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Posted: 9 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: cutie15

Kudos to you
Awesome job there
Thank u😊

I agree with all your thoughts
Any girl who is so modern and have studied in New york will definitely know how to respect herself and her dignity
I hated the fact that zoya never ever fought with asad and gave him a piece of mind
He insulted her parents, he insulted her and in todays world no women can tolerate it
Someone said in dis forum dat she is a doctor n wid her study she finds Zoya abnormal. Even in some old movies d heroines had self-respect but dis story was of 2012 still Zoya had none. I purposely showed Zoya repeatedly blaming Dilshad calling her 'ur ammi' to Asad n wen he got angry on always blaming his ammi Zoya showed him d mirror on wat he did. Asad sud luk at his mistakes before pointing at others qki khud pe padi to bahot bura lagta hai. Asad needed a harsh reality check 4m Zoya.

Moreover it is necessary to know a person deeply before getting married
Dats why I wrote NGO n red flag things. Its said dat a woman sud watch out red flags before getn married to a man but Zoya got so many red flags still she fell for him just by seeing his six-packs n dat he always saved her even though he was d one cuz of whom she fell in trouble. I did not like Zoya called a musibat magnet as its not her fault she fell into trouble in dis big bad world wid most of d time Asad only being d reason of it. If Asad n Zoya got married, she wud have continued to be hurt by him for some or other reason n he wud have taken really a very long time in confessing his love n in dat process she have been hurt many times. And he wud have listened always to his ammi, Najma n even Tanveer but not Zoya. If Zoya was in real, she wud have gone into severe depression.

Privacy is yet another important factor
One should be able to decide on their own what they should be wearing and can go snywhere they want
All these factors were always denied by asad and zoya despite of being strong never questioned them
Asad was ridiculous in saying not to stay out after 7pm. Wat if Najma wud have been a working woman? Wat if 2mrw she is married n don't know abt simple things abt how world works? Any person will take advantage of her naivety. Wen I was in 10th aged 14-15, my tuition classes in vacation wud be till 8:30pm or 8:45 n I wud reach home at 8:45pm or 9pm. My parents were not at all worried for me as I wud be wid my friends or even if I wud be alone d road was always wid people so I cud manage. But dis man had problem wid even 7pm. Asad was really intolerable in terms of clothes even teln Najma not to befriend girls who wears modern clothes as if salwarwali sabhi ladkiyan acchhi hoti hai. Even Dilshad had no problems wid modern clothes then why only him being a generation ahead of her? I was annoyed at Dilshad for not teln him ever to shut up n not interfere wid others personal choice. Asad being Dilshad's son turned so much regressive. Zoya was really shown dumb to a greater extent. Any other girl wud have left d house much longer ago.

Awesome os and very well written 👏
Thank u😊
Sry got carried away 😳
No, I liked ur points. Glad u understood wat I really wanted to show.

Edited by angel_juhi04 - 9 years ago

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Posted: 9 years ago

#32

I agree wuth ur point that if zoya was in real she would have gone into depression
And in real being from america she would have not tolerated all this
They are strong headed women who know how to fight for themselves
Thank you for this os
It kinda gives peace

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Posted: 9 years ago

#33

Teaser 1:

Asad was shocked dat d owner of Green Apple online shopping company is none other than Zoya. He understood dat ZZF actually stands for Zoya Zainab Farooqui. He was happy to see her 2 years after she left his house. He was shocked to see a well-built man of 6'3" height hugging her for a long time. He was jealous at 1st but then recalled how he used to hug Tanveer in front of her not realizing dat Zoya is getn hurt. Zoya was shocked n not pleased to see Asad. She did not knew dat he was d one wid whom she had a meeting.

"U r 5 minutes late for d meeting," said Zoya firmly.

"Zoya, who is dis man hugging u?" asked Asad.

"U have not changed still ha? Is it wrong wen 2 friends of opposite gender hug? Haven't u ever hugged ur female childhood friend Tanveer or wat? U even hugged her publicly during bus accident. I wonder how wud u have reacted if ur girlfriend or wife was an actress n she had to do romantic scenes wid several male actors? asked Zoya rudely.

Asad was shocked wid her rudeness.

"Zoya, its not like dis. I don't have any problem wid 2 friends of opposite gender hugging. I have changed, Zoya. I only wanted to know who he is," replied Asad.

"I will see how much u have changed. As for ur question, I will let u know who he is. Meet my friend, Matt. I mean Matthew Anderson. We r friends 4m d time we were in 1st grade dat means we r friends 4m 20 years. I hope u got ur answers now. He runs a business of energy drinks, protein shakes, vitamin supplements n other things. I Lets proceed wid our meeting as u already wasted a lot of time," replied Zoya arrogantly.

Asad was shocked wid her way of speaking. He somewhere knew dat he will not be welcomed warmly by her. He heard a lot abt ZZF being arrogant n short-tempered who sud do not tolerate any nonsense. He recalled being himself like dat till 2 years ago which wud scare n even hurt his employees but after Zoya left his house he changed a lot.

"Zoya, main yahi rehta hu taaki tuje ise face karne me problem na ho," said Matt.

"So sweet of u, Matt," said Zoya.

"How does he knows hindi?" asked Asad shockingly.

"He learnt hindi due to some Indian friends including me. Even dat Elena knew hindi na whose deal u broke," replied Zoya.

Asad had to deal wid not only Zoya but also wid her friend Matt.

Edited by angel_juhi04 - 9 years ago

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ChipChipiBhaalu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: cutie15
I agree wuth ur point that if zoya was in real she would have gone into depression
And in real being from america she would have not tolerated all this
They are strong headed women who know how to fight for themselves
Thank you for this os
It kinda gives peace

There was an old OS where Zoya commits suicide after 7 years of her marriage as Asad never confessed to her n avoided her how much ever she tried to be nice to him. Zoya was also insulted by society women for not providing a child in these years accusing her of being infertile n suggesting Asad to have a 2nd wife to get a son. Asad never stood up for her humiliations wen he was d main reason for it. Wen Zoya died, Zoya's soul saw Asad crying on d bed touching her side of d bed teln her to come back while Zoya smiles at dat(knowing dat he loved her) n leaves for heaven. There was another OS where Zoya tells Asad dat he is fit for any woman wen he does not believes her seeing Tanveer awake in d hospital after d fire incident. There were more anti-AsYa OSes most of which I have not read or forgot d story. Yes, Zoya wud have gone into depression but Gul's Zoya wud only be a clown trying always to gain Asad's attention instead of thinking whether she did right in marrying him.

Edited by angel_juhi04 - 9 years ago