decided to follow him and when they'll reach the patient's home she'll surprise him and also she'd meet his secret patient. Little did she know that she herself is going to get the worst surprise of her life.

She was shocked when she saw his car turning towards a deserted area she was wondering what kind of sane person chose to live in such a place but she shrugged the thought thinking maybe it's just some kind of shortcut or something. She was mentally cursing asad and his patient. His patient for choosing such an area to live and asad for agreeing to visit him here every week has he gone insane or lost his mind while agreeing if she would have been there she'd have never let him to agree to this. But how could she would have been there she sighed and saw that asad's car was entering an abandoned building probably an abandoned factory.

" Who the hell lives in an abandoned factory is this patient some kind of ghost???? What the hell ghost seriously...what rubbish. Is asad hiding something from me why the hell is he here does he comes here every week ????" These thoughts were running in her mind till now she was sure that he hasn't came to meet any patient not atleast today about other days she had no idea. Sure enough he was hiding something from her what if he's in some kind of trouble. With her mind clouded with these thoughts she parked her car outside the building where no one could notice and somehow went inside the building.

As she entered the building she had no idea where to go. The building looked completely unused there was no sign of anyone inside it she was hell worried now where was asad if he wasn't here then where was he. Her chain of thoughts were broken by a gunshot that came from beneath the ground she was standing, she literally jumped hearing that. To say she was scared would be an understatement she needed to see asad NOW to make sure he was fine. He heart was beating almost ten times faster than usual she was sweating profusely. What if the gunshot was meant for. ... She didn't want to complete that thought it wasn't possible asad has never done anything wrong to anyone no one can harm him. He was fine he has to be fine she somehow consoled her heart but it can't be calmed until it will see asad all safe and sound. She somehow managed to gain some courage and opened the secret passage with a hope that she doesn't lands herself in some trouble and not to see asad here. She climbed down the ladder without making any noise or else she was sure she will be their next target if they find her here but she has to do this for asad. She tiptoed towards the closed door from where some noises were coming from far she couldn't hear that clearly but she figured out someone was shouting she felt like she knew that voice but couldn't figure out whose voice was that. But as she neared the door she was shocked beyond anything that voice belonged to asad. To say she was scared would be an understatement what asad was doing with these people here why was he shouting has he gone mad what if they hurt him... with these thoughts in mind she decided to check what's going on inside that room. She opened the door but just a bit so that no one could notice her and she could hear everything. She peeped inside the door and what she saw and heard shocked her to core she felt like someone has snatched the ground beneath her feet. She saw that asad was holding a gun and was shouting at gaffur.

"Abbu why the hell did you shot him he was our man"

" No asad he was not our man he was secretly working for police thanks to allah he hadn't seen our faces till now or else we could have landed in a big trouble "

" what? ? ? ? That b*****d was working for police and we had no idea. Abbu we need to find out how much information he gave them or we need to change our plan"

" No we don't have to do that I had doubted him from the moment he joined us he didn't had much idea about our mission but today he saw it was important to kill him"

" If I had even a bit of idea about this I would have killed him even before "

She stumbled on the ground this can't be true she must be dreaming her asad can't be a murder this was a dream worst dream of her life she thought she would wake up anytime on her bed and asad would be there by her side and will tell her that she was dreaming. Yeah it's a dream this can't be true. She was pinching herself and was waiting to wake up so that everything this place these people this man who resembles asad every damn thing will disappear but it didn't happened. Tears were constantly streaming out of her eyes this can't be true she doesn't want to accept it as a truth. This man is not asad he just looks like him but he's not asad. Her asad can never even think of hurting anyone let alone killing someone but this man he was a criminal he was openly asking about killing someone. This day was supposed to be the best day of her life today she got to know that she was carrying asad and her child their symbol of love again it can't end like this. She didn't wanted to believe this.

She somehow gathered some courage to pick herself from ground and stand on her feet. If this is truth she has to face it maybe things aren't like they seem to be she'll talk to asad and she was sure there must be some reason behind this asad would explain her everything and things will be perfect again. She was about to open the door but what she heard next stopped her from doing so and broke her even more than she already was.

"Abbu just one week and this city will be destroyed these people will pay for whatever me and zoya have faced till now. 2 years back she fell lifeless in my arms but still that day haunts me every day every minute. My hands were coloured with her blood. Her heartbeats were so slow I was feeling like my own heart beats are going to stop. But still her heart was beating that kept me alive. Only I know how I spent these two years without her, she was with me still so far from me. I was dying every minute while that man was living like nothing has happened and these people I still remember how they killed my mother they would have killed zoya too what was their fault. What was my mother's fault that she was a Muslim or that she didn't knew about my father that he was terrorist. But You know what abbu I don't think my father was wrong these people need to be punished for their deeds. My zoya was innocent she wasn't a Muslim either but they didn't spared her too just cuz she wanted to save my mom and me. They need to pay for everything they have done. "

" You're right asad they need to pay for everything every damn thing and we will make them pay. Together. Just one week and this city will be destroyed. After one week they are going to held an event in XYZ hotel. Almost half of people of this city are going to gather there along with Saahil tripathi and his men. We can't get a better chance than this for our mission. No one should be left alive. "

" No one will abbu trust me "

He gave asad a warm smile and kept a hand on his shoulder.

" So what are you going to do after everything is over. I m sure you must have planned something "

" Yes I will take zoya far away from here to a place where there will be no lies no dark secrets just us and our love. I will start a fresh with her. You will come to meet us na"

" No asad I won't as promised we won't meet each other again. You need to start a fresh a fresh and I don't think if we'll meet each other then it would be good for your new life. "

On the other hand zoya felt as her all dreams have shattered. Her perfect world came crashing down in front of her eyes. She was breathing heavily. This is not asad. This man can't be asad. She again stumbled on the ground near the door due to which the door fell open. This caught everyone's attention they all pointed their guns in her direction except asad and gaffur. They both were shocked to see zoya there and with her expression it was clear that she knew everything. Asad's worst dreams have came true zoya came to know about his dark secret and with her eyes he could figure out she was hating him. Gaffur quickly signalled his men to drop their guns. On the other hand asad quickly ran towards zoya and sat in front of her.

"Zoya I can explain" he softly whispered to her and was going to held her shoulder but she jerked her hands and shifted a bit away from him completely scared from him.

"Who are you?"
He too moved towards her and tried to cup her face. But she again shifted away from him. His heart clenched at the sight his zoya was scared of him.

"Zoya it's me asad... your asad."

" No you're not you can't be my asad you're a terrorist a murderer my asad can never think of hurting someone let alone killing "

" Zoya I can explain "

"there's nothing to explain "

Saying so she got up and ran away from there with asad following her all the while calling her to stop her.

Here on the other side inside that room gaffur was shocked with whatever happened just now. He was scared what if asad changes his mind cuz of zoya he knows zoya can make him do that. Zoya has seen all of them she knows about their plans what if she inform the police about their plans. A tap on his shoulders broke his chain of thoughts.

" huh. ... amad ..what happened "

"What happened you're asking me that where are you so lost... here that girl came to know about us and you are lost in your thoughts "

" I know about that amad"

"Then how can you be so calm commander we need to kill that girl we can't risk our mission "

" No we can't do that till the time asad is alive he won't even let us touch her. He loves her way too much to let us hurt her."

"Then what about our mission commander "

"Everything will go on as we have planned I m sure he'll handle everything we have to trust him "

"What if he couldn't? "

" Then we'll have to kill both of them "

" What??? "

" We won't have any choice amad we'll have to do this for sake of our mission. You have no idea amad , zoya is an obsession for asad she's like his lifeline he can cross every limits for her. If we want to kill her then we'll have to kill asad first."

"But he's our leader commander"

" our mission is more important than him amad. I m going to their house to check what's going on. If things went out of control then we'll have to kill them then and there. You guys follow me with another car and when you'll reach there then wait for my call. You guys will come inside only if I ask you to do so or else just get back "

" okay commander "

Zoya ran to her car and quickly left from there. Asad too started following her in his car. They both reached their home asad tried to talk to her but she didn't heard him and ran from there. She was going to lock the door as she entered the home but in the mean time asad too reached there and prevented her from doing so.
She attempted to increase the distance between them by turning around only to crash hard into his chest. He grabbed onto her wrist, pulling her back and locked her hands around her waist, he pinned her against the wall.

"Stop running away from me zoya it hurts. ... It hurts a lot "
She tried to push him with all her might but failed miserably.

" stop doing that zoya you know you can't "

"Stay away from me"

"Zoya plz don't say that let me explain everything to you
Zoya I love you I can't stay away from you "

"Don't dare to say that only my asad has the right to say that to me you... you're someone else "

"Zoya look at me I m asad your asad" he shouted to make her face the reality. More fresh tears started falling from her eyes as reality hit her hard. It was asad this man was asad her asad. What has he done to himself? He has become what he hated most and reason was her she hated herself for that. She stopped struggling in his arms, her knees gave up it was his hold on her that was supporting her. He cupped her face with on hand and other still supporting her.

"Zoya plz don't cry I can't see you like that plz it hurts me stop crying zoya plz."

" What about the hurt you're causing me asad do you have any idea how much it hurts me to see what you have become "

" I m sorry zoya but I had to do this for your sake or else I would have lost you. "

"You have already lost me asad it would been better if I would died that day atleast I didn't had to face this "

"Zoya don't say anything like that I would die if anything happens to you and please don't hate me. I had to do this to save you "

"That's the problem na asad I can't hate even if I want to but I can't even forget everthing "

" I had no choice "

" Then kill me asad plz. I can't bear this pain. Being the reason of deaths of so many people will hurt me more than my death set me free asad I beg you "

"Plz zoya you know I will kill myself from doing anything like that "

" Then leave this leave these people your mission your abbu and start a fresh with me with our child. ... yes asad you're going to be a father again. Not for me then for him don't make him face what you have faced. Spare those people don't kill them."

"We... We are going to be parents again. ... This is the best news you have given me zoya till you have no idea how happy I am but its too late zoya I can't leave them I won't do this "

She somehow freed her hands from his grip and cupped his face with both her palms

"Asad look at me asad it's never too late we can start a fresh with our child. As you said we'll go far away from here from everyone. Where there'll be no one but just me and our symbol of love. I promise asad I'll forget everthing. Everything will be back to normal again just like before but with no secrets. "

"We'll start a fresh zoya but only after my work is done here. I will not spare these people zoya. I m sorry but I have to accomplish my mission. " he said moving away from her

" Asad. .." She gasped
"B...but why you said you did this to save me now I m saved. Asad let's just run far away from these people where they can never find us let's leave all this behind i promise they'll never come to know about us and even if they do we'll handle that together"

"Its true that I did this to save but there was an another reason too. I wanted my revenge. ... from your from these people"

She stumbled on the ground her all hopes were crashing down again. Asad did this for his revenge. Was his revenge more important than her and their child.

"Is your revenge more important to you than me and our child that you can't leave it even for our sake"

" No not at all zoya but I can't help it zoya it's important for our future. I can't forget everything and move on just like that zoya. I can't forget the way they killed my mother and our baby. I can't forget that cuz of them I had to spend 2 years of my life without. How can I forget the pain that I have felt in these 2 years zoya do you know what I went through these years do you have any idea. " he said while grabbing her arms.

" No zoya you have not . Every day I used to wake up with a hope that you will wake up and every night I had to sleep by killing that hope. Do you know what I felt when these doctors used to that I should give up on you and kill you with my own hands. My mom what was her fault why was she punished. Just cuz she was my dad's wife she was punished to death. And our baby what was it's fault. It didn't even got the chance to see this world. And you why were you punished zoya what was your fault. You love me was that your fault, you were going to be mother of my baby was that your fault. No we all were punished for something we weren't even involved in then they all deserve to be punished when they are at fault. They need to be punished for their deeds zoya and no one not even you can stop me from doing so. They will have to pay for each and every tear of yours and every pain of ours. "

"Asad you have changed you have changed a lot. "

" I had to . But that doesn't change that I love you more than anything after this is over we'll start a fresh zoya just you me and our baby. "

"You want me to start a new life over the lives ofthose thousands of people. Disgusting asad your revenge has blinded you "

"No matter how much you are angry on me but I know you won't hate me"

"Yes you're right I can't hate you but that doesn't mean I would let you go on a wrong a path. Asad please I beg you for my sake for our baby's sake don't do this. They're innocent don't kill them "

" innocent " he chuckled
"Don't u think that word I so wrong for these people zoya . I have told you I won't stop I have to do this for us"

"Then I m sorry asad you have left me no choice "

She pushed him with all her might and freed herself from his grip. He stumbled backwards but he saw that zoya has opened the door was running from there. He took ran behind her and grabbed her arms.

"Where the hell do you think you were going zoya "

"Police station if I can't stop you then they but I won't let kill so many. I won't let my asad to be a terrorist. "

" And you thought I would let you do that then you have highly mistaken "

He dragged her inside the house and again locked the doors.

"You won't get anything by killing those people asad. Instead it will make you a murderer of so many people why are you punishing them for my father's deeds. Don't punish them asad please. Your revenge will destroy us some day you will lose your everything cuz of this revenge of yours "

" You're wrong zoya it will give me a satisfaction for which I have longed these 2 years I thought I won't need this but you have left me no choice. I can't see you like this zoya I can't let this truth ruin our happiness of being parents. I m sorry but I had to do this "

"Wh...what do you mean?"

"I hope you'll forgive me zoya "

Saying so he moved towards her and again grabbed her forcefully and took out an injection from his pocket.
She looked at him hurtful eyes, the same eyes which once were filled with love and only love for him were now filled with betrayal and hurt.

He had held her close with her hands locked behind her and her body pressed between him and the wall, jst a day before this kind of proximity used to give shiver down her spine but it felt nothing but disgusting.

" Why are you doing this asad please don't do this to me I beg u this revenge will destroy us asad leave this please for me "

" I m sorry zoya but this revenge is only ultimatum in my life apart from loving u and how can i forget everthing zoya your tears your humiliation those insults no matter how much u try to hide it from me but i have seen that . You can forgive them but i can't they will have to pay the price of your tears. I m sorry zoya i have to do this for us i can't see that hatred in your eyes that too for me.

Please forgive me zoya "

With that last word he injected the venom in her hand . She again looked at him with hurtful eyes and fell lifeless in his arms .

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Posted: 9 years ago
#82
Mind blowing update yaar
Asad killed zoya n his baby
Gafur is too much selfish
PLZ update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#83
OMG what a shocking update... he gave poison to her...thank you for the pm...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#84
Heartbreaking update
Felt really sad for zoya
Can't even imagine what she must have gone through
But still having a hope that asad would see the right path in time and be spared from a lifetime of guilt
Hoping for the best
Please continue soon
Will be waiting impatiently
Thanks for the pm 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#85
Wow that was wonderful
Finally zoya came to know about everything
Gaffur is so mean he is ready to kill both
Asad is so blinded by revenge that he can't see what's right and wrong for them
Hope zoya will not have same fate as dilshaad
Thanks for pm
Update soon
Waiting very impatiently to read more

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Posted: 9 years ago
#86
thanks fr the pm dear...awesome update.,worth waiting👏
the way u tailored the story is perfect ,where the feelings of asya makes me feel so connected to them like i can see them infront of myself...
esp i luv the way u desc asad's obsess...so beautiful nd intense
LUVD the update and read it again nd again...❤️
honestly, i was impressed just on the prologue of this story soo much earlier nd nw this story is one of my fav and will remain too...perfect junooniyat story with sooo perfect title
and i dont mind FS or FF, bz its lottery fr the readers dear 😉 bt u hav to update fast..
waiting impatiently to knw what'll happen nxt??...update sooonish
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Posted: 9 years ago
#87
really loved it yaar
awesome
and thnx fr the pm
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#88
Nice update
First of all, thanks for the spoiler
I don't want him to take law in his hands. There is a proper way for everything. Zoya heard the convo & was shocked. Like Asad Zoya talk. He can't forgive them who hurt them. Waiting to see how the story unfolds. Update soon plz. Thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#89
Nice update
So.zoya learns the truth
Her world is shattered
Asad tries to talk her down
But she is determined
So he cant forget and want his revenge
So he injects her
Will she be able to forgive him for tht
Oh gqffur is so heartless
Cant wait for the other part
Cont
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Posted: 9 years ago
#90
Hello everyone I hope you guys remember me. I know this time I am hell late in giving updates and I am extremely sorry for that. But I had my reasons I was having exams due to which I couldn't write any updates but now since they're over i'll update asap I promise. Once again I m so sorry guys

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