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Posted: 9 years ago
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but zoya begin very harsh... taking away her identity...

is like she transform like the asad...



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Posted: 9 years ago
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my pov...

she should not lose herself.. to become though

to much bitterness.. in her...

she look dark...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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let see how asad going to do...

with zoya .. and matt

can he win her... or give up 😆

cause both look scary... 😆

continue soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Linsie


but zoya begin very harsh... taking away her identity...

is like she transform like the asad...




Haven't we watched d heroes in many shows being all arrogant, rude, ruthless doing so many nasty things to people including d heroine n they r excused wid their bad past? But heroines r always expected to be bubbly, cheerful n innocent however bad her past is. It does not always happens in real life. Not all men wid bad pasts turns out to be arrogant n not all women wid bad pasts r stiil bubbly. She don't want anyone to take advantage of her goodness again after being taken for granted so much by Asad.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Linsie

my pov...

she should not lose herself.. to become though

to much bitterness.. in her...

she look dark...


As I replied in ur previous comment, heroes r shown in many shows like dis but r accepted but heroines r not. I did not liked Zoya much due to her over-positiveness. Positivity in excess can only harm oneself. Like Asad in d past, Zoya is only good wid her family n friends. I don't think she is dark cuz she is not harming anyone like slapping, manhandling or defaming them by spoiling their dignity. Since u r elder to me, u may know dat there comes a point wen we think why we always forgave dis man who never trusted me n always tuk me for granted n did he really loved cuz if he loved me then he wud have never hurt me like he always did? Dat time, we realize dat dis relationship is not good for me.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Linsie



let see how asad going to do...

with zoya .. and matt

can he win her... or give up 😆

cause both look scary... 😆

continue soon...


Even if Asad has really changed Zoya will not believe him wateva he says cuz in d past weneva she thought he has changed he always became worse. Like after Mangalpur came d slap or after Tanveer exit came d trading thing to Ayaan for Nikhat. As I replied in Anopama's comment, ZOya had no one to advise her to leave d relationship where she is always but now Matt is making sure dat no one hurts Zoya. We all crave for such a friend in our bad times who will always stand by us. He will realize dat it will be hard to win her dis time like he always did wid 1 guilty look, 1 sorry n 2 tears. He has to realize how he actually never realized d depth of his mistakes dat he only brushed it off wid just 1 sorry. Many times, he did not apologized to Zoya at all. Zoya can't give in to him like her abnormal self earlier as she realized dat its not good to forgive someone so easily only to be hurt again n taken for granted. Zoya n Matt r supposed to take Asad's class dis time to show him how it feels to be treated badly in another country n how everyone around him felt bad due to his arrogance.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: angel_juhi04


Haven't we watched d heroes in many shows being all arrogant, rude, ruthless doing so many nasty things to people including d heroine n they r excused wid their bad past? But heroines r always expected to be bubbly, cheerful n innocent however bad her past is. It does not always happens in real life. Not all men wid bad pasts turns out to be arrogant n not all women wid bad pasts r stiil bubbly. She don't want anyone to take advantage of her goodness again after being taken for granted so much by Asad.



and she judging them.. just like asad did... on her no difference there..
she can be strict but not to bitter.. you know like she hard look but she does care..

that is the problem with we human... generally
when something happen we are very easy to predict...
we swing according to that problem.. then standing firm not loosing ourself

the 1 think i like about your story... natural link more to realty as we think and react..
here i find she went little bitter with herself..

My POV dont get angry 😆 😆 😆 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: angel_juhi04


As I replied in ur previous comment, heroes r shown in many shows like dis but r accepted but heroines r not. I did not liked Zoya much due to her over-positiveness. Positivity in excess can only harm oneself. Like Asad in d past, Zoya is only good wid her family n friends. I don't think she is dark cuz she is not harming anyone like slapping, manhandling or defaming them by spoiling their dignity. Since u r elder to me, u may know dat there comes a point wen we think why we always forgave dis man who never trusted me n always tuk me for granted n did he really loved cuz if he loved me then he wud have never hurt me like he always did? Dat time, we realize dat dis relationship is not good for me.



yes i do agree i dont like men like asad (in the past) 😆😆😆
i dont think i can give me 2nd chance...

but i was saying zoya generally ... that's all dear..

thanks for explaining to me your POV 😃

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