AsYa(KaBhi) TS - Mere Mukaddar ka khel *last part * 11 May *COMPLETED*

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Sumi Roy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#61

Anothr beautiful updt.
I dnt knw anythng abt muslim culture,bt i like some of it & respect it.
Sure zoya's parents cming with rishta.hope so.
Tht was so well written whn asya was stuck.
Thnks 4 pm.cntu soon

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Mayur Chan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: Persiko
Haha badi achi choice hai...
Yep writer hone ke kayi faide hai 😉...
Seekhe ga India tabhi toh badhega India 😆

haa..yeh bhi sahi hai.

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Mayur Chan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#63

Very good and well explained part Afra...

Sooo ASYA recognized eachother...but yeh dono toh kuch zyada hee serious type log hai...taking it into this concept of the story then they were very good...

Dono mummies ke dimaag mein kuch chal raha hai...😆

Dekhte hai aagey kya hota hai..

Continue soonish..😊

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jasmine ansari

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Posted: 9 years ago

#64

Awsm part
Luvd it
To gud superb one
Cont soon
Thnx for d pm
T.c

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KeyaHira2

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Posted: 9 years ago

#65

OMG

Im so happy

Cant wait for the next part

😃

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Urvi Saini

@urvisaini

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Posted: 9 years ago

#66

Nice chapter

Asad and zoya helped each other and as a gentleman Asad deviated zoya s mind and dropped her safely to her home...

But the star moment was when Asad tells the truth behind burning his hand to zoya

That was the best part of this story so far

Loved it

Thanks for the pm

Continue soon

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jas91

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Posted: 9 years ago

#67

I m here
Affu wonderful part
but serious type sa lga is baar thoda khair
as expected Asad came & saved Zoya
that house part wid prayers was very well written
meko bhi janna tha yeh burning candle ka kya meaning hai good Zoya asked
ending main Gaffur is coming I guess mango Asad ka rishta
but it was so funny d way Asad saying Ammi is bare main aap baat mat karna 😆 😆
it was really good Affu 🤗 Hope everything is fine at ur end...Take care bache 😃

PS- & tera sig is so mast 😆 😆

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Jayasree

@jayasree.rao

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Posted: 9 years ago

#68

A beautifully written TS.

Loved both the parts. Wish to read the next part.

Please update. Can't wait.

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Amin21Khpulwak

@Amin21Khpulwak

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Posted: 9 years ago

#69

Very very beautifully written yaar👏

Really wonderful update

Asad burning his finger scene was awesome yaar

Just perfect👏

Eagerly waiting for next update 😊

And do update MTZH 😉

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Asif

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Posted: 9 years ago

#70

Awesome update
Loved it
Zoya was shocked first to see his actions & even more surprised by his answer. He left her to her home safely. Liked the mothers talk to respective kids. Now Zoya family coming to asad house. Asad told his mother not to talk abt alliance. Waiting for next update soon. Thanks for pm